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Thread: Disasterous Animosity.

  1. April 20th, 2006, 11:40 PM #1
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    Disasterous Animosity.

    I felt like reppin mself and cru...


    Lines blessed many lives, peace as soon as they heard it.
    Rhymes as pure as gold, every single aspect is perfect.
    My word is Sick...so fuck you if your alergic.
    Decapitate your head and stick you depper than a cervix..

    I'll melt ya face off wit a bucket of acid-sulfuric
    Leave ya skin so FUCKED UP not even Proactive would cure it...
    ..Pride buckles, I hit spirits with Words of Mass Destruction
    ..5 knuckles break the defence and smash ya cru like pumpkins
    I RAMPAGE, and leave a cavity n' ya DAMN FACE
    Knock you dazed and dizzy so it's hard to fuckin stand straight

    Come at me wit that weak stuff...I'll split ya shit in half, wuss
    I'm reppin ANIMOSITY, my squad be...DISASTEROUS
    Paragraph Mastas...demise to cru's who try to pass us
    ...We hunt in packs like wolves and bruise fools who dare attack us


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  2. April 21st, 2006, 02:13 AM #2
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    decent shit here, only complaint is it looked like u forced a few multi's in other then that tho it was a coo read
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  3. April 21st, 2006, 02:24 AM #3
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    uh....nice shit man..

    it was good nice words and punches.
    but one thing?!
    WHERE THE FUCK IS ME AND DVS?!
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  4. April 21st, 2006, 09:57 AM #4
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    haha i told yall to get in but nobody replied...u can still add ya verse.
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  5. April 21st, 2006, 02:22 PM #5
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    damn homie this was pretty tight but way too short for liking
    topic was interesting and pretty different..ya rhymes were good
    floww was tight and smooth....strucutre was nice...
    i enjoyed reading this...overall this is like a 8/10..keep it up..peace
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  6. April 21st, 2006, 02:51 PM #6
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    It was iight. don't really like this type of material. good work though. think your structure could have been better. work on the way you present it. seemed like some of the lines were stretched. just work on it a little and you could be better. you have talent though. keep at it.
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  7. April 21st, 2006, 09:58 PM #7
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    up for feed...
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  8. April 21st, 2006, 10:11 PM #8
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    good job chozn1 nice flow and rhymescheme..
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    By 2 am, I was diggin her out
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  9. April 22nd, 2006, 07:00 PM #9
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  10. April 22nd, 2006, 07:04 PM #10
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    Lines blessed many lives, peace as soon as they heard it.
    Rhymes as pure as gold, every single aspect is perfect.
    My word is Sick...so fuck you if your alergic.
    Decapitate your head and stick you depper than a cervix..
    i like that thats dope

    structre was ok but it sounded a bit awkword...u started off normally like poetry
    then u became doin other shit and it got mixed up in the hole complexc..u get me

    but overall dope
    The Rise And Fall Will Be My Death
    So As I Gasp For My Last Breath
    Put the Gage To My Chest
    i Gulp a Heep of Salayva In Distess
    Sound Of The Gun Cocked Wat's Next
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    Bullet Incarnates His Soul
    Burinin His Skin His Heart Turned Cold
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    So Dont Use Gunz or Knives
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  11. April 22nd, 2006, 09:00 PM #11
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    tnx...rise
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  12. April 23rd, 2006, 11:51 PM #12
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  13. April 24th, 2006, 09:19 PM #13
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    last up....make it a good one for me!!
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  14. April 24th, 2006, 10:59 PM #14
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    that was some ill shit. For real I havent seen any real hip hop shit like that on here in awhile cousin. Loved your rhymes and how you through those multi's together, you really know how ta construct a good verse. I'll be lookin' for more of your shit fam so keep dropin'
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  15. April 24th, 2006, 11:23 PM #15
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    ok this was short but good i was really feelin the title concept was good..... vocab was str8 could've been stronger.... overall nice piece was really feelin it
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