Diamonds gone

[LiL-Bones]

Now that your gone, my lifes like a complete vacume
one minute you was there, but my ma anga made me loose you
who ever said love hurts, hit the fucking bulls eye
coz i tried, but i lost when i shouldn't,now i'm in tears
so much fear, i want you back, but the diamonds gone
sold for nothing, the owner didn't notice what was wrong
you had no flaws, perfect a 48 cut, you was the best
like pamilla anderson, two double tits, or a nike vest
didn't see the state i kept you in, should of loved you better
now nothing can get you back, i tried sending a love letter
got no reply, instead got a text saying- trema just die
so i thought it over, and i realised, i shouldn't of lied
all the bullshit i put you through, finally you could see
that i was just a waste of space, your friends told me
now um single, no money no wife no kid and no life
without you, i feel like tensing ma arm,and useing dat knife
i cant survive widout u, can u drive a car wid no petrol?
slit my wrist to feel pain, and then switch 2 a needle an dettol
now my dimonds gone, life seems so plain
nothing to gane, except torture and pain

I should of kept you close to me, never took you easily
maybe if i wasn't a show off, you would still be my lady
had my baby, havent had any love girl lately
its to move on, when your what i want, baby

night time approaches, so does my heart ache and noises
now all i do in my house, is watch tv, an avoid invoices
every couple i see kissing, i blank them out of my view
in baby boy, all that film does, is remind me of you
me and you! thats all i want fuck money fame an wips
whats a big krib, big cars without my chick
now i'm sick, head aches come to me daily
not to say hello, but to remind me of my baby

I should of kept you close to me, never took you easily
maybe if i wasn't a show off, you would still be my lady
had my baby, havent had any love girl lately
its to move on, when your what i want, baby


-Something i just wrote up try to get my feelings out,-
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=286328
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=286247

[The Vortex]

not too bad a drop still..flow and wording was on point..rjymes worked ok..cudda had a lil more complex vocab and multies would a give it a lift i reckon...had some ok emotion of a sort put in .. decent lil story drop ...was an easy on the eye read and str8 forward in most sense. so by all means was a decent drop..nothing much original in the overall concept though


stay poppin

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