Soul Shocker Vs bruza

[Soul Shocker]

10-12 lines(no more no less)
30 mins after check
Blind Spit
No hate votes
No dickridin.

gl dawg

[bruza]

check in

[Soul Shocker]

I'm the talk of the site, you a late side-note,
Shit, who got exposed and made you the Great White Hope?,
You always talkin out ya ass, it's a "waste to speak",
Never use words you can't spell, so just say defeat,
Beggin for comments, a La-Z-Boy like Bed, Bath, & Beyond,
You should request one from my hand, it'll be happy to respond,
So Who's Been In Charge? I'm puttin you Under Observation,
On The Low, talk is cheap, end of conversation,
So forget your comeback and your wannabe friend sentiments,
The only person you got to represent you is dead presidents,
So check your ego at the door as a reminder to remember,
You weren't ever "in tha house", MC's would never let you enter,

[bruza]

This boys an arse hole – I’ll rap this prick like a knocker,
An his lyrics got no soul – hes just dropped another shocker.
Its not his fault hes dumb – he cant help he was born irish,
Like I cant stop my thumb – blinding this guys iris.
It’s the way that I type this – but he wouldn’t understand,
Im on some other shit – that he could never withstand.
Your bland, bitch - best keep on your arm bands,
Your still learning, titch – best stick to your brass band.
Your shittest thing ive seen - since that mr hankee,
The fakest mc – that trying so hard to be a yankee.

[Sage One]

Well, Soul had a verse that was off the fucking chain, and bruza had a verse, that wasn't bad. I am not saying it was too close or anything, but the battle was good, neither were lacking on their verses, but I give Soul my vote, for better structure, multies, punches, and flow. Peace.

[Sage One]

Well, Soul had a verse that was off the fucking chain, and bruza had a verse, that wasn't bad. I am not saying it was too close or anything, but the battle was good, neither were lacking on their verses, but I give Soul my vote, for better structure, multies, punches, and flow. Peace.

Sorry, just stating my two cents, lol. Big ups to both heads.

[bruza]

uppin this battle people honest votes no fuckin haterz please

[Archilleez]

aight ima break it down like this...
each bar out of 5...

Soulshocker
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I'm the talk of the site, you a late side-note,
Shit, who got exposed and made you the Great White Hope?,
alright opener, i liked it. 4/5
You always talkin out ya ass, it's a "waste to speak",
Never use words you can't spell, so just say defeat,
ok-ish, kinda weak 2/5
Beggin for comments, a La-Z-Boy like Bed, Bath, & Beyond,
You should request one from my hand, it'll be happy to respond,
lol aight 3/5
So Who's Been In Charge? I'm puttin you Under Observation,
On The Low, talk is cheap, end of conversation,
ok-ish 2/5
So forget your comeback and your wannabe friend sentiments,
The only person you got to represent you is dead presidents,
aight 3/5
So check your ego at the door as a reminder to remember,
You weren't ever "in tha house", MC's would never let you enter,
decent closer 4/5

18-30...
overall ok verse, wasnt great but wasnt whack.
punches couldve hit harder (altho ur opponent were worse) but imo u had a more interesting and creative verse.

Bruza
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This boys an arse hole – I’ll rap this prick like a knocker,
An his lyrics got no soul – hes just dropped another shocker.
alrite personal opener, coulda hit harder but aight. 3/5
Its not his fault hes dumb – he cant help he was born irish,
Like I cant stop my thumb – blinding this guys iris.
weak i didnt like it 2/5
It’s the way that I type this – but he wouldn’t understand,
Im on some other shit – that he could never withstand.
ok but self glory no real punch 2/5
Your bland, bitch - best keep on your arm bands,
Your still learning, titch – best stick to your brass band.
meh 1/5
Your shittest thing ive seen - since that mr hankee,
The fakest mc – that trying so hard to be a yankee.
bad closer, i dont like it 2/5

10/25
Overall quite a weak verse wasnt completely whack but u lost this battle on lack of punches.
ur structure and flow was aight, work on ur punches and personals.

v/ soul for the reasons above

If u can both show same respect and vote fairly on my battle in my sig would appreciate it.

[=||AnimaL||=]

it was a close battle.. !! but over all soul had some better punches.. n multis... !!
the otha stuff was tie... the only thing that bruza had it was the wordplay... !!!
v/soul

since i vote on this one.. !1
can yall hit the battle on my sig.. plzzzzz
thx

[Soul Shocker]

Why did I put it 300 posts Lol.Just so many dickriders these days.But tanx y'all for feedback.Uppin

[Black Hornet]

\/ Soulshocker

I thought he had an overall better verse with better structured disses and combonations.
Bruzas verse was still good, but couldn't match the impression left by Souls.

[Sage One]

Why did I put it 300 posts Lol

Wurd, it'll be harder to get votes.

[Black Hornet]

shit man, i didn't think we needed 300 posts!
some serious shit though.....


check out this battle vs Alphabet, is not bad.

[Archilleez]

polling my vote now... i forgot to poll before. just so u know where the vote has come from. my explanation is up there ^

link in the sig, thanks

[Soul Shocker]

Yeah tanx but would ya not agree that there so many dickriders these dats.