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Thread: Level Up

  1. #1
    Im -not- BacK
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    Level Up

    I reached the top, now I gotta level up, level up
    I live my own life, I never give a fuck, give a fuck
    I kill faggots that give me looks, give me looks
    I reached the top, now I gotta level up, level up

    You try an diss me, call me wack, you never drop so
    How can you say that you write rhymes so dope
    That they compare to anything that I flowed and wrote
    We on a completely different LeVeL you at the bottom
    Of the game, you been winnin battles, but you pre wrote ‘em
    You call yourself dope, but like overdue food you rotten
    Your past your use by, your back down to LeVeL one
    You a no weight, you tryin to tell this to everyone
    ‘Hey this Instigator just wrecked a song’ that don’t bother me
    What does bother me is that you can’t drop a dope rhyme
    To save your life, even if you had until the end of time
    You little faggot, don’t you know that you committed a crime
    By dropping some really weak shit that barely crossed the line
    Of being wack, it wasn’t anything apart from some stuff that
    You thought would get positive feed, but you, you jus wack
    Sorry to break it to you, but you aint up to my LeVeL

    I reached the top, now I gotta level up, level up
    I live my own life, I never give a fuck, give a fuck
    I kill faggots that give me looks, give me looks
    I reached the top, now I gotta level up, level up


    jus a quick spit, tht i said i would drop...bout 5 mins at most (and tht cos i got fucked up arms from fuckin weights)
    links r in my sig
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    Im -not- BacK
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    uppin

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! The Vortex's Avatar
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    yeah.. decent .. specialy for a key.. flow was kept consistant... could of had a lil more sharper vocab and multies..coz some rhymes was just ok and maybe needed some more somplexity to lift it.. could of also had a bit more concept put into certain lines which seemed to be like jabs but coulda been more heavy as hook punches... if maybe for a little more solid wordplay

    decent


    keep up
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    You've Earned a Custom Title! O'rigi's Avatar
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    Eh that was a dope drop. The drop sunded like battle material to me but do you whodi
    I'm too fresh to be stale

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    The Otha White Drug B1ZK3T's Avatar
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    Okay, as I understand it. This was a key-style in that respects it's about a *holds up an 8.5*, however...Your vocab needs uppin' a bit, maybe some multies to livin' it up, but don't over do it *I've been accused of that occassionally*...The rest was great...Nice drop man...Like I said 8.5...STAY UPPIN'

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    Im -not- BacK
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    thnx uppin

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    Im -not- BacK
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    uppin


    leave links and ill comment on ure drops

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    Im -not- BacK
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    last uppin unless i get sum feed

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    if this was a tought up peice it would be wack as fuck.........but in this case it's a key style which makes it dope for some reason....need to work on vocab,.....but ur on the right track....i wanna see a well thought out peice from you

    pz

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