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Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
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my bad on such a short verse but i wont be around much, so match
still bustin' rust
kids rubish, and pt'll leave only debris to rubble through
so i put this bitch on lease, cause im about to wreck a VW
no need for trouble dude, & i already got a loss to a loser
so believe imma work this nigga
..until he turns office computer
got'll abuse ya, have this fruity ass nigga scared as hell
cause he knows im a sure shot, its apple vs william tell
im killer Well, so flow an ocean since your sick as fuck kid
so i'll have ya lookin pale, when i finally kick the bucket
nuff said, fuckin kid brought beef, i brought a dinner bell
your ancient, & we all have faucets
so aint nobody still diggin Wells
Last edited by pt_got; April 20th, 2006 at 05:47 AM Reason: spellings
you havin trouble in text, well nobodys perfect.....but Damn!
Theres enuff room 4 improvement to give Indians back some land
voters wont waste time pretedin this was close to begin wit
Because giving his confidence a Boost is a waste of minutes
yur livelihood is pending and i'm the alpha male on your set
you a million photoshoots away from even POSING a threat
an is it just me or do PT's standouts dont stand that strong
his only Highlights come in a bottle that he buys from salons
Nevermind some water to wine a miracles you coming in first
lady lucks a virgin so you got no chance at a playoff birth
kids rubish, and pt'll leave only debris to rubble through
so i put this bitch on lease, cause im about to wreck a VW
nuff said, fuckin kid brought beef, i brought a dinner bell
your ancient, & we all have faucets
so aint nobody still diggin Wells
vs.
you havin trouble in text, well nobodys perfect.....but Damn!
Theres enuff room 4 improvement to give Indians back some land
voters wont waste time pretedin this was close to begin wit
Because giving his confidence a Boost is a waste of minutes
besides the above both came with some played-ass concepts, and the rest I didn't quote either due to corniness or weak wording.
Tied in quotables but somebody's gotta get the win, so I'ma say Very Well's rhymes were more basic than pt's and the wells line was prob my fav so
v/pt_got
still bustin' rust
kids rubish, and pt'll leave only debris to rubble through
so i put this bitch on lease, cause im about to wreck a VW
^aiight.
no need for trouble dude, & i already got a loss to a loser
so believe imma work this nigga
..until he turns office computer
^played concept.
got'll abuse ya, have this fruity ass nigga scared as hell
cause he knows im a sure shot, its apple vs william tell
^not really.2 basic.
im killer Well, so flow an ocean since your sick as fuck kid
so i'll have ya lookin pale, when i finally kick the bucket
^good.
nuff said, fuckin kid brought beef, i brought a dinner bell
your ancient, & we all have faucets
so aint nobody still diggin Wells
^Nice.
vs.
you havin trouble in text, well nobodys perfect.....but Damn!
Theres enuff room 4 improvement to give Indians back some land
^Nice opener.
voters wont waste time pretedin this was close to begin wit
Because giving his confidence a Boost is a waste of minutes
^good.I like the BOOST part.
yur livelihood is pending and i'm the alpha male on your set
you a million photoshoots away from even POSING a threat
^played.
an is it just me or do PT's standouts dont stand that strong
his only Highlights come in a bottle that he buys from salons
^okay.I like the concept,just didnt hit hard.
Nevermind some water to wine a miracles you coming in first
lady lucks a virgin so you got no chance at a playoff birth
^Good.closer was aiight..Playoff birth was a nice concept but executed poorly.
Overall/-Very Well got this.P you had 2 nice lines but the rest was blah.nothing that could stand to be quoted.
v/=V.Well
my rhymes were more basic?..when other dude says "cause he knows im a sure shot, its apple vs william tell" ????????
and I had played concepts?..show me one, besides the Posing line cuz i know that ones questionable. other dude uses a Volkswagen punch against me, theres probably only 1 battle that someone didnt use that line against me. and Pale/Bucket lines?...thats not played?
im sorry, im not taking anything away from my opponent, im not knocking his verse..im just trying to expose the hate vote. Like I said before Vask..you was a bitch then, and you a bitch now.
let the voting reconvene...
still bustin' rust
kids rubish, and pt'll leave only debris to rubble through
so i put this bitch on lease, cause im about to wreck a VW
okay nameplay
no need for trouble dude, & i already got a loss to a loser
so believe imma work this nigga
..until he turns office computer
really played
got'll abuse ya, have this fruity ass nigga scared as hell
cause he knows im a sure shot, its apple vs william tell
this concept was kinda stupid to be honest
im killer Well, so flow an ocean since your sick as fuck kid
so i'll have ya lookin pale, when i finally kick the bucket
yea, played
nuff said, fuckin kid brought beef, i brought a dinner bell
your ancient, & we all have faucets
so aint nobody still diggin Wells
nice nameplay, hits hard
vs.
you havin trouble in text, well nobodys perfect.....but Damn!
Theres enuff room 4 improvement to give Indians back some land
flip is okay, but i seen a lot of room for improvement lines
voters wont waste time pretedin this was close to begin wit
Because giving his confidence a Boost is a waste of minutes
pretty cool
yur livelihood is pending and i'm the alpha male on your set
you a million photoshoots away from even POSING a threat
pretty played
an is it just me or do PT's standouts dont stand that strong
his only Highlights come in a bottle that he buys from salons
eh, feel this wasn't executed well
Nevermind some water to wine a miracles you coming in first
lady lucks a virgin so you got no chance at a playoff birth
really played
Close battle, both of you came very played. That includes you too VW, sorry, like I said I've seen some lady luck and room for improvement lines so they didn't do much for me. Your writing is also too basic. Not the concepts necessarily, it's more the way you use them, be more creative. PT, your execution is fine, you just need to think of some better concepts to work with and you'll improve again. The only quotables of this battle was PT's digging wells closer and Very Well's boost line was cool. I'm gonna give this to PT though cuz I felt his closer won him this battle.
Vote - PT
stfu, you're a little newb idiotOriginally Posted by Very Well
I've never done a hate vote in my life. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
LMAO@ thinking I would stoop to doing a hate vote for a little bitch like you. Hate voting is below me, son
in fact, you should be THANKING ME for bothering to vote on your battle
Last edited by Vaskez; April 20th, 2006 at 03:57 PM
still bustin' rust
kids rubish, and pt'll leave only debris to rubble through
so i put this bitch on lease, cause im about to wreck a VW
decent
got'll abuse ya, have this fruity ass nigga scared as hell
cause he knows im a sure shot, its apple vs william tell
lmao
nuff said, fuckin kid brought beef, i brought a dinner bell
your ancient, & we all have faucets
so aint nobody still diggin Wells
nice.
vs
you havin trouble in text, well nobodys perfect.....but Damn!
Theres enuff room 4 improvement to give Indians back some land
lmao.. I've seen 'room for improvement' but not like that... shoulda been used on jace though
voters wont waste time pretedin this was close to begin wit
Because giving his confidence a Boost is a waste of minutes
aiight
v/ Pt_got.. the highlights & posing concepts have been used better.. by me.. so I wasn't feelin em
but all in all, not a bad battle by either.
pz
yea, this some bullshit.
All it takes to get votes around here is it have friends on here that know you on this site. im played, but his william tell line is a killer???...woah.
On the serious side, someone explain to me how making a punchline more "complicated" is better. A punch stings the most when it gets right to the point, fuck all the setting up and forced multi's just to make it look more "creative". I dont see how my concepts were better than his, but he won becuz his was more complicated. Everyones talking about me being played and what not, yet everyones overlooking the pale/bucket line, the office line..wtf?!..shits ass backwards.
Nice drop P., i guess.
Im signing out.
i'm not knockin your verse either but a room for improvment line was played when i joined RB in like 02', but other than that i didnt see any played stuff, but just because it was original doesnt mean it hits well, not sayin my verse wasnt played, but consider i havnt kept up with this shit for a long time, so some of my concepts are still stuck in the time i left, im trying to get back to my old self though
i didnt see your last post, i dont have friends here and if i do then i dont know their alias, but anyone i was cool with before wasnt a d/r. i see where your comin from but its no need in signing out, just build off critisim and get better.
im all for criticism, but no one here gives criticism, just the same lame generic statements "thats played", "bad wording" or whatever else, no one actually elaborates on why they say that shit. I could just run around and drop massive votes using the same 3 reasons and i bet no one would notice.
But yea, criticism would be good, but niggas here dont give criticism.
And i didnt mean u personally had friends to vote for you, i just meant someone like me with under 30 posts, who isnt on this site heavy like that, generally tends to have an uphill battle from the jump against someone who may be alittle more known.
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