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Last edited by cK-; December 16th, 2008 at 09:26 AM
welcome to wear buisness is pleasure and its buisness as -usual-
YOU BITCHES STILL HATING ! "well the fealing is -mutual-"
fosho
got pepes all over the word -supporten us-
snitches stay -reporten us-
but they get -caught in it-,
we at the office now -extortion it-
yeah u had sum good dynamic flows in this piece.. coulb of been a touch longer i reckon and gone a lil deeper...
good rhymes in this joint stilol..
similies and mettes needa be worked on
you betta be reel carefull or you might cause a -fight-
we so hot these other emcees are gettin -frostbite-
^diddnt make much sense to me.. hotness doesnt cause frostbite...
we so cold........
nice flows and rhymes still
stat poppin
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yo this was nice one kc...
enjoyment was on...the flows is of tha hook...
but ill say it would be better if u work on the structure a lil bit more
im not sayin its bad... but it cant be better
keep up
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Fuck You
dam dude your punchlines were raw. like above me try makin longer verses. shit was tite it aint bad its jus u had me wantin more. (no homo)
In my opinion, I think if you scratched this, re read it and re wrote it, would sould alot better, had mad potential, reminded me a lil of a luda song...stay up
...this is nice.. hooks were easy to read and comprehend,
didn't sound too wordy(like most of this garbage) and flowed nice.
all the way through i enjoyed. this reminded me of a simpler Rough Text..(old textcee from long ago) his shit was a little more complex but still rugged like this..
i want to peep more of your shit now Cross...
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fuck, the whole thing was dope, xcept the 'hot/frostbite' line.... :P
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