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Lbirdy
status_unknown
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a yo ill get bak at dis battle lata iight wen yall drop
stay wit the weak leave the masters alone/ u fag u rap trash nigga ur status is known/
dont spit wack at da thrown its kings in this bitch/ i dont wether to rap ur words or start singing the shit/ if u want it im bringing it bitch/ if u seen ur self winning u was dreaming the shit/ im leaning in a six/ u riding da bus/
i no im hot stop riding my nuts/ and ur rhymes just suck/so dont spit/ he wack and hopeless/ get smash like roaches/ this is his death someone pass the roses/
if i grab toast then this dude gon get it/ this his final destination i dont need a preminition/
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Plead the fifth and stay silent, ya rhymes aint half what mine is
Cuz ya whole styles fucked up, like movin shit around on blind kids
I was gonna give you a pound, but you couldnt handle the weight
Shouldnt stand to the plate, if ya bitch ass cant handle what it takes
You can ramble and fake, but ya canvas cant handle brushin with me
And ya cyber sex styles, they ain't really fuckin with me
Cuz i'll knock you out the box like homeless people on trash days
No concern, after this ho gets burned snuff him in the ash tray
So you can sashay, act gay online so ya ass gets jocked
But offline you like shares of comedy central...fuckin laughin stock...
Plead the fifth and stay silent, ya rhymes aint half what mine is
Cuz ya whole styles fucked up, like movin shit around on blind kids
I was gonna give you a pound, but you couldnt handle the weight
Shouldnt stand to the plate, if ya bitch ass cant handle what it takes
Very good opener, shit had me laughin.
Pretty basic, it was alright, but your going to need to really elevate if you want to stay around RB. You need tow ork on vocab and structure, those 2 hurt you alotstay wit the weak leave the masters alone/ u fag u rap trash nigga ur status is known/
dont spit wack at da thrown its kings in this bitch/ i dont wether to rap ur words or start singing the shit/ if u want it im bringing it bitch/
V/ status_unknown ~ Better flow, structure, and punches. Your vocab was alot better aswell.
LBirdy, you really need to work on your structure homie, it was hard to read.
man, lbirdy you had some good punches but your structure was all fucked up you should of came harder, but status unknown u was consistent wit the flows every verse so imma have to stay status had it. no hate honesty
IM 2 HOT 2 HANDLE
!!!!!!!! GET ME DONT SHIT ME!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLLA AT CHA GURL
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Mcbigll - 5-0
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Plead the fifth and stay silent, ya rhymes aint half what mine is
Cuz ya whole styles fucked up, like movin shit around on blind kids
vs
not much
no hate ight i juss thought his first bar killed the shit mad nice had me laffin n his whole verse wus ight Lbirdy wus ight but not enuff 2 win not hate ight my vote 2 status_unknown
can u drop an honest vote in my battle against yellowpages thankz
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...SO FANTASTICK...
better punches from status nice flow better personnels no hate man other kid elevate aight ull get better in no time
v/status unknown
hit one of the battle up in ma sig
uppin for votes
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vote on this ill vote on urs
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