Put a Face to Music

[Bounce]

Put a Face to Music

Melodic whispers overwhelm my state
With rhapsodic pleaures defaced and ornate
Unspeakable acts commited by axe
Facts stack gory when backs meet w/40 whacks

Dark voices sing to me in morbid tongues
Through frantic rhythms struck by failing lungs
I bleed my lifes work masked by victims slain
Drains me of pain when I rock a mic sane

So I stay murdering while most lay gurgling
I'm hurdling men, some call it 'soul burgling'
Sushi chef skilled I peeled off her barbie doll face
Gucci dress filled w /stab wounds at a frenzied pace

My blade cuts through facial tissue, ain't a racial issue
But more like 'a race to getchu', and erase officals
Symphonys echo aloud while screams hit a crescendo
Arcs of blood dance about in glorious spurts on the window

Cut throat's for sissys, I'll take your face off quick
Then wear your expressions while expressing I'm sick
Pressing a mic to your lips when I'm mouthing the spit
No doubting I flipped when I put a face to the music I script

A modern day leather face...
I rip shows like the faces of those I wasted for show
Face it I'm cold whether it's a mic or knife that I hold
I deal death and spit forth flame with a demons breath
& I've split more brains than tag team whores on meth

Music speaks through my soul...
So I paint a melody in blood on a canvas of woes
Suppose I was asked to put a face to music in prose
I might hide behind the grin of the last victim I chose
& dance in the wind of the majestic speaker til blown...

...Put a face to music

....................Because HELL knows

........................................you couldn't face the music!



-Bounce

[Nostradomus.]

Why is this being slept on?

Bounce, the 4th, 5th, & 6th stanzas were the most emotion-packed, and imagery-packed in this peice. Your vocab was not only complex, but I could define them in my head too, so it wasn't that hard for me to read here. This was a great read by the way, and the titles you give to your peices are unimaginable. I wouldn't be able to think of these because they're so high in metaphors, and shit like that. Great job Bounce, you're a great writer. Feel free to hit any of the links in my sig, preferrably Struggle for Victory or Against all Odds.

[Bounce]

Thanks for the feed man, it much appreciated. I never got slept on in the past, but most the members who know my work have long been gone. This peice is complex in metsphors, so I'm glad you grasped it man.

[-sHaZZ-]

Nice Multies, Looks Pro Writtin strucutre with the rhymes go very will, I could picture it clearly when i read this, how long did this take you? Vocabulary was sick
keep it up-

[Drako MC]

wow, nice. Nothing to help you with, its great

[n0vakain]

"Dark voices sing to me in morbid tongues
Through frantic rhythms struck by failing lungs"

Those two lines stood out to me the most. The title alone here is a play on words which told me the piece would be very interesting and I was right.

Your imagery here was very nice, not mind bogling or anything but gave a good, sometimes vivid, mental picture of what you wanted the reader to invision. Your emotion into this was more heart-felt in some places than in the others, which helps the piece in quality of entertainment. Your structure was point throughout the piece, depending on syllable length of the word it made some lines shorter than others. It appears to me that you were going for..... i think.... correct me if i'm wrong.. 10 or 11 syllables a line? And you stuck to it for the most part... It wasnt really any scheme but I went back and counted and atleast it was all 10 and/or 11 syllables.

All in all this was a very good piece.. I'll have to read some others but so far this is the candidate for OMHOF of the month.

Very good read and hope to see some work of yours in the future.

~ peace.

[Illus']

"My blade cuts through facial tissue, ain't a racial issue
But more like 'a race to getchu', and erase officals
Symphonys echo aloud while screams hit a crescendo
Arcs of blood dance about in glorious spurts on the window"

Dope rhyme scheme dope style dope metaphor..
Unqiue freakin style...


"Cut throat's for sissys, I'll take your face off quick
Then wear your expressions while expressing I'm sick
Pressing a mic to your lips when I'm mouthing the spit
No doubting I flipped when I put a face to the music I script"

Love the violence on this part..
with the metaphor being displayed..
quick straight to the point emtional well
done...


"A modern day leather face...
I rip shows like the faces of those I wasted for show
Face it I'm cold whether it's a mic or knife that I hold
I deal death and spit forth flame with a demons breath
& I've split more brains than tag team whores on meth"

Multies were crazy here and your emotions were
expressed extremely good here. Nice lovely structure.
Props the best paragraph so far..

"Music speaks through my soul...
So I paint a melody in blood on a canvas of woes
Suppose I was asked to put a face to music in prose
I might hide behind the grin of the last victim I chose
& dance in the wind of the majestic speaker til blown..."


Wow very well orchastrated..damn..
Your best paragraph loving the canvas part.
The emotion is what kept me attached to
your piece.. as well as the rhyme.


definitely an Open of the Month..

for someone reason it reminds me of Big Pun
ish leather Face from his yeah baby album
just the way you went about expressing yourself

[Bounce]

great feed man, I really appreciate everyone coming in here and reading.

I know someone asked, this took me maybe an hour of on off on again writting once I developed the concept in my head. I was blowing herbs at the time so I wrote in between hookah blasts while bumping the beat I'm going to spit it to. It was a last second drop for the WOP tourney, nothing too involved. I just ran with the concept. Sounds sick through a mic tho... Dude asking about scheme, well I really didn't stick to a conventional text scheme, this was written for audio and text schemes just do not conform to a beat well.

[n0vakain]

Oh my fault... thought you were just going for syllable scheme blah blah blah....

Good lookin out though....

[SyCo_187]

This shit was fire man
*go to nominate for HOF*
everything was great in this peice
flow, structure, vocab was all on point
a nice change
i like the concept to, it was really good
nothing i didnt like about this
it was great

o0o can u please leave feed on the Om in my sig
"skin deep"
actually it doesnt matter, feed is wanted on any of them

[-sHaZZ-]

Oh my fault... thought you were just going for syllable scheme blah blah blah....

Good lookin out though....

Bounce if you put it to

Its gotta sound sick , Post it

[Bounce]

^ I don't think I'll post it, but if you get at me you know I'll send the track. It's for a project my band is collaberating on, so no go to posting. I might post a rough draft or something tho...

[Bounce]

I feel like the walking dead, good times last night...

up....

[Bounce]

up...

[_Lyrics]

okok bounce,
i know first u waz on sum lizzy bordon shyt lol, then by ur 5th stanza u was on sum letherface joint...wearin faces n shyt...lmao, but on the real it was a very sane but insane piece, im not sure if u were crazy on sumthin writing it, or u jus felt like it was time to write a descriptive bloodbath..., i noticed u liked using the concept of taking off anotherz face, found that1 a lil weird, the vocab was very clever, emotional input was high, and crazy tho, alwayz seen ur OM'z for reference cuz u alwayz seemed to be "the best" in open mics

My blade cuts through facial tissue, ain't a racial issue
But more like 'a race to getchu', and erase officals
^^^1st time i seen u gettin HOOD in ur verses, cuz most ur spitz are poetical, this is a change, but in any topic, u clearly wud come out good...hopin sum day ill do a collab w/u, if not, its w/e