the anthem for dick riders

[noncentz]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...924#post3720924
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260706

Hook:
You stepped on stage and caught a lot of boos- whack ass
Leaving the stage is the only way they applaud for you-whack ass
You just lost your cash why you acting all rash-whack ass
Came at me with recycled and still got trashed-whack ass.

The only way I grill an emcee is on a fender after a hit and run,
fucking with these metaphors and puns/ are like seeing a promiscuous nun..
You getting chewed… I’ll have you… stunt double for bubble gum.
my lines are social workers, my specielties serving these bums.
Go head adopt my style but you didn’t donate cum
so the outcome remains that I can’t be sonned.
Sign a birth certificate on every rhyme in trifurcate
so the lines, copy written that I’ve done. you insignificant
I’m the product of rape at barrel point, if you that dumb
lets see how a son of a bitch compares to a son of a gun.
With the impact like bullets, every recital, is automatic
You’d require Downy on your rinse cycle.
You don’t want any static.it’s simple mathmattics
the ratio of survival are slimmer than none-rounded by a negative number
Slimmer than an Olson twins 3 some,
leaving you fucked more than Heather Hunter.
There’s a 90 percent possibility, those who oppose will die,
I question why the other 10 percent chance probability? And try.
I’m one of the best, undeniable by nine out of ten polygraph tests.
If I weren’t around this music would more likely be neglected and boring,
And no I aint a skeptic sleeping on others. I’m a narcoleptic snoring.
UNLIKE YOU I COULD GIVE A FUCK ABOUT FAME…
Deposit so many loads in your lame, bitches mouth drain,
Her tongue will inherit my first name,
That’s why I love dames with little brains that give a little brain,
Petite hoes that cant picture a bigger dick in they little frame.
Keep them practicing lamas penetration causes labor pains
You get no applause; you rhyme i flow like I had broken water mains for veins.
It’s insane how I could give Midol migraines,
the hot shit, you’ll choke off the gastric vapors
Ripping you off the top like perforated tablet paper.
You’ll fall off like the Lakers or Shaq’s acting career
It’s effortless to “get you open” like Paris Hiltons Pap smear.
Measured by light years
to the decimal of air waves registered by the human ear
My rhymes are immense, yeah
My could battle every member of the Triple nine and Mensa.
Am I really this ill? Test me if you doubt.
Brushing your teeth is the only way you cum~ming out the mouth.
Tired of cash trash on radio I’ll show you what I think your about
And wrap a Franklin to my dick, let the world see you blow amounts.


Hook:
You stepped on stage and caught a lot of boos- whack ass
Leaving the stage is the only way they applaud for you-whack ass
You just lost your cash why you acting all rash-whack ass
Came at me with recycled and still got trashed-whack ass.

mad respects to the cats that helped me elivate

Meta 5,Blunt,Warchild,Born to kill,Kaze,Credz, nuke3script, ndemik, nefarious mind, master blaster,djb, psykosis,
Johnny 6 feet, ill mental, west , com, eleete, chrit, panik, camrac, baron mind, spoken origami, edicus.

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Uppin

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upping

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damn sleepers

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damn sleepers

THIS IS FUCKED UP

[Duval]

LOL

This was ok. Probably better if it was an audio. You could still elevate on your flow and structure. The lyrics were aight. The flow and structure is the only thing I see that needs working on. The hook is nice and so are the verses. pz

[EvilJester]

YO!
good stuff man!
i liked these lines especially=

1)I’m the product of rape at barrel point, if you that dumb
lets see how a son of a bitch compares to a son of a gun.

2)Came at me with recycled and still got trashed-whack ass.

3)That’s why I love dames with little brains that give a little brain,
Petite hoes that cant picture a bigger dick in they little frame.

though, you should work on your topics a bit, and maybe a bit on your flow, but part from that, it was great
check out my open mic raps too, as im having no reply's either

[P. Mortuus]

YO some of the shit ya wrote there was rhymin good and all in all this rhymes hood dog, keepi it poppin'

[killamami1]

wtf at the hook lol...that was crazy but yet appealing and i agree wit miss clit it prolly woulda been better in audio but you did ya thing with the text..i definitely liked the metas you put in here and some of the rhymes in here was jus dopeness....your flow went off a lil at some parts but you picked it back up and kept going...i liked it 9.8/10

[MurDeR NiNe]

that was alrite
but i think you could do better
you gotta work on flow and the bidy
you had like one good punchline
but overall it was average
6/10

[noncentz]

that was alrite
but i think you could do better
you gotta work on flow and the bidy
you had like one good punchline
but overall it was average
6/10

ONE GOOD PUNCHLINE? I KNOPW IT WAS MROE THAT THAT NO OFFENCE OF COARSE BUT DAMN KID LET ME SEE WHAT YOU GOT

[noncentz]

my flows off but hey i never had flow i hold to content

[noncentz]

this is deaded