Probably the illest shit ive ever spit

[DimeBag101]

Im a lyrical genius, i can rap words backwards,
you stick dick? we can slap swords afterwards,
LIFE SUCKS!.. I'd put that nine to my face and pull it
but shit, thats just a waste of a bullet
my lifes fucked, ive gone from rags to rags,
shot both my dads...and thats that
I used to get punked around, given bad looks
stepped on by the nerds and slapped by math books
but then, i protested back, yes,.. i tested crack
lost my wife, then went back to molesting cats
im a rap addict, i drink coffee, freestyle alone in my dads attic
practicing black magic, so i had to torture a couple jack rabbits
i gave up my bad habbits, because man life is short
5 murders, 3 strikes, i might as well die in court
but thats not the case, i rather be in outer space
sprayin my face with mace, just to embrace the taste
i taught you never to quit, SHIT!...now i quit!!!...teaching you not to quit
i might as well spit a spit - thats legit and that people can get

[AlphaBetz]

dog u need need linkz...but that was real funny...made me giggle.

[r!PpER]

hehe nice, made me laugh lol, u got some talent lol...

anyways read forum rules...

[Liyah]

u remind me of redman yo he drop his style funny then a mutha fuka real talk , in fact when is redman gone wild gonna come out ? im waitin for that shyt , But ......anyways back to you .......that shyt made me laugh all kinds of crazy and shyt .....Nice

[Meta.Phor.T.Cal]

lmao @ ive gone from rag to rag, shot both my dads...and thats that

Nyce Homey..

[Spekz]

slightly humurous...but not at all complex or really at all that good.........

sry at school so fb was short....

[L.A]

shit was aight kinda reminded me of em tho

[DimeBag101]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post4171665
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=280709

[CrosT Over]

this was descent you lacked vokab in my eyes, wordplay was nice, but im not really into the whole lets make up a story so people can laugh, they have comedians for that sort of thing, all and all it was ok, i think if you spit about something you have more emotion for then you might be able to rip it up, but this fake story tellin crap has got to go!

[juvi]

Man you had some funny lines in that lol. I think at times it was a little simplistic tho. You have potential and had decent wordplay. Pretty good shit man.

[shyboi]

word play was tight vocab ight had sum nice lil ulties at the end shit was was hella funny lol ight keep p

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