verses due Dec 2nd 12 EST
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voting will end on Monday.
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if Vylint wins he gets contendor.
verses due Dec 2nd 12 EST
3 links = 3 votes
normal rules...
voting will end on Monday.
now checkin...
if Vylint wins he gets contendor.
Last edited by Mystery~Murdera; November 22nd, 2005 at 06:11 PM
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
you're dead
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No problem you fucking faggot...
Thinks he's going to be champ but this is all a placebo
Bitch, even a master forger couldn't warrant that ego..
So don't feel low as I smash ya.. your consistencies your curse
Coz you can't stop winning... with the same fucking verse
You're good at topical? move away now coz I'm itching to slap sumthin
Coz I heard ya OM's are moving people, straight up to the back button
This fag likes bitching and beefing... but its all fake coz he's nice
So why cage your emotions .....a paper bag will suffice
Face it fag you're overpriced, get past me? kid I'm greater..
...there's more chance of hearing that Lay Doubt actually went and copped a razor
So see you later fag I've played ya and you're too wack to be in-scene
This was your vehicle to the playoffs...
....n' your skull cracked the windscreen
So someone tell me this kids green, a veteran? he must be shitting me..
You're not even a has been unless its 'has been laughed at repeatedly'
And I've heard you speak with a lisp, Vy on the mic? a disgrace....
Coz when his reign is finally over.. all I would do is wipe my face
I'll catch him sleeping, coming fresh.. so lets have less of the lectures bitch
Coz Vy your shits aged so badly....
...the bitten lines have dentures fixed
I kinda feel this bitch hates me, so I'm spitting shit to wreck this geek
But I think Vy will make it hard... to predict him getting the win next week
And yeah I got a girl... but Vy find love? rejections all you get
Dude you're only head over heals.. coz I haven't decided to floor you yet
So watch me step over of the new breed... and drown the weakest wack pup
I mean to say your rhymes are poor.. is an insult to the bankrupt
This wack slut's a fable...your cards are dropped from the table
And everytime I see Vylint I'm like... "dude wash your naval*
So yeah I know the fucking rules, I don't freepost around
But I'll still be back to up this battle.. after Vy's verse has pulled it down
I'll beat this bitch anywhere, even in the HIlton so watch this cheater fall
I'ma smash your brains outta ya skull.... and watch Parecetamol
now lets see how many days it takes you to reply Mr *i key up my shit*
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Com Ready? Let's start, the same time you stop rhymin dogg
eryone nose im the type of nigga even ya eyes wouldnt cross
'Im Dead' - that speakin cocky steez has got to stop with me
talk like that cats'll think confidence framed curiosity
everybody hangs on my words, i'm perfect and drastic
i wont send u to hell ina handbasket, ill make sure its a casket
This herb is a fagot, str8 the words on ya jacket
you can say im falling off, but motherfucker your a has been
i cant stand it, you think you a legend, man quit..
Your verses classic? What? you n' Dev quit collabin?
thats to bad kid, keep ya head up, keep holdin life
cuz well i'm out ruinin careers, you ruinin open mics
u got on a 5 week streak, all opponents just stayed back
cuz no one wanna show and embaress your played ass
your gay, wack, washed up, on RB i drop flames
and i'd rape your ass, but ur pic look like you got aids
keep tryin to play, i'll write till i'm enraged
well com dropped the verse of the yearl in ninety-eight
after i get done thumpin this herb, im bumpin the purse
but this'll be a contendership match, i fuckin deserved
originals crew aint shit, so you better not start see
your leader would trade you for me, in a heartbeat
get in line, cuz com ill split ya spine if u get in mine
if i whale on you... remember i got bigger fish to fry
your styles a joke, forreal keep rushin me ill piledrive ya hoe
a style like that it'll take me a sec...
to figure out how many lines you wrote!
you musta lost your mind, call jesus, QUICK!
your played ass goin thirty, no one wanna read that shit
did you go 28? Mr. My verse is done a couple hours later. Cocky faggot.
Thinks he's going to be champ but this is all a placebo
Bitch, even a master forger couldn't warrant that ego..
Eh...decent opener...nothing amazing though...
So don't feel low as I smash ya.. your consistencies your curse
Coz you can't stop winning... with the same fucking verse
Funny shit...
You're good at topical? move away now coz I'm itching to slap sumthin
Coz I heard ya OM's are moving people, straight up to the back button
Eh...played...
This fag likes bitching and beefing... but its all fake coz he's nice
So why cage your emotions .....a paper bag will suffice
Nice-ish...
Face it fag you're overpriced, get past me? kid I'm greater..
...there's more chance of hearing that Lay Doubt actually went and copped a razor
I dunno...some personal bout Lay killin himself? I guess I get it...just not thrilled by it.
So see you later fag I've played ya and you're too wack to be in-scene
This was your vehicle to the playoffs...
....n' your skull cracked the windscreen
Good...not so much a diss, more of a Spit type jawn...
So someone tell me this kids green, a veteran? he must be shitting me..
You're not even a has been unless its 'has been laughed at repeatedly'
Funny! Great flip on "has been"!
And I've heard you speak with a lisp, Vy on the mic? a disgrace....
Coz when his reign is finally over.. all I would do is wipe my face
Eh...not so great...sounds like he either pissed or came on ya! Gross!
I'll catch him sleeping, coming fresh.. so lets have less of the lectures bitch
Coz Vy your shits aged so badly....
...the bitten lines have dentures fixed
Eh...good...just not real hard.
I kinda feel this bitch hates me, so I'm spitting shit to wreck this geek
But I think Vy will make it hard... to predict him getting the win next week
Ha...good!
And yeah I got a girl... but Vy find love? rejections all you get
Dude you're only head over heals.. coz I haven't decided to floor you yet
Eh...borderline blah...
So watch me step over of the new breed... and drown the weakest wack pup
I mean to say your rhymes are poor.. is an insult to the bankrupt
Funny as fuck!
This wack slut's a fable...your cards are dropped from the table
And everytime I see Vylint I'm like... "dude wash your naval*
Bad, bad, bad...
So yeah I know the fucking rules, I don't freepost around
But I'll still be back to up this battle.. after Vy's verse has pulled it down
Ok-ish...
I'll beat this bitch anywhere, even in the HIlton so watch this cheater fall
I'ma smash your brains outta ya skull.... and watch Parecetamol
Huh? Why would she turn cannibal?
VS.
Com Ready? Let's start, the same time you stop rhymin dogg
eryone nose im the type of nigga even ya eyes wouldnt cross
Better opener than Com's...
'Im Dead' - that speakin cocky steez has got to stop with me
talk like that cats'll think confidence framed curiosity
I dunno...eh...but I get it...curiosity kills cats...
everybody hangs on my words, i'm perfect and drastic
i wont send u to hell in a handbasket, ill make sure its a casket
Eh...
This herb is a fagot, str8 the words on ya jacket
you can say im falling off, but motherfucker your a has been
Com already did "has been" up there and did it better...
i cant stand it, you think you a legend, man quit..
Your verses classic? What? you n' Dev quit collabin?
Eh...I guess...
thats to bad kid, keep ya head up, keep holdin life
cuz well i'm out ruinin careers, you ruinin open mics
Eh...same as above kinda...
u got on a 5 week streak, all opponents just stayed back
cuz no one wanna show and embaress your played ass
Eh...statement...
your gay, wack, washed up, on RB i drop flames
and i'd rape your ass, but ur pic look like you got aids
Eh...Com's sickly pic is played...
keep tryin to play, i'll write till i'm enraged
well com dropped the verse of the year in ninety-eight
Funny...
after i get done thumpin this herb, im bumpin the purse
but this'll be a contendership match, i fuckin deserved
Nice...not really a punch though...
originals crew aint shit, so you better not start see
your leader would trade you for me, in a heartbeat
Good...kinda a statement again though...
get in line, cuz com ill split ya spine if u get in mine
if i whale on you... remember i got bigger fish to fry
Forced...but nice...I liked.
your styles a joke, forreal keep rushin me ill piledrive ya hoe
a style like that it'll take me a sec...
to figure out how many lines you wrote!
Eh...whatever...
you musta lost your mind, call jesus, QUICK!
your played ass goin thirty, no one wanna read that shit
Another statement...
I got Com taking this...kinda easily...
Maybe others'll see it differently, but I'm a fan of wit and wordplay...
Don't really give a tiny rat's ass about so called personals.
Com was wittier...that's how I saw it.
Sorry, Vy...
Vote: Com
uh
com.
heres your good shit;
You're good at topical? move away now coz I'm itching to slap sumthin
Coz I heard ya OM's are moving people, straight up to the back button
^good line. pretty clever .. good wording
So someone tell me this kids green, a veteran? he must be shitting me..
You're not even a has been unless its 'has been laughed at repeatedly'
^same kinda punch as above, worded different. cool
And I've heard you speak with a lisp, Vy on the mic? a disgrace....
Coz when his reign is finally over.. all I would do is wipe my face
^kinda old but still funny
So watch me step over of the new breed... and drown the weakest wack pup
I mean to say your rhymes are poor.. is an insult to the bankrupt
^poor is an old concept but pretty good flip.
none of that was really good but i mean it was all above average. the concepts were clever, i didnt really like the execution, like the wording made it all softer. but yeah good shit
this is your bad shit;
Face it fag you're overpriced, get past me? kid I'm greater..
...there's more chance of hearing that Lay Doubt actually went and copped a razor
^bad. ugly, terrible flow .. corny concept in the first place. no flip to make it good
I'll catch him sleeping, coming fresh.. so lets have less of the lectures bitch
Coz Vy your shits aged so badly....
...the bitten lines have dentures fixed
^please shorten your lines a little. anyways very old concept bad wording.
This wack slut's a fable...your cards are dropped from the table
And everytime I see Vylint I'm like... "dude wash your naval*
^LOL .. all im gonna say is w t f
this shit was bad. bad bad
vylint.
heres your good shit;
everybody hangs on my words, i'm perfect and drastic
i wont send u to hell ina handbasket, ill make sure its a casket
^coulda done something better with it. but still pretty cool
your styles a joke, forreal keep rushin me ill piledrive ya hoe
a style like that it'll take me a sec...
to figure out how many lines you wrote!
you musta lost your mind, call jesus, QUICK!
your played ass goin thirty, no one wanna read that shit
^all four of those .. haha true.
your bad shit;
Com Ready? Let's start, the same time you stop rhymin dogg
eryone nose im the type of nigga even ya eyes wouldnt cross
^what. you said that against me like two weks ago
This herb is a fagot, str8 the words on ya jacket
you can say im falling off, but motherfucker your a has been
^so old & boring
your gay, wack, washed up, on RB i drop flames
and i'd rape your ass, but ur pic look like you got aids
^old :/
anyways overall this was pretty close. not too many impressive lines .. but a lot of just average shit. im gonna go with vylint because overall his verse just hit a little harder. whether it was the flow or the wording or whatever .. i just dug his shit more.
v-Vy
btw that lay punch is referring to him looking so young in his pic..(shaving)
Oh...ok...
I see what ya saying...sorta the same impact to me though - BTK
Last edited by Born To Kill; December 2nd, 2005 at 09:08 AM
ATTENTIONumm.... oKay.... if there is any cheating or bullshit, or d/r, or anything of the sort in this battle. Everybody who participated is
out of the league period. If you ask somebody to vote for you, you're gone till next season, if that somebody votes for you, you're gone till next seasion... and I will know... okay???
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
man sign me the fuck out mystery you got me fucked up.
vote: Vylint.
why its tied 1-1?
So don't feel low as I smash ya.. your consistencies your curse
Coz you can't stop winning... with the same fucking verse
You're good at topical? move away now coz I'm itching to slap sumthin
Coz I heard ya OM's are moving people, straight up to the back button
So someone tell me this kids green, a veteran? he must be shitting me..
You're not even a has been unless its 'has been laughed at repeatedly'
I'll catch him sleeping, coming fresh.. so lets have less of the lectures bitch
Coz Vy your shits aged so badly....
...the bitten lines have dentures fixed
vs
keep tryin to play, i'll write till i'm enraged
well com dropped the verse of the yearl in ninety-eight
after i get done thumpin this herb, im bumpin the purse
but this'll be a contendership match, i fuckin deserved
originals crew aint shit, so you better not start see
your leader would trade you for me, in a heartbeat
i got com in this one. i just felt he was a little harder nd more consistent. vy the punches i quoted came from a nice section in ur verse, but i think com took it.
Com wins
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.