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Thread: You Broke My Heart ft. Laydee Snypah, YungVik, and NYNena

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    You Broke My Heart ft. Laydee Snypah, YungVik, and NYNena

    You Broke My Heart


    Hook: There's no more starts
    cause you broke my heart
    I said,
    There's no more starts
    Cause you broke my heart
    Yeah, you broke my heart
    Yeah you broke my heart

    YungVik:

    You dont what it feels like to have you heart stabbed at like a board from a dart
    We were supposed to be together forever, I guess not, but you broke my heart
    We was cool, we made love, I was feeling you from the start
    Man I was happy, I looked like that Mona Lisa picture from art
    But,
    Through thick, through thin, you always had my back
    We always held it down and aint no couple topped that
    You said we would be together forever and ever
    Now that it's over, we like fuck it whatever
    Like my mama said, you cant judge a book by its cover
    I guess she was wrong, he was just like the others
    You were suppoed to be my middle-school sweetheart, now I know that ain't true
    But life goes on i gotta do what I gotta do
    I gotta go on with my life even with my eyes full of tears
    I'm so fuckin mad, it seems like i've wasted these years
    It was a waste of time tryin to keep us together
    You weren't with me during the stormy nights and cold weather
    You dropped me like hot toast on a cold floor
    It seemed like all was lost, you shut my face in the door
    Now you got me singin that "So Sick" song
    It makes me feel so stupid, like what I'm doing is wrong
    You went and left and didnt care about my emotions
    I thought I could keep this together, started havin crazy thoughts like poisioning you with love potions
    But nothing worked, you were determined to leave anyway
    Started packin ya stuff and said you were leavin that day
    But I knew it wasn't gonna last
    Our relationship's over, its a thing of the past
    I'm sorry it's over, I thought we had somethin goin
    Just writin this makes the sadness in my heart keep growin
    I try to imangine your smiling face walkin through that door eveyday
    I knew it wouldnt happen, but it made me feel better anyway
    But, you know about karma, what goes around comes around
    You had your chance, now it's my turn, im gonna stomp your face in the ground
    Now im doin big things, I can do better than you
    Like I said before, life goes on, I gotta do what I gotta do

    Hook (1time)

    Laydeee Snypah:

    I did so much for you and you cheat, you broke my heart
    and now you say you wanna speak? Fuck, go choke on tarts
    Sittin there so silently, he just smokes the pots
    I'm influnced so violently, i wanna hold the glock
    and fill you! with tears rollin down my cheeks i wanna kill you!
    By the way, why did you?! what was it that i couldnt give you
    So devoted to you, I was obviously dreamin to have happiness
    I thought we'd never departure, but now its a past in us
    I was like a glass of wine, you contravene and im broken
    My piece can be repaired, cah its reality and now its spoken
    Thought our love was true, bway i thought it was essential
    All tthem promises "we made together" and never ment none
    Knowin im your 1st baby mama, and now this crazy drama
    She said i'd be hurt, i speak the truth, now praise me mama?
    Connected by the heart huh? 'memba you said we was siamese
    My clouds want to rain, tears is pain, were ma supposed to hide these?!
    Everywhere i turn memories of you, so much of you that reminds me
    This is a final "My Speech"...where im goin' I doubt you will find me
    *Holds a knife in her palms....................*
    You wont ever be mentioned, right now I feel suicidal
    While im facin' so much tension, you can chew the title

    Hook (2times)

    NYNena:

    A broken heart lays beating in my chest
    The twinge and turmoil doesn't feel the best
    Your ability to lie and cover up the truth
    Love can be so deceving, especially being dumbfounded by youth
    I can't forget the look on your face
    When I found out you lies, and you fucking disgrace
    I gave you a chance to just keep it real
    But you kept up the lies, do you know how pain feels?
    Pain defined emotional distressl; a fundamental feeling that people try to avoid
    Don't know how bad you hurt me, with trust there's a void
    I would return the favor but karma is inevitable
    You cant run from it baby I bet now lying is regrettable
    Emotional as ever could be.....Infidelity?? No!
    Mistaken compatibility brought down by reality
    Tolarance of empty promices
    Astonishment by what the broken promices meant
    Depicting the perfect picture painted
    Not tainted, tarnished, blemished, nor fainted
    Honesty comes out and leaves me shattered in two
    Broken hearted it's evident, what more can i do?

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    Last edited by justrude; March 25th, 2006 at 08:14 AM

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    centre all of it ma'' it looks messed up.. *starts readin ur both verses*
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    Centre it, then place the font into either georgia or tresbucket... then directly after that put one of the verses in italics aswell.

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    shoot, it wont work

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    That's because you put 2 normal centres in...

    The fist centre should look like this- [CENTER]

    Second- [CENTER/]
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    aight, now its working. uppin 4 feed. and laydee i gotta go. we goin back 2 the hospital, so i'll see you later. pz!

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    ay vik wen u gonna get my shizzle done.. don't be 2 long wit it... but chea
    aiite ma' tc.. catch ya later 1lurv
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    uppin this shyt 4 feedback

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    upps !!!!!!!!!! dayum fukers don't sleeep!!!
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    I loved this...there was alot ofemotion in it,all verse were written quite well,you all have talent......I was feeling Laydee's the most as it had more complex rhymes,but all verses were good....keep doing your thang!!!!!!!!!

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    Overall, this was a straight drop. I believe that each Femcee held their own on this drop and overall presented good content that made for an interesting collabo. Seems like all three of yall wanna beat someone up for breakin your hearts. All of yall stayed on topic and reinforced each other's verse pretty well.

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    You weren't with me during the stormy nights and cold weather
    You dropped me like hot toast on a cold floor
    It seemed like all was lost, you shut my face in the door


    ^yeah i liked that.. i felt overall u need 2 titen up da flo sum mo thgo fosho.. and mayb a couple mo complex rhymes here and there to give it a boost....and a bit more sharper vocag wouldnt go amiss..


    this flowed well i reckon-

    I would return the favor but karma is inevitable
    You cant run from it baby I bet now lying is regrettable
    Emotional as ever could be.....Infidelity?? No!
    Mistaken compatibility brought down by reality
    Tolarance of empty promices
    Astonishment by what the broken promices meant
    Depicting the perfect picture painted
    Not tainted, tarnished, blemished, nor fainted


    cool yeah fosho i was feelin that... the rest of the verse wasnt up to par with that^ piece of flow tho..which was best part of this song to me

    good piece overall still

    pz1

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    Quote Originally Posted by Antonio Banderas
    Overall, this was a straight drop. I believe that each Femcee held their own on this drop and overall presented good content that made for an interesting collabo. Seems like all three of yall wanna beat someone up for breakin your hearts. All of yall stayed on topic and reinforced each other's verse pretty well.

    lmfao hell naw i don't wana beat nobody.. mean this wasn't true for me.. yungvik asked 2 collab so i was down.. i only pictured my self in a situation "broken hearted" so i wrote my verse like that.. hell never i wouldn't kill my self over a guy..lol i was just playin around wit thee topic.. 2 keep it original... but chea thanx for tha peep Antonio 1lurv
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    ha my 3 ladies lol

    dope piece i felt nynenas more but all 3 of yall had good flow from all 3 and keep doing yall thing



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