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    Racism

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...939#post3773939
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...948#post3773948
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    Now listen up, the topic here is powerful enough
    to see right through you, exposing every coward and his bluffs
    im devouring you punks, a strong issue is at hand
    here's a leson, let me stress to you the history of man
    back to indians and land, new explorers, to slaves
    the order became a blemish to the oracles brain
    a horror that slained many cause of form and display
    distortion was framed, and tainted what would corner our fate
    a portrait remains this aura of racism is strong
    no escape, and basically all this hates pissing me off
    OK, this is just wrong, NO WAY, can we be all
    the same color, but blood'll still stay red in us dog
    behave, witness the spawn - today you'll see the form switched
    im sorry you've been warned, look!..."your baby was born mixed"
    and from slavery's warned grips, the hatred supports this
    see a blatant rapport sent us through racism's war ships
    immitations of course simply are roaming the earth
    loathing a birth, harrassing the youth, if only you heard
    the blasphemous use, of brutal and inappropriate slurs
    the facts and the truth, would prove this isn't a hoax but a curse
    approaching its worse cause since the discrimination evolved
    judgement has been determined by intergration of flaws
    skin pigmintation has paused the informational clause
    with sins invading the laws and disobeying them all
    no indication of god, these veiws have been man made
    and wounds from our black slaves cant recoup with a band-aid
    it's stupid to chance fate, because you wanna stand straight
    with a group who demands hate due to hues of a mans face
    confused, i just cant wait for that Spark Thats Soon to Bring Hope
    and finish what was started back when Martin Luther King Spoke
    put and end to the pestilence let Hearts Just Sooth the Sting so
    we can all be known as equals as the Martyrs Music Brings Home
    the Harp and Flute from Sweet Low, sweet chariot'll play
    then the carelessness'll fade and all prosperity remains
    til the therapy for hate isn't a rarity, and race
    inside the peoples minds is merely just a parady replaced
    by the clarity and grace of he who helps us fix mistakes
    through events to quickly place new beginnings to our fate
    but forgive me when i say, you're full of shit if you relate
    cause reality's the bitch that comes and visits us each day
    when we get up, when we lay, when the hard times begin
    we can say we stay together but apartheid it lives
    it's been archived by skin color marked by the men
    working full time to fix what takes part time to end
    im a smart guy within sent to give to you the knowledge
    that racism is everywhere cause scrutiny was promised
    from you parents peer pressure, to your middle school then college
    while your walking through an office, malls, the movies, lets be honest
    your community see all this can be found in rooms and closets
    where the pool of vomit leaks from the mind of a humans conscience
    force fed this food of thought its - displayed by the rudest comments
    and the crystal ball's a chessboard supporting the future on it
    provocative slue of nonsense that's forced, by an appointment
    to not end it but extend it and hoard, prior employment
    it's like a contradiction saves the report, can i avoid it
    of course not...cause even the Source, tried to exploit it

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    upping........... BY THE WAY I AM PERCEPT. I ALREADY SIAD THAT, SO DONT FUCKING BAN ME!

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    fly awayyyyyy

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    ok first lemme say that the first 4 lines were very deep to me......complaex to a certain degree.....but i felt what it was ment for


    i liked ya word choice...even though it was a long ass om...it was a very good read......ya vocab was very good and so was ya flow due to your rhyming scheme...structure was coo...not a big factor to me thought

    visual was str8 n i liked the topic and how almost every word stuck with that

    pz

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    thanks

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    The way you wanted to get ur message out was a good way. It looks like u could of made this like a speech in an audotorium in a school to a bunch of older cats. I like the way you portrayed the message, the lines were deep and shit. You didnt have much imagery but I dont think that mattered here..racism is a played topic but you approached the topic very unpredictably and i liked that. great peice and thanks for the feed on mine. pz.

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    thanks

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    openers were dope man,
    just got me interested straight away, i loved the vocab used,
    flow was nice aswell man
    although its a played and touchy subject, u did very well in approaching it

    keep doin ur thing
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    thanx

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    Wow, Very dope dude. I liked the usage of vocabulary, it was so unique in many different ways. You put a point out there and backed it up alone with information and everything for the on-lookers...This is really good, very nice read. Kind of long, but as you know I have no room to talk..lol, good job dude. Loved it,

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    I peeped this already when you posted it as Precept. I said this was fucking dope and the flow was crazy. The message was well heard and I was definetly feeling every line. Very poetic and the content was simply amazing.
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    I thought this was impresive.You can do better but wha you dropped was still good.Vocab was good and flow was brilliant.You stuck to the topic and knew what you were talking about.Good shit in the end

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    thanx. upp

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    idioacracy

    this is my best piece yet, .

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