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    Talking Gates To Hell....Feat Ndestrial Minded

    Burning With Hate, The Lava Boils At My Feet.
    This Was My Fate, I Belong In Red Firey Heat.
    I've Done Satan's Deeds, And Gave Him My Soul.
    I Thrive For Eternal Damnnation, I Love This Shithole.

    I Burn With Anger, Lust, Murder And Crime.
    Have Been Locked In Jail, But Didn't Serve My Time.
    I Beat The Shackles, Bullets, Gas And More.
    With Some Help, I Couldn't Be Held By A Vault Door.

    My Eyes Glow Red. My Heart Turns Cold.
    I Remain Young, While Others Grow Old.
    Life, Is Over As I Know, I Feel Nothing.
    I'm A Human Turkey, With Spicy Demon Stuffing.
    My Emotion's Have Been Stripped, My Tears, Taken.
    I'm Fantastic 4's Flame, But I'm Forever Forsaken.

    I Am Stronger Then God, And Still Gaining Power.
    I Could Destroy The Universe, In Less Then An Hour.
    Here I Stand, Once Again At Hells Gate.
    Playin' With Satan, Makin' Him Retalliate.
    This Is A Game Of Cat And Mouse, And I'm The Cat.
    My Powers, Mysterious, Like The Cat In The Hat.
    I Whip, He Stabs, I Slap, He Strikes.
    I Poke, He Grabs, This Is Like Fighting Tikes.
    Suddenly He Falls, His Powers, Withdrawn.
    Checkmate In This Game Of Chess, I'm King, He's Pawn.

    Now I Stand, Dumbfounded, And Awoken From My Dreams.
    Standing At Hell's Gates, Surrounded By Hell's Fiends.


    Corus-

    The gates wide open but i'm confused
    Afraid to be hated hurt and abused
    Is the fire worth the power
    Or will i take heaven and the grand tower?


    Sent by god cuz of all my sins, Given the scar of the gods
    Thrown out of the cloudy dens, Thrown in front of hell's gate and pods
    Lost my right to live above with the angels, the demons are happy to have me
    I'm dazed and confused siting with the fallen angels, so blind that i cant see

    The gates open but i dont move a inch, my body is numb and i hate it
    A demon goes to hit me and i dont flinch, i fall and sit
    The devil tells me to come forward but i say no, yet the pain stll in my chest
    The gates wide open but i try to be slow, I try to stay still and i try my best
    Cant see what he's trying to do, but my legs stay still
    I'm in front of the devils zoo, and telling the demons that i'm a kill

    The black gates start making a noice, but i refuse to move my ground
    And then i here this really deep voice, and i'm frightened by the sound
    Never gonna leave to hell through the gates, holding in all my screams
    It endes it's victoms life, souls, and all fates, deadly is what it seems
    I stay in front of the gate petrified of the fire, i'm way to damn scared
    Like konye west i'm free but i'm though the wire, i'm being paired
    With my dead partner endustrial minded, and we gonna die together
    Died with sins after being gunned&Finded, im in hell with all this weather

    The things i do are related to my sins and i have to ring the bell
    Cuz i'm scared of whats to come in the future, through the gates of hell!

    The gates wide open but i'm confused
    Afraid to be hated hurt and abused
    Is the fire worth the power
    Or will i take heaven and the grand tower?


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    endusrial minded=normal

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