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    Visions Of Realness

    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships...

    As time passes, mighty clashes amongst gladiators
    I was abandoned by neighbors & left surrounded by hater players
    Visions of death is what I rep, quite as kept
    I acquired the desire to spend the rest of my days in eternal fire
    Retired, Returned, nothing to earn, nothing to lose
    Still playin the blues, just another day in these shoes
    And as I keep layin these clues...

    Who in the hell are all these ppl?

    None of these niqqaz my equal, they evil, deceitful
    Opportunistic, boarderline sadistic
    Quicker than an instant leave'n negative imprints on infants
    For instance.. incest on your princess
    Incensed, enraged, from the cradle to the grave
    A mental slave from bein' played from back in tha day
    Goin' thru Full Circles, you dont come back the same
    And it really leaves a niqqa vulnerable
    What a fucckin shame
    I used to shoulder the blame, and I still do, now for different reasons
    My mind was misleadin', tellin me to conceed when..

    When you know your bitc# is cheatin..
    When you know your friends are stealin..
    When you know haters are squealin
    Dont catch feelins, visions of realness
    Any real niqqa in da field can & will feel this...


    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships...

    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships people don't speak of
    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships...

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    damn dawg - im really feelin dat shyt - ne nigga in the game can relate, my only problem is u coulda gangsta'd it out a bit cuz its so hood

    9/10 - jus cuz i could relate

    I used to shoulder the blame, and I still do, now for different reasons
    My mind was misleadin', tellin me to conceed when..

    When you know your bitc# is cheatin..
    When you know your friends are stealin..
    When you know haters are squealin
    Dont catch feelins, visions of realness
    Any real niqqa in da field can & will feel this...

    imma get dat shyt printed on a shirt or sumthin

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    lol thanx homie nuttin but love right?
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    oh and yeah imma gangsta rappa its my job homie

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    can i get some feed back damm

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    nice peice
    good flow, structure ext.
    i like the vocab
    this was a nice peice
    overalll everything here was nice

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    thanx uppin 4 more feedback

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    i enjoyed reading this one homie,the words where deep and had alot of feeling to them.i respect niggas when they spit the real,and it paints ah picture at the same time,that to me makes ah great mc homie.
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    thanz alot homie bigg
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    ermmm, i have something to point out here, hate me for it if you will..

    Actions have reactions, don't be quick to judge
    You may not know the hardships people don't speak of

    the first lines to a song, as soon as i find out which song it is ill post it
    sorry dude
    Back. Again.

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    thats gangstarr i know that
    i didnt know i was bitin tho

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