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    Courage

    I’m sampling the chorus from ‘Soldier Like Me’ by 2pac for this song

    I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
    It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
    I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
    I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin

    You think you challenging me will start Code Red
    It didn’t, I’ll jus respond with something I wrote-ed
    Your Stan and I’m Slim, you gon do some crazy shit
    I’ll be too busy, and then you’ll drive off of a bridge
    With your boyfriend in your trunk, he’s only a kid
    You want to battle me, but I don’t take advantage
    Of little puffs that start every line with the same word
    RED, damn, that was shit; it was like a lame turd
    I gave you my opinion, and you want to battle me
    You tried to diss me, and now it’s so sad to see
    That you say you’re 16, but you were born jus before me
    Faggot, you 15, I’ll break your wrists and spleen
    Jus for tryna say that you a year older, you aint 16
    When I find you, I’ma fuckin light you up with gasoline
    And hav your boyfriend jack you off with vasoline
    Cos my ass is mean, yo Em, hit it

    I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
    It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
    I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
    I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin

    Before you try to say it, this ain’t really dissin him, I’m not lyin
    It’s jus warnin him that I can drop good stuff when I’m not tryin
    But when I do try I come out with some stuff like Eminem
    Dude, I’ll nick all your rhymes and start selling them
    To some wack ass muthafuckas and I’ll start telling them
    To burn them like firewood to give them some heat
    Cos that’s all your stuffs good for, but I’m elite
    Even when I’m half asleep I drop bombs that make you weep
    Yeah, I drop bombs like I’m in Iraq or Afghanistan
    As if I’m tryin to find terrorists like Osama or Saddam
    Even though he’s already been caught, by the Americans
    These dumb fucks confirm he’s dead or alive, fuckin pelicans
    Cos I don’t know what else rhymes with the Americans
    So anyway…don’t fuck with me cos I got Soldiers
    In the Ghetto, and Hostile Minds, that will break your shoulders
    And we all got Courage

    I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
    It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
    I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
    I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    links r in my sig
    chorus is from 'Soldier Like Me' by 2pac ft Eminem
    peace

    leave links and i'll hit up ure drops
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    a gd drop and it flowed well and da rhymin was there aswell. keep workin at it and produce more gd dope drop

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    This was a nice drop, I like how u flow it......
    Tha hook is ight..........Keep elevatein and ima do tha same........

    Holla

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    uppin

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    uppin

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    don't get me wrong, i'm not hating......
    but outta all the disses i've seen, this is one of the weakest
    i expected much better from u dawg
    maybe u are...just keep droppin more and i'll leave more feed
    PEACE

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    good drop i was feeling the flow and ryhme scheme i give you 8/10
    THEY GONE HATE ME NOW

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    thnx
    uppin

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    To Me It Started Real Slow But Picked Up Way To Simple An Intro And It Seamed Forced But As It Progressed It Got Better And Im Feeling It
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    pretty tite flow yo fosho.. plenty of forward movement.. i wasnt really feelin the hook idea too much tho.. maybe be better in audio sense.... consistancy of verse was all good.. had sum decent multies.. keep expanding on them.. its all good....
    good character was put into this verse

    stay @
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    thnx uppityuppp

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    Just gna leave feedback same way you left it for me

    Sorry to tell you this mate, comparing yourself to Eminem... one of the best rappers in the world... not a good idea... It's like a guy who can do kick ups (English football analagy) comparing himself to Thierry Henry or Zidane...
    flow ws good mostly throughout
    rhymin ws simple
    structure ws old... I.E gasoline and vaseline...
    content was like every other G unit wannabe on this site's content... got to find your own voice and style...

    Elevate...


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    nice concept and wordage. Enjoyed reading throughout completely. Keep this work up

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    ^^G Unit wannabe? - i aint likin gunit
    i shit at kickups, i can only do 50-60 at the most
    i didnt compare myself to eminem - other ppl said one of my pieces was the same style to his
    but thnx for leavin feedback how i like it - to the point, without a load of crap to read to find out wot u need to wrk on

    note to terry:
    comparin yourself to Dr. Dre/Snoop Dogg...not good move...they are dope mothafuckas, and u jus a wrong fatherfucker...ure sig is bitten really
    Last edited by <Supreme>; December 29th, 2005 at 03:45 PM
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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