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Thread: "Posted up in da Club"

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    "Posted up in da Club"

    "POSTED UP IN DA CLUB"


    SIN~A~MATIC
    I'm posted In the club wit my clique in the background..
    The bar's are mad open and i'm thristy with a stack down..
    On the table all drinks are on me get tipsy..
    But haters starin actin like they wanna flip G..
    Lights all are around and the females gettin nasty..
    "Baby you wanna dance" gurl you don't even gotta ask me..
    Ain't nuttin like a giant booty grindin on ya dick..
    But I still see a nigga hatin actin like he wanna trip..
    Last call for the brew still gotta wet my whistle..
    Plus the Hoe I was dancin wit got me hard like a missle..
    If that nigga keeps lookin towards me I'm get in his neck like a piece of Gristle..
    2 am in the mornng I'm drunk so i'm bout to drive..
    But b4 I got wasted the mean mugger is no longer alive..
    He didn't know when to quit so he stepped I smile I don't pout..
    This nigga stepped like he was in pain like he had gout..
    I stomped on his face and dropped and layed him out flat..
    Funny really didn't even reach for the gat..
    Lames bones arn't strong so wehn he jumped he goot splat..
    And like forest Gump thats all i got to say about that..

    V.I.G
    Pull up like the Mafia in front with the Lincoln Town car..
    We rush through the crowds and tear down the bar..
    50 deep, packin heat so theres no reason to have cold feet..
    The type of people that'll shoot ya in da cheek if you even speak..
    Ayo Sin, heres the blueberry roll that shit up tight..
    We'll be outta sight, wont think twice bout startin a fight..
    Down with Kamikaze, thats my motherfuckin posse..
    Grinding all up on ya wifey's ass as ya watch me..
    The dance floor is hot, it's burnin up like rubber in a parking lot..
    Baby girl you feeling me alot, so you coming home with me or not..
    Rocking minks, pounding them drinks and hookin up wit bitches like links..
    Fuck glasses, we pound bottles without using our god damn concince..
    Kamikaze be throwing up those benjamins in the air like ox-y-gen..
    The bitches panties get wet, at the end of the night the cocks-in..

    HELL RAIZER
    YO NIGGA IM IN DA CLUB TIPSY SWERVIN SLANGIN ROCKZ...
    UP IN VIP CHILIN AN DZ NIGGAZ HATIN CUZ THEY CANT GET WAT I GOTZ...
    NIGGA WE BOUT 50 DEEP LIK WE POSTED UP AN DA BLOCK.....
    AN WE WALKED AROUND DA MEDAL DETECTORS WE IN DIS BITCH WIT OUR GLOCK....
    READY 2 CLOCK, ANY BITCH WHO GET OUTTA LINE CUZ BITCH I GOT DIS CLUB ON LOCK...
    A YO IM LOOKIN AROUND TO FIND ME DAT RITE BITCH .....
    BUT IF A NIGGA GET OUTTA LINE DEY GON GET MERKED AN DER AINT NO TIME TO SNITCH.....
    A YO VIG I ALREADY ROLLED UP DAT BLUNT WE GON GET MUTHAFUKIN HIGH.....
    A YO DIS KAMIKAZE AN U ALREADY KNO WE AS HIGH AS THE SKY.....
    AN WE LEAVE DA CLUB WE GOIN OUT BUSTIN ...
    4 ALL DOES NIGGAZ WHO WAS TALKIN SHYT NOW U IN DA HOSPITAL TAKIN ROBOTUSIN....


    Laydee Snypha
    Yeah tick us off tha guest list then we roll inside
    Wit tha heat me & my bitches bring..u wont feel cold 2mite
    2 set tha mood right we noc drinks back til empty glass
    i turn around & see a fly guy, yeah ladiez check out this sexi ass
    he comes right over & buys a drink, baby bway smiles & winks
    i see he be gettin hard, then he offers 2 buy more drinks
    asks for a dance, i give him tha chance, now we groovin
    club feelin warm now, we gonna take it like storm now we movin
    da bass is da pressure, & u feel my body heat now
    as we dance closer & closer, i see our bodies meet now
    even though the atmospere rowdy we stil be concentratin
    let them drinks talk for me now bway fuck tha contemplatin
    i’m feelin u baby bway, tha way u touch, way we slow dance
    i’d rather get more freakier wit u then just hold hands
    we bouta take business down ur place u call me a nympho
    uncontrolable desires in the car, while er body stare in tha window

    i tried 2 keep it clean
    Last edited by Hell_Raizer; March 2nd, 2006 at 04:39 PM

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    dont forget the links dawg
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    Aiight...dis def not bad cuz i really didn't think ur crew was bout OM...LOL

    Sin~A~Matic-

    Lights all are around and the females gettin nasty..
    "Baby you wanna dance" gurl you don't even gotta ask me..

    These were my fav lines from ur verse...da way u pulled'em 2getha was tyte.

    VIG-ur verse is def my fav! somethin bout da flo & da way it came 2getha

    50 deep, packin heat so theres no reason to have cold feet..
    The type of people that'll shoot ya in da cheek if you even speak..

    These were fav lines from ur verse...da internal's u got goin here real elevated dis piece...
    i think u shoulda hadda longa verse in dis drop tho...it kinda seemed like u didn't get all u's tryna say out...

    Hell_Raizer-I haven't seen u up in here 4 dayz!

    YO NIGGA IM IN DA CLUB TIPSY SWERVIN SLANGIN ROCKZ...
    UP IN VIP CHILIN AN DZ NIGGAZ HATIN CUZ THEY CANT GET WAT I GOTZ...

    These were fav lines from ur verse...i think ur part kinda tied da whole thing 2getha--but it didn't seem like u had ur own "personality" in it 2 much...feel me?

    Overall, I thought dis was an aiight piece...my suggestions would lie 'round usin' mo INTERNAL rhymin thru out & maybe makin ur lines all mo even--u wanna keep em closer 2getha so dat it ezier 4 us 2 follow ur flo's...

    Collab pieces is hard 2 write, 'specially when it's text & not audio/free cuz ur flo's gotta b similar 2 everybody else's @ least a lil bit...but ORIGINALITY was prolly wat ya'lls goin' 4 in dis drop even tho it's a played topic...so props on stickin 2 da point!

    Usually I'm not much 4 dese kindsa pieces but dis 1 was aiight...def keep ELEVATIN
    Waitin' 2 c mo! ~1~

    -LL

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    Thank you lady latin uppin for positive feed back

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    this shit was tight let's mak a remix lol for real................nah we can do a collab it will bea God's Plan Kamikaze collaboration nice drop by al had me laughin like hell man especially Sin's part loved that shit man lol good shit yalll keep it up

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    Thankz Glitch more positve Feedback

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    no problem

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    yo son dat shit waz ill
    keep kamakize real son keep that shit alive homie
    ha ha niggaz u dope

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    iight well we need mo feed iight ......

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    good job fam real nice drops but it coulda had a better title
    Blow It Out U're Ass

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    uppin fo mo feed
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    Bad concept and the bars and shit was too commercial and seemed too fake. overall judgement 4/10(bein generous)

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    With me being a fatihful particapant of THE LICK in Chicago I really can feel where you coming from wtih this one Fam O.... The piece is well structured and flowed nicely throughout....overall I'd say good drop-----

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