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Thread: An Author's Alliterative.

  1. December 1st, 2005, 11:32 AM #1
    da2tha3
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    An Author's Alliterative.

    Alliterations awake awareness aptly. And ably
    bringing battalements' breakages badly. Blatantly
    crying creations can't crown creators. Chastity
    doesn't drown disappointed directors. Dastardly
    employers expect exceeding evaluations. Eventually
    fulfilment focuses feeling fraptual fashions. Frenetically
    grooming growth games gonna give gashings. Genetically
    homosapiens' hands hold his hashings. Hereditary
    impulses impair irreversible instances. Incendiary
    journalists jump juvenile. Jousting jokers jabbingly
    kicking kings, knocking keyed knighthoods. Kinetically
    limping, looking lost like 'Ladies Love'. Longingly
    mixing methane, menthol, Marijuana; Move morbidly
    nestling new-named narcotics, Nirvana nears. Nautically
    oblivious of origination, operations opened optically
    Pretentious perpetration, permeation permitted passively.
    Quick queen's quotations. Quite quietly
    repeating rhyming rotations, rest righteously.
    Sullen solidification seals sacrificed souls' sanity,
    troubled trecherations teach that tight 'trolls' travesty,
    usurps, upsetting utmost, underminings' underlay
    verbetares. Veneering volcano / vortex, valued velocity
    welcomed warmingly. What's worse... Wednesday's
    xcorcism, xpelled xtra-terrestrial xercise? Xactly.
    Yet yesterday your youthfulness yelled "yes, yearningly,
    Zulus zero zoningly, zebras zoned zealously"






    Ok, people may or may not make sense of it... but it does have a story and emotion to it's core.
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  2. December 1st, 2005, 02:31 PM #2
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    i can sort of understand it but i cant think of words to tell you wot i understand
    gd rhyming
    gd stucture
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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  3. December 1st, 2005, 02:35 PM #3
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    i think i saw this pecie beofre..but w/.e

    rhymes were good not a good topic didnt explain enough thogh
    rhymes were good flow was good struuctre...............
    overall this was good peace---
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  4. December 1st, 2005, 05:18 PM #4
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    Not a good topic? It's about an author who's bosses aren't satisfied. Therefore he turns to a life of drugs, has an operation, and dies. Then he comes back as "xtra-terrestrial".

    That might help people to understand it a bit.

    I think even having a topic in this is an acheivement in itself.

    If you'd seen it before, it was in the other section... this sure as hell ain't anyone else's work seein i wrote it on the train today.

    As it is, I appreciate the feed, seriously.

    Uppin people.
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  5. December 1st, 2005, 07:56 PM #5
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    Up to the top we go.

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  6. December 2nd, 2005, 10:47 AM #6
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    Come on, stop sleeping and give feed.

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  7. December 2nd, 2005, 10:46 PM #7
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    somebody. I know people are reading. DROP FEED.

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  8. December 4th, 2005, 05:31 PM #8
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    Bump! uppin.

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  9. December 5th, 2005, 04:46 AM #9
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    Uppin AGAIN.

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  10. December 5th, 2005, 05:16 AM #10
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    you had some aite shit going, but I didn't like how your wierd lil' style never changed....structure got boring after a few lines, and you seemed to stretch to find some of the rhymes there.

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    Originally Posted by Ha Style
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  11. December 5th, 2005, 06:01 AM #11
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    Good Vocabulary

    You used good vocabulary, but you did have an odd, choppy flow, but not bad over all. Try less similar ending words in a row
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