yo i set it up so u droppin first lets cya verse
yo i set it up so u droppin first lets cya verse
yo here it go i had alot a shit ta do today
at the start of this battle it would be a terrible cliche just to say that ur gay//
so lets get on how he claim he hood but live in DOWNTOWN,... LA//
but fuck it, in this waste of time im pullin out some of tha stops//
since he live DOWNTOWN i guess it changes that he dont ride dicks, he... ride cocks?//
i aint even gotta get creative wit em just state the negatively positive//
hes 13 talkin big and bad over the net knowin in person he'll do the opposite//
matter fact it took me so long ta post cause me and ya moms was discussin ya punishment//
then she got all stupid blamin me 4 u but begged me ta beat um out again so i had ta punish IT//
see u know he way over his head no set rules wastin his battle credits for a unjust beating//
metaphrically i could really start rapping and cause ur computer ta attack u while ya sleeping //
get out of my arena wit ur below average flow//
hmph......., just ta prove my stamement i murked um wit a average one though//
yo this be pyro reppin that golden state
so i aint a trick from portland like u so i couldnt relate
to those rymes u was spittn it simply suckedwas all just dumb
walkin on people private lawns is the hardest thning that go down where u from
u come to L.A. i ganentee ya head get severd
but when was portland on yea never
i bet even this dude could even tell wat he was talkin bout
he dont no how to take wins he only nos how to take it in the mouth
all that was was hate and fake lyrics nuttin like a real verse
i wouldnt let u beat me while im slepping id murder u first
even if i didnt i spit at u in my sleep
to my verse u lost read it and weep
this dudes needs to no how to rap so he getttin told
he just mad he gettin killed by a 13 year old
in ya signiture it says death is wat u reap so im comin bak from the dead
so dont talk shit or i'll give u a taste of some lead
in cali u learn how to pump gats stak money and straight up be a man
but u comin from portland i wouldnt expect u to understand
there u to obey the law disobey i no u will not
my rymes blaze and burn u thats the only time u hot
im iller than u thats a factor
if u supposed to be a g i guess u's a bad actor
i finally leave this dude left and tatterd
but i left his mom like strucutre... fucked up and scatterd
ok uppin som votes on dis battle
i give this one to quentblak he had more punches and better structure man pyro you
jus were weak in that
uppin yo explain tha votes........................................
Punches=pyro
Personals=pyro
Struc=both
Battlegrade=b
Both Of Yall Was Kinda Weak But Pyro Had Enough Punches 2 Win This Both Need Harder Punches And Metas And Personals Bad Elevate
Vote/pyro
thx uppin some more votes
uppin............................................. ..........
v/ pyro
qwent your shit was decent but you were more concentrated on pullin age jokes and useless shit.. no real punches. the flow of your peice was kind of sketchy in parts. structure was decent but i dont like the bold words at all man, shits like you dissin our intelligence.
pyro you had weak flow as well. but battles are all about puches and you had more. more personals rippin him about being from portland and shit. you countered his age puches and actually used them against which i liked. and same as him structure was weak. so you could really only judge on puches which you easily surpassed him in .
yo isee what u sayin its just that sayin it is way different and thats where i fuck up but yae i see that.
uppin some votes
v/ pyro......
better an funnier punches...qwent-i couldnt really stay in flow wit yer verse but that aint why im votin for pyro...i jus str8 up liked his verse better...stay up both yall
if u guys liked my verse then vote fo it
uppin for some more votes cmon just vote
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