10-12 lines
no dr, bs, feeding, bitin, crew vote, prewrites.... check in 5min spit 15 after...
Lifestyl
Pax
10-12 lines
no dr, bs, feeding, bitin, crew vote, prewrites.... check in 5min spit 15 after...
checkitty check!!!! fifty!!!!! characters!!!!!!
Check..........
Ok look nigga i peeped ya other battles and ya punchlines was sorry
Not mine though dey hit harder den slam dunks..............from amare
See listen to da metaphores dat come off da tip of my tongue
I had ya bitch last night singing to me like.................IMMMMM SPRUNGGGG
I said bitch calm down i thought ya got a man
She said yea but he got me obssesed wit you hes ya numba 1 fan like stan
So nigga im sorry but work on ya skillz ya soft..........ya need to practice
While me on da other hand im spittin harder den a cactus
I aint dissin religon but i know ya was gonna be soft pax
So i guess ima have to kill dis religous icon.............cuz i spit anthrax
Found you in "bitch slapped" kid must be used to the "lifestyle"..
ya "rhymes tired" like "old hook"-ers he bites offa "MTV LIVE".. ***
kid says "he aint big" no hesitation, guess his pics all compensation..
no dedication, only prize this poll hands you is consolation..
find room to run...outside of this forum, ya skills diminished when ya finished ya title..
suicidal? he must be, why ay thnk the ribbons on this kids wrist say "dont open before christmas"..
his gift to us while the polls leave him "listless"..
i tricked-his brain, one more loss for him, status quo remains..
Just call this "noweight" a "hilton" cuz a hard spit from him would be a "walk through Paris"..
Fearless? no, i bring em to the party cuz i always needa beer bitch..
*** ayo check this out, kid bit offa MTV when he battled JHOOD
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247366
what are you talkin about.......when was there ever a battle on mtv......and from what i heard he said lala get a clue.........fuckin pussy......i dont need to bite and if i did i would bite everyline bitch not just outta nowhere dats no sense
uppin dis shit number 1.....................
My vote goes to Pax. for better punches, and wordplay. He had a lot of good disses in there, and his metaphors were on point. He also maintained a good structure, but it wasn't top notch. Lifestyl, urm, don't use so many periods to space out your structure. It just confuses your reader.
v/ Pax.
Hit this up.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247648
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uppin yo.... check it out....dirty south yo....what?
uppin 2 yeah, need more honest votes yall, let's find em.... i vote honestly, i promise...
v/ pax all catz i dont even know wat u were trying to diss rapstyl?
punches-pax
personnals-pax
flow-pax
v/pax and u right i am a vet in other sites lol this is new to me cause u guys make the due time quicker and i dont know if im allowed to vote soo ll wait until u tell otherwise
Ok look nigga i peeped ya other battles and ya punchlines was sorry
Not mine though dey hit harder den slam dunks..............from amare
(meh)
See listen to da metaphores dat come off da tip of my tongue
I had ya bitch last night singing to me like.................IMMMMM SPRUNGGGG
(na)
I said bitch calm down i thought ya got a man
She said yea but he got me obssesed wit you hes ya numba 1 fan like stan
(lol alrite)
So nigga im sorry but work on ya skillz ya soft..........ya need to practice
While me on da other hand im spittin harder den a cactus
(cactus spits??)
I aint dissin religon but i know ya was gonna be soft pax
So i guess ima have to kill dis religous icon.............cuz i spit anthrax
(meh)
vs
Found you in "bitch slapped" kid must be used to the "lifestyle"..
ya "rhymes tired" like "old hook"-ers he bites offa "MTV LIVE".. ***
(shit lifestyl didnt mean to fuck u like that lol.....alrite personal)
kid says "he aint big" no hesitation, guess his pics all compensation..
no dedication, only prize this poll hands you is consolation..
(nice)
find room to run...outside of this forum, ya skills diminished when ya finished
ya title..
suicidal? he must be, why ay thnk the ribbons on this kids wrist say "dont open before christmas"..
his gift to us while the polls leave him "listless"..
(alrite )
i tricked-his brain, one more loss for him, status quo remains..
Just call this "noweight" a "hilton" cuz a hard spit from him would be a "walk through Paris"..
(didnt rhyme well but nice never less.)
Fearless? no, i bring em to the party cuz i always needa beer bitch..
(meh)
btw plese check and drop a honest vote in this battle..I did on this one.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247612
Ill vote for pax
uppin..... honest votes anyone that has 200 posts or more...
just leaving feed think of it as if i get my posts up i'll be able to vote for you fella'z....anyhu i'd vote pax wordplay was strong flow was a lil off...but the personals was tight dissed everything ya could....lyfstyl was aiight but ya verse was nothing compared to pax ya feel??? no hate just honest peace
I have to give a vote to lifestyl
his just was more on track
steady flow
pax kind of mashed in a couple to many word s that through
me off.
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