MaRVJayVS. Vortex...(300 posts 2 vote)

[The Vortex]

10 lines max

drop by thursday 24th 1st 06

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no DR's

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[The Vortex]

u see thru...ima cool guy but i'll act up lil hoe if u temp me.
in dis battle ya losin...so like "oprah" your "WiN-FREE".
I dont know where, but didnt Merge use this in a tutorial for wordplay in the help desk some time back?

Did you hear what the fuck I said? Dude straight bit from the help desk.
V. Banned

pre-bittens?????...if datz da case everytime some say's im "sick" as da flu"...which is a line every said there bittin then...no idea's original its nothin new under da sun

MaRVJay
a noob???? i was on dis site when it 1st open..stupid wtf lol

Yo, this bitch’s been biting mo bloodlines than Wesley in the blade trinity
then again maybe you are “Merge” so please Emerge your twin personality
N gradually we’ll all see the cunt in you coming thru with tru pre-bitten types
ya mom’s sucks just as much as you do…but at least she didn’t bite
This lil hoes been Tomb Raiding like Lara, claiming -“Everything’s played
stole ya name from a dead singer, n we all know already that Marvin’s Gaye
U thick thinking I care about ya claims: “you’ve been on RB since day dot”
M got as much appeal as a bowl of cold-piss… since he hardly sprays hot
Damn u’re odd, u bite vets n still write like a noob, pussy soon u’ll be banned
RB should have a new “Hall of Shame”, then we’ll click ya name so many times
…………….……………………………….u’ll start believing u got fans

[Katch-22]

if your gonna make accusations lie that
i sugget u get the links to back it
or no1's gonna buy into it
no diss...just sayin
n whats the due by tomorrow shit?
pre-writing?...

[MaRVJay]

Word, its not the line I was looking for, Merges use of context put in a differant way. And dont hate on me Marv, I just dont like biters, and since its been proved that you just used a played line and not bit, your rep is restored,........umm...I guess..

im sick fuck! i spit flames cuz..dis kid suck's its a shame bud.
MR FUCK YOU? oh datz whut dat guy u pick'ed up in a gay club.
fag! change proffesions,cuzz i was on beats while dis lame was textin.
vortex u always put ya '2 cents' in...but know1 seems 2 'pay' attention.
u had ya anus restin..from dat night you and dude had some raw sex.
i whore vets...dis kid can neva do audio why u think his name's vor-TEXT.
i'll bring it 2 where dis cat rest,clap techs make dis rat rest..u wack? yes!.
saught of like a 'mummy just wakin up' look at how ya (w)rap's stretch.
poetic justus? no!........who's da best on Rb? ya'll pothetic its just us.
busta'z...nah i aint pay 4 a hooker but i juts owned another dumb slut.

[I Got Pwnd]

u had ya anus restin..from dat night you and dude had some raw sex.
i whore vets...dis kid can neva do audio why u think his name's vor-TEXT.
^Nice Name Play....Good use of Multi's Nice Flow.

i'll bring it 2 where dis cat rest,clap techs make dis rat rest..u wack? yes!.
saught of like a 'mummy just wakin up' look at how ya (w)rap's stretch.
^Nice.

Overall 1st Few Lines were played 2 me...But Those 2 lines I copy'd are nice enough..and the quote was a nice touch 2.lol.


versus.

N gradually we’ll all see the cunt in you coming thru with tru pre-bitten types
ya mom’s sucks just as much as you do…but at least she didn’t bite
^Aiight,But The Concept Has Been Played 2 death,ut Still Made Me sorta Crack aGrin.

Damn u’re odd, u bite vets n still write like a noob, pussy soon u’ll be banned
RB should have a new “Hall of Shame”, then we’ll click ya name so many times
…………….……………………………….u’ll start believing u got fans
^Good,But Stretched Like Ur Sista's Pussy,J/p...But It was Good but over worded.

overall ur drop was addressing those quotes you made...and marv sorta fed of that,but in a way it was need'd...so he killed almost a 3rd of ur drop...A Good attempt at tryin ta score an ez win off ah couple notions about Marv Biting in Kings Battle.lol.
Next Time Try Using Other Concepts.

V/=Marv.

HIt any Link up in my sig..Need em closed..thanx.

[frivolous]

wow both you guys had good verses they were hot i cant poll a vote i dont ahve three hundred and im glad i cant hot shit , i like marvz flow tho i could hear alot of beats in there nice battle to both of you ........

[MaRVJay]

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[Cody Nash]

Vortex-
Yo, this bitch’s been biting mo bloodlines than Wesley in the blade trinity
then again maybe you are “Merge” so please Emerge your twin personality
No..wack
N gradually we’ll all see the cunt in you coming thru with tru pre-bitten types
ya mom’s sucks just as much as you do…but at least she didn’t bite
Wack
This lil hoes been Tomb Raiding like Lara, claiming -“Everything’s played
stole ya name from a dead singer, n we all know already that Marvin’s Gaye
Meh..coudl've been worded better
U thick thinking I care about ya claims: “you’ve been on RB since day dot”
M got as much appeal as a bowl of cold-piss… since he hardly sprays hot
No..Since day dot? wtf..
Damn u’re odd, u bite vets n still write like a noob, pussy soon u’ll be banned
RB should have a new “Hall of Shame”, then we’ll click ya name so many times
…………….……………………………….u’ll start believing u got fans
Na..weak

MaRVJay-
im sick fuck! i spit flames cuz..dis kid suck's its a shame bud.
MR FUCK YOU? oh datz whut dat guy u pick'ed up in a gay club.
Wack
fag! change proffesions,cuzz i was on beats while dis lame was textin.
vortex u always put ya '2 cents' in...but know1 seems 2 'pay' attention.
Decent metaphor
u had ya anus restin..from dat night you and dude had some raw sex.
i whore vets...dis kid can neva do audio why u think his name's vor-TEXT.
Lol, ok creative
i'll bring it 2 where dis cat rest,clap techs make dis rat rest..u wack? yes!.
saught of like a 'mummy just wakin up' look at how ya (w)rap's stretch.
First line filler..second was nice
poetic justus? no!........who's da best on Rb? ya'll pothetic its just us.
busta'z...nah i aint pay 4 a hooker but i juts owned another dumb slut.
Ok.

Overall very weak battle. All of you could've done a lot better. Vortex your lines were played and were just a load of fake personals and other weak disses. Not much to quote there. You had some good ideas but ruined them with horrible wordplay. MaRVJay..One of your worst verses by far. You could've done so much better than this. All of your first lines in your bars were just fillers and didn't even have attempted punches. While the second lines packed the punch. This battle you seemed more self glorified and trying to cover up for his disses in it. Both had horrible verses, no hate..

V/MaRVJay for slightly better verse..couple decent metaphors/punches

[Ramurda]

fag! change proffesions,cuzz i was on beats while dis lame was textin.
vortex u always put ya '2 cents' in...but know1 seems 2 'pay' attention.
nice
u had ya anus restin..from dat night you and dude had some raw sex.
i whore vets...dis kid can neva do audio why u think his name's vor-TEXT.
first line was played secong as nice

marv i liked your verse u had some nice punches structure was on point
and i liked your multis to overall nice verse keep doing wat u doing

vs

RB should have a new “Hall of Shame”, then we’ll click ya name so many times
…………….……………………………….u’ll start believing u got fans
only bar i liked out ya verse

vortex wow @ ya verse i honestly seen u come alot harder you had some
played concepts your structure was str8 and u had gd flow and your punches wasnt hittin dat hard like i said i seen u come doper then this

v-Marv

[MaRVJay]

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[The Vortex]

lolz you same dudes always vote against me...ALWAYS

uppin some non hate votes

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[The Vortex]

if your gonna make accusations lie that
i sugget u get the links to back it
or no1's gonna buy into it
no diss...just sayin
n whats the due by tomorrow shit?
pre-writing?...

and keep up the hate wordplay you punk.. how could this be pre written.. i said for him to drop by tommorrow not me.. i dropped str8 away yesterday.. u mug.. and gave marv till 2moro.. in case he wasnt online you prick


kepp up the hate neway

[The Vortex]

and fucks sake bignash

your in the same fucking crewe as that dude man...wtf

house rules surely state no crew votes

this site is getting fucking stupid mayne

[Katch-22]

Yo, this bitch’s been biting mo bloodlines than Wesley in the blade trinity
then again maybe you are “Merge” so please Emerge your twin personality<--good flow/punch

N gradually we’ll all see the cunt in you coming thru with tru pre-bitten types
ya mom’s sucks just as much as you do…but at least she didn’t bite<---i've battled marv...didnt see any evidence of anything pre-written...sorry...but no

This lil hoes been Tomb Raiding like Lara, claiming -“Everything’s played
stole ya name from a dead singer, n we all know already that Marvin’s Gaye<--good punch

U thick thinking I care about ya claims: “you’ve been on RB since day dot”
M got as much appeal as a bowl of cold-piss… since he hardly sprays hot<---no

Damn u’re odd, u bite vets n still write like a noob, pussy soon u’ll be banned
RB should have a new “Hall of Shame”, then we’ll click ya name so many times
…………….……………………………….u’ll start believing u got fans<--decent punch/ending....lil stretched


vs


im sick fuck! i spit flames cuz..dis kid suck's its a shame bud.
MR FUCK YOU? oh datz whut dat guy u pick'ed up in a gay club.<--good punch/ solid opening

fag! change proffesions,cuzz i was on beats while dis lame was textin.
vortex u always put ya '2 cents' in...but know1 seems 2 'pay' attention.<---good punch/flow

u had ya anus restin..from dat night you and dude had some raw sex.
i whore vets...dis kid can neva do audio why u think his name's vor-TEXT.<---nice fuckin line/personal punch/flow

i'll bring it 2 where dis cat rest,clap techs make dis rat rest..u wack? yes!.
saught of like a 'mummy just wakin up' look at how ya (w)rap's stretch.<---good flow/punch

poetic justus? no!........who's da best on Rb? ya'll pothetic its just us.
busta'z...nah i aint pay 4 a hooker but i juts owned another dumb slut<--decent ending


punches - marv
personalz - marv
creativity - marv
flow - marv
structure - vortext <--liked that punch...no diss yo

vor....no hate...but dont battle heads like marv in text..
try a topical or somethin...n next time you make accusations
have the links or proof to back it up.
beleave me - i'd be the 1st to hate if i heard anything he said b4
n i battled him a couple weeks ago...found no such evidence
you had a couple of decent punches...but marv stays consistent
wit brutal multi's n personalz

v - marv

[The Vortex]

ok this battle is gonna be closed and re opened now .. bcoz of all the hate.. thanx a lot wordplay

keep it up word.. you already displayed your hate.. b4 dude even dropped

this is getting silly now


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