After I Saw The Robbern ( pt.3 )

[C.Wrighter]

read part 1 and 2 to understand this



when i pulled the tricker to kill him i though of else to longer friends
but i couldn't find the will to end his life like he did my brothers cause when i pulled the tricker to kill him i missed then i seen my mother
she was in tears from seen the blood so she took the gun said move i'll kill him since he wanna be a thug
but she was n so many tears i started to sweat then she told me to go n her room get her shoutgun and told me where the bullets where at
she said cause i wanna blow him to where my son at
she said i wanna blow off his head so his brains can show where his hat was at
then i said mom stop i hear the cops screaming who is up stairs come out
but she didnt say nothing out her mouth
so i just though she gotta do what was needed
i though she only could live on from T.james bleeding
she told me to go down stairs and wait and tell the cops its ok
but in my mind i was saying i hope she would blow him to yesterday then the cops walked up to the room got to the door the gun came off
we walk in the room my mom shot him with the 9 then looked up
but after that she had her hands up in ready was 2 get cuffed









heres my links


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275305

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=27

[status_unknown]

It read pretty good the only part that didn't read to well was the ending or break whatever you wanna call it. Other then that it's alright

original idea but it's about the normal.
lol j/k

pz

[C.Wrighter]

thanks for the feed come on people check out my pices and tell me what you think form 1-3 parts