At War

**A.O.D** · January 27th, 2006, 10:12 PM

I will succeed throughout the greed and haste of times to take place
My imagination will denounce its fear and become quite clear of your circumstances
And the devil may hold a grudge for I’m about to accomplish what he can not ……

World domination and infiltration of the higher anarchy//
Driving past determination, contemplating murder in all degrees//
I condemn fate and all of its dynasty’s releasing a new realm of families//
To challenge me in contempt of prayer I devour your restlessness as I prepare//
For the greatest battle as an oppressed soldier at war…
I grabbed for the symmetry because it is beneath me and all that I have acquired //
Your running from fear at a slow pace...no need to make haste… you’ll just end up tired//
Piercing eyes and seducing breath tantalize your ears but bring you to deaths door//
Its sweet song acquaints your memories of how we are in a state of war //

The War began….

We’re going under, drowning you, falling forever, hells bound by our chains//
Driving past infliction contemplating breaking through your blood spilt stains//
Dive into my core where our war will become so much more//
An emotional break through I’m tearing down your walls to allow for rapport//
You can only imagine this angel perfect without blood stains… without sin//
There’s just too much to try and explain but you’ll understand once you as well die within//
Don’t try to fight it, your temptations are filled with fear, its crystal clear…
Your end draws near//
Set in stone on a battle ring of fire, connecting with my desire, I have the power to devour earth//
Daggers in hand, feet buried in the sand your casket lays beneath your place of birth//
Your blood vessels begin to burst, it’s a curse, that you will predecease before your time//
Complications are compelled to appear as your death draws near to this victimless crime//
Deep blue eyes combust out of there sockets like rockets they disperse amongst the rest of your physical structure //
It’s the end now preparing for this could not have been for-warned fate meant you to rupture//

The wind and air gather what’s left of your remains…
to leave them in the rightful place…
among disgrace

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PLEASE DO NOT SLEEP ON THIS ONE....

**Topical** · January 27th, 2006, 10:14 PM

Jacks off to picture at top.

you have great flow bro you have that shit down.
Your strucre could be better.
Nice wordplay.
I really felt this peice, so keep it up.
9-10.

**Lyracistkill@** · January 27th, 2006, 10:19 PM

you have great flow bro you have that shit down.
Your strucre could be better.
Nice wordplay.
I really felt this peice, so keep it up.
9-10.

**A.O.D** · January 27th, 2006, 10:29 PM

^^^ Thank but ugh, really copy and paste??? come on people... lets all be original

**Topical** · January 27th, 2006, 10:32 PM

Wow.
Thats gheto.
Wanna do a collab?
With me and 2hot2handle?

**A.O.D** · January 27th, 2006, 10:35 PM

ummm sure hit me up on aim

**Topical** · January 27th, 2006, 10:37 PM

Damn boy.
I aint got aim.
Me and -IsIs- got msn.

**A.O.D** · January 27th, 2006, 10:42 PM

Then holla at me in msn... swatson3613@hotmail.com

**The Vortex** · January 28th, 2006, 10:51 AM

yeah pretty cool.. imagery was coming alomg well.. had sum good poetics fosho... people already commented on w/e so thats all to fix really.. but yeah was worded good
interesting approach

stay1
pz

**Mafioso.** · January 28th, 2006, 10:59 AM

well done.

**C.Wrighter** · January 28th, 2006, 11:05 AM

ok this was hot really felt it
so keep it up in just fix the structure somemore
in dont use pictures if they aint smaller in open mic
but i'll say good job just try to do some of thoughs things i said

**NumeroUno** · January 28th, 2006, 11:17 AM

Wow!

I liked the flow of this one, not to mention the fact that the vocab was superb. It all came together real nice man. Hell, I feel I came a better MC just readin this shit, lol.

**A.O.D** · January 28th, 2006, 12:36 PM

Thank you everyone...I really do appreciate the feedback!

J.Christ · January 28th, 2006, 01:00 PM

Jacks off to picture at top.

not coo bro .

But anyways, this piece was nice kept my attention the whole time on some hood shit . I fuccs w/ it most defenitely .

**P. Mortuus** · January 28th, 2006, 02:22 PM

Some lines were strechted and stuff......but the wording, imagery and flow of this piece was quite impressive, i liked it and as PoEtics first Lady your doin' a good job lol.....Ayo keep it Poppin'