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k, u kno the rules
min 12 lines,
Deadline, 12hrs
check in
lets do this...
Checkin in
and for the rest of yaz, its topical, forgot to mention that lol
Ayo
Wuts tha topic we spittin on?
U can shoose it
shoose? how you mess s up wit c, there miles apart!!!
uh...topic is: First Love, break up, hope 4 the future.....
u kno...
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yeh , i get ya. Okay , checkin in ................
She was the girl i wanted to have forever....i thought she wanted it too....
Yo,
Do u remember that first day? Well as memory serves me
You walked into the room, and u looked so perfect
Hair flows like offsets, from the pacific ocean
Practically forcing me, to reveal my specific hopes, when
It happened, the ting-l-y feelin started to shake me..
..should i wait, instead of actin on this so hastly??
or should i take the feeling, and manifest words of passion
Guess its back to the drawing board, back this world of action
But suddenly, i caught the glissening, of ya brown eyes,
There's two parts to this feeling, and there aint no downside
You lookin irresistable, i feel my heart fluttering
And suddenly, i pick up the speech of a man muttering
''lets take it to ya room, let me do what ima do"
My heart suddenly sunk, from this new vision of you
I used to think that you was innocent, waiting for the right time
But i find, you kissing and huggin this dude and i cried
My tears, were a testament to feelings of hatred
I saw a knife block, thank god i didn't take it, cuz u
looked at me with pity, and pushed away the prick
He looked away and, shit, you walked away from satan's kid
I knew you were the chick that i saw in them tight jeans
starin at me, lookin lavish. Lookin killer like crime scenes,
i be, the luckiest person to ever murmer this
I love you baby girl, i'm never desertin this...
...When i look back and analyse, i could've done it different
I could've just admitted that i would've loved to been wit
You walkin through botanical gardens without a trouble
Accept the bad hurdles, rebuild through the rubble
Now we been together, what? Two years, the truth is
That i love you more than anything, without that loose shit
Of sayin without meaning, the most important Sentence
I been wit ya for a while, so i'm never gonna end it...
...cuz i love you too much...
I was a playa, misconceptions and decited was my strengths
I felt i was blessed with Gods gifts, but that was all in my head
I had nothing to live for, was always broken down in depression
Never had a true love, because of my retarded speach impediment
My routine was an early wake, then tears literally to sleep
And i never thought someone would help my needs to my feet
These were the days when i was cold, heart ripped from the chest
But a life saver came along, and put the spirit in my breath
Monica was her name, she was the guide to my recovery
And honestly, her jokes about my disabilty never bothred me
I felt enhanced, i was a new man, i felt more comfortable
She would help with my problems and loved to cuddle too
That's when i knew, Monica would never leave me to cope alone
It took too long for me to find her, so i can't give up what i owned
That's right... We started saying those simple words of comfort
Whenever i said " I Love You ", Believe i was being honest
In the past, people took one glance at me and just gave up
Like they didn't wanna know me, so they scold and play tough
But you? You're so much more then anything i could imagine
We knew each other so well, i asked for your hand in marriage
Then shock occured, a rejection was instantly mentioned
Your feelings changed so sudden....
................................well at least that's what i'm guessin
You've been helping me for so long, in fact, it's about 6 years
When you decided to say "no" after the proposal, i feared-
That i'd never find another person who listened like you did
Supported when in need, or would keep me safe with a fib
I guess i have no reason to be, why should i stay sane?
When the one i only ever loved, just spit it back in my face!
Only memories trigger me, the laughter has turned to screams
I breakdown without control as i replay the horrid scenes
So with a final wish, my last prayer keeps travelling quietly
"I hate but God protect her in life" , while i die silently
k, 1st uppin for votes
uppin............................................. ...........................
*yawns*
Uppin
gotta go wit legacy. better flow, and structure.
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thanx for tha vote, can we upp wit more reason for vote tho....
i gotta go wit legacy too i like his flo better i didnt notice any personals but ya'll both did good
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