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    Question Don't Do Drugs (New Version)

    ((This is not a diss/battle verse))

    (Dont do drugs)
    Don’t do drugs or you’ll end up as fucked up as me,
    Get pissed off, flip off at teachers, you won’t play happily
    Get booted out of anger management school stab your councillors
    Go to the club, get angry, and start on fat bouncers
    You see how fucked up my white life is
    Well it’s better than yours so I won’t dis
    Oh I might as well; I don’t give a fuck if you have kids
    Fred Durst, is it true Christina just kissed your grits
    Cos I doubt it, you’re gay, she’s a lesbian
    And Leonardo Di Crapio is a thespian
    But the only thing he should be in is the sewer,
    And if this bitch keeps annoying me, I’ma sue her
    Then she’ll counter-sue, and I’ll sue her back
    Cos she calls me the effect of smoking crack
    But I don’t smoke crack - I just pop pills
    And Eminem gets bollocked for every teenager who kills
    His school mates cos he’s being bullied
    By these fat fucks being hurried
    Into class, To beat his ass
    Like the beef between Marshall and D’Angelo Bailey
    He’d be beaten, kicked, punched and fucked with daily
    And teachers wouldn’t give a damn
    About these fucks with their evil plans
    To beat him, or kill me
    Cos I wouldn’t give them any speed,
    Weed, crack, mushrooms or anything else illegal
    My arms tired of being told to stand and spread eagle,
    And these kids too scared to tell their parent
    Because they’re struggling to pay the rent
    And Cooper, just cos you’ve paid the rent so many times
    Doesn’t mean that you own the house, so stop doing your crimes
    And you won’t have to pay to get out of prison
    And then you’ll be able to fuck Wallis and Jason (gay)
    I don’t know why the fuck I’m writing in the first place
    (Don’t do drugs)
    So don’t do drugs or you’ll end up as fucked as me
    Get pissed off, flip off at teachers, you won’t play happily
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    Yo Dis Was Deep Jigga We Keep It Rough In Da Bayou Nah Meanz

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    yo dis was dope it was like some eminem shit

    tight flow
    nice vocab
    and sick word play

    i rate this 8 outta 10

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    thanx dogg, i listen to Eminem alot, and to be told my stuff is a bit like his is amazin, thanx
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    very early eminem had a great flair to it its an escape from the same day to day bullshit.mad props peep my joint random lyrical tantrum anthem. stay up
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    more opinions plz
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    yo i got a crew im strating if you interested called broak howz peep the tryout on crew hook up
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    need more comments plz
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    shiiiiiiiiiiit nice drop jo...and yea u on some em type shit just a lil bit mo vocab homie but overall nice drop
    Close dis shit:

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    Any luv...? more comments plz, i will comment on ure stuff if u leave links

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    it was wack. it had horrible flow. you sound like some eminem-wannabe, which im sure you are, and its clear to me that none of this has never happened to you.

    needs more multies too

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    this topic was interesting.....I liked it ....

    this was pretty dope and yes this was sum eminem style shit

    nice job on dat..rhymes were good

    good drop overall keep at it..peace

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    uppin...
    leave links and i'll comment on your stuff
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    I also agree with almost everyone in here that its a eminem type style. the drop was pretty decent. the flow in my point of view was way off, and i didnt like the structure and the set places of the words used in your piece. Eminem is a great role model for any kid listenin to em (ahahah) but just make sure that you dont drift to far in an eminem state. cause the world has seen what 1 eminem can do and if you be the next, you prolly wont go far for people will say that your just a wack eminem or something. but gettin off topic, the humor was pretty decent also alot like em's.

    Keep droppin man you can get real good if you keep goin the way you goin.

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