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    Not Your Average Weed Song.


    Not Your Average Weed Song


    The hand blown glass craftsmanship glistened under
    ...the midnight back drop
    eyes were a twinkling on that rocket ship destined for
    ..a.post meal snack shop
    a primitive dance w/ fire to a modern twist betwixt
    ...giggles & low hanging mist
    amidst flavored tobacco leaf wrappers well favored by
    ...any street rapper to exist
    pungent pockets reek as funyun coated fingers fondle
    ...the purple package deep
    some just knock it & think, it's no fun get'n loaded
    ...neva know'n we call'n em geeks,
    but I indulge deep, leaving a dull world for the lucid
    ...& vibrant one reached,
    thru the ritual dance of fire & glass, alas manipulation
    ...of flames preached,
    An honest way to cure a nation as pain creeps
    ...taking donation from paying creeps,
    Gently positioned delivery systems engage in mechanical
    ...rage and sustain heat,

    Puritanical waves made by the media's slaves wage
    ... the tyrannical fangs of war,
    deep in Vampire lore explored in smoke filled tombs
    ...where futon politics roar
    & embers leap brilliantly forth from the fiery carcass
    ...of the darkest purple on deck,
    except where vaporized the sweet vapors rise
    ...until eye lids wreck,
    hypnotized by the swift rings blown up in smoke
    ...by the got green,
    coalition of dope, offering nice dreams
    ...through ripe greens,
    cropped from the right seeds & sold despite
    ...the right means,
    A symphony of sinful deeds
    ...my symptoms seem,
    simply green, can I be hated for such simple things?
    ...so I script & scheme,
    never kick and scream but I bowl fresh greens
    ...like soup & sell it bars,

    if you know what I mean? so I Dank my lucky stars
    ...& spank my monkey bar,
    while I wait in this fucken car, for the Jakes of Babylon
    ...to ramble on like Rambo gone,
    rasta'mon, 'one-shot, blood-clot' , ambushed by the
    ...system that won't stop,
    ,oppressing, so I press glocks & smith weapons
    ...like Smith & Wesson,
    to teach lessons & kill tensions over personal beef
    ..& I chief to achieve,
    inner peace and relive the naive notions conceived
    ...in the oceanic depths
    of idiocy, a stupendous stupidity in proximity
    ...of political reach,
    analytical peeks into the healing properties we seek
    ...speaks volumes but sink,
    into obscurity, linked to but a few who think
    ...outside the box,
    & walk off the beaten path worn by the cowardly flock
    ...who raise alarms,

    instead of raising arms, like a razor'd harm
    ...I'm cutting deep,
    into your cheap suits with peek levels & tight groups
    ...my mic roots into mind fruit,
    seeding your thoughts with lines duped
    ...through the nectar,
    of elegant flows, something like talented hoes
    ...I'm known to blow
    multiple O's, and prone to combustible shows
    ...untouchable,
    like fucking with pro's, you better suit up before
    ...you shoot up,
    random assholes, cuz that gun play could be
    ...your last hoe,
    I play words like lame nerds on game shows
    ...& blaze herbs,
    like wild fires where trees grow, amigo
    ...I'm sick w/ the lingo,
    and old school like buying hiphop cass-singles
    ...I blow through,

    on tumble weeds mad buzzing like bumble bees
    ...I roll through more buds,
    than a florist in love with his other green thumb
    ...swapping roses,
    every day of the week, I'm talking a taste so sweet
    ...w/ full body flavor,
    it ain't cheap but then again it ain't chief
    ...unless you savor the leaf,
    so as a favor I keep burning the finest can be
    ...as I cruise through,
    the streets in search of a joint serving up
    ...something to eat,
    while blood shot slits navigate the sunset strip
    ...by the moonlit beams,
    that bounced bright off the glass pipe
    ..and dueled,
    with the lighter as smoke bellowed out
    ... in the cold night,
    the occupants mellowed out, but when in doubt
    ...& you find yourself
    ...............................................roaming about,


    More than likely you're just high w/ the munchies
    kind of like me when I wrote the lines above these



    then passed out...




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    ohh shit that was tight burh. it really aint yo average weed song. cuz it went into vivid detail. most songs just be like " roll a blunt/get sum cunt/get a hoe/blow sum dro" but yours describe the experience. im weed smoka so im really feelin this one.

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    Thank you...

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    well you know that I love your work,and this was no exception...I looked at the title and thought 'OMG not another OM based around weed' then saw your name and knew it would be different.And it was..it really was.You never cease to amaze me with the imagery you create in your OMs,and although this wasn't my favourite peice from you it was still very good.the end literally made me laugh out loud.Your structure was perfect and made the peice easy to read. I really don't know how you come up with your ideas.....nice drop man.

    if you know what I mean? so I Dank my lucky stars
    ...& spank my monkey bar,
    while I wait in this fucken car, for the Jakes of Babylon
    ...to ramble on like Rambo gone,
    rasta'mon, 'one-shot, blood-clot' , ambushed by the
    ...system that won't stop,
    ^my favourite lines......they were very funny.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=285358
    ^leave feed on that please
    Last edited by Witty; April 10th, 2006 at 12:35 PM

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    dam tht shit was hot keep doing ya thing i liked the concept ya used i thought it would of been too long but it kept me entertained so overall hot drop man

    peace

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    Thanks and feed was returned...

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    dopeness ... far above most of these supposed topical-heads

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    Okay, bounce you know i respect you alot for your topical, but i didn't enjoy this read as much as i usually do from you... it just didn't hit me as hard, i prefer your deeper heart felt,grabbing work, but this still was a cut above the rest, especially with the topic you chose, it's boring to write about weed, played and old, but you flipped this into your own unique style, and it came out very well, the imagery in your pieces is always there weather your writting about a war or a porn star!... your vocabulary is extensive, but unlike most it doesn't seem to break your flow, which is unusual, people seem to place big words and to me it destroys their flow, but you seem to have everything on point no matter what you write about or what structure you choose, very well done, and no offense about not liking it as much as some of your other.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Verbal Insanity.
    Okay, bounce you know i respect you alot for your topical, but i didn't enjoy this read as much as i usually do from you... it just didn't hit me as hard, i prefer your deeper heart felt,grabbing work, but this still was a cut above the rest, especially with the topic you chose, it's boring to write about weed, played and old, but you flipped this into your own unique style, and it came out very well, the imagery in your pieces is always there weather your writting about a war or a porn star!... your vocabulary is extensive, but unlike most it doesn't seem to break your flow, which is unusual, people seem to place big words and to me it destroys their flow, but you seem to have everything on point no matter what you write about or what structure you choose, very well done, and no offense about not liking it as much as some of your other.


    I complelty understand bro, this is not anything other than a birage of word play and flow here. I was high when I wrote and I mean very fucken hig and the concept hit me. I wouldn't put this up there with my deep writings, but as far as a rap verse about weed, this should kill them.

    I just wanted those who claim that I don't write Raps (not mentioning names) as in my SS material to understand that just because I can elvate my writing does not mean that I am not an emcee who can drop a typical rap joint.


    That is a sample of what I'm like as an emcee on a mic, or making music with the band. Members might be able to relate to me more if they knew that side of me, most don't know I make music, they think I'm a textcee or soemthing... I just like to write...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bounce
    I complelty understand bro, this is not anything other than a birage of word play and flow here. I was high when I wrote and I mean very fucken hig and the concept hit me. I wouldn't put this up there with my deep writings, but as far as a rap verse about weed, this should kill them.

    I just wanted those who claim that I don't write Raps (not mentioning names) as in my SS material to understand that just because I can elvate my writing does not mean that I am not an emcee who can drop a typical rap joint.


    That is a sample of what I'm like as an emcee on a mic, or making music with the band. Members might be able to relate to me more if they knew that side of me, most don't know I make music, they think I'm a textcee or soemthing... I just like to write...
    Seneka. lol.
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    Bounce..this was an incredible drop...i mean this was really dope with a wicked different,creative,interesting, and cool topic....your imagery was fantastic and that made me keep reading till the last word....the flow was excellent..nice and smooth also helped me keep reading....rhymes were tight...vocab and complexity was definately here and overall i was feelin the drop....you are wicked good man...keep it up..overall i got to say this was like a 9/10...peace~

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    Those lines made me want to get high for a sec. The picture i got from reading was great the words were really poetic, tight shit man.

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    thanks all

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    lmao, this was dope. Summed up a whole lot of nights for me.. & now lets grab Cam' by the balls, and show him that we all do like multi-scheme writing, lol. Anyways, dude, this was a real chance for you to shine, and you did. I just felt as if this was a technical vent, rather than having a complete context to follow. It was euphoric as fuck, had me glued to it, and I ain't even sparked one up today. The style of the piece was very cool to follow, as if a lot of it just fit into place. The way you connected your verses, with mixed internals was dope. You also had a lot of great lines in there.. e.g the Smith and Wesson, which to me was dope. Overall, I just thought it was a mint display of writing. The main purpose was to rhyme, and that you did. Props, Bounce. Have a read of my latest piece when you get the time.

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    Thanks man, and yeah some of those lines are laced, so you might have to re=read a few of them for the word play. I just had fun with this, was nothing thought out conctent wise, just an bastract type of rant.

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