Dollars Make Sense - Daz & Nah

[Nahlidge]

Daz
Nahlidge


It’s like

This road I’ve traveled is broken and strewed with glass
And.. my maps are wrong, im hoping its to my path
And its like my shit caved in, that night my chick gave in
The night we fucked, on that slick pavement
Or the night I cut myself til my wrists gave in
Hoping I could drain myself of the shit within
Chuz I started slowly, bargained my way to the top
Never gave to the opp., & their faces were shocked
When they seen how I worked to remain at the top
What I gave just to stay I was made for the job
I was stable and able maintaining a job
Got the check, I was pissed, It was plain we were robbed
& this aint the way , gotta seed on the way
I believe in my dreams, but my dreams wouldn’t pay
As I stand with this mask on the peak of my face
Dollars make sense, that’s how I needled my fate

Been on this road before, and honestly I don`t miss it
But a part of me has parted me to come pay it a visit
Sittin`, waitin` for the bus, don`t feel like walkin`
Tired, and on top of that, my heart don`t feel like talkin`
Why don`t she just leave me alone? On my knees and I`m grown
But seein` me grow without her, just ain`t easy to cope
Beleive me, I`m broke, when it comes to love...I`m fucked
Then we fuck, or make love, then break up, then make up
Tryna, break up...her make up, but she`s closin` the door
Shoulda turned around, the fuck I try to open it for?
Maybe I was...hopin` for more? But what granted was less
Spent light years in the dark, tryna make our planets connect
You know, like Venus and Mars, fuck all the stars in between
They never fall my way, that only makes it harder to dream
Harder to seam this broken heart, plus I`ve tried too much
They told me "Dollar make sense", but money won`t buy her love

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245710
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247632

[TheKing]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=246957
peep it fuckuhs^^

well.. this piece had DOPE mwetaphors, and i mean DOPE... and the way you both used the road styles was like you have been working on this for a while, dope imagery and structure, and the best line was the Venus And Mars line

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=246957
check it

[Nahlidge]

lol actually we did this up quick. It came out nice tho. Thanks for the feedback.

[EyeBite]

rhymes were good both of you....flow and strucutre was good....and you say you did this quick hard to beleive but i do....nicely done both of you..cool topic..doppe rap skillz in diss....great drop....complexity was here also....vocab was good too....overall this was like 9/10...keep it up...peace

[ExDaGawd]

Flow and rhyming were good, Stayed on point heres the lines I liked the most:

Chuz I started slowly, bargained my way to the top
Never gave to the opp., & their faces were shocked
When they seen how I worked to remain at the top
What I gave just to stay I was made for the job
I was stable and able maintaining a job

Tryna, break up...her make up, but she`s closin` the door
Shoulda turned around, the fuck I try to open it for?
Maybe I was...hopin` for more? But what granted was less
Spent light years in the dark, tryna make our planets connect

[Daz]

Hi.

[Daz]

.Hell Oh.

[Daz]

..this is getting gay

[Daz]

i have more ups then replies.

[Keyser]

This was an enjoyable piece to read, although it was off the top, it came together nice and it flowed well, i thought your imagery was really good also.....

Maybe I was...hopin` for more? But what granted was less
Spent light years in the dark, tryna make our planets connect
......
Harder to seam this broken heart, plus I`ve tried too much
They told me "Dollar make sense", but money won`t buy her love

^dope lines, and overall i really good drop off the top.

[Nahlidge]

Uppin`.

[Daz]

Skip.

[.:KLePTo:.]

Maybe I was...hopin` for more? But what granted was less
Spent light years in the dark, tryna make our planets connect
^dope bar

Liked this piece, good imagery, flowed good, more could have done with it but for a off the top of the dome piece it was good.....had good meta's throughout.

[Daz]

thanks.

[Nique.]

Niiiice drops from you both.

This road I’ve traveled is broken and strewed with glass
And.. my maps are wrong, im hoping its to my path
And its like my shit caved in, that night my chick gave in
The night we fucked, on that slick pavement
Or the night I cut myself til my wrists gave in

^Loved the opener. Dope shit.

Maybe I was...hopin` for more? But what granted was less
Spent light years in the dark, tryna make our planets connect
You know, like Venus and Mars, fuck all the stars in between
They never fall my way, that only makes it harder to dream
Harder to seam this broken heart, plus I`ve tried too much
They told me "Dollar make sense", but money won`t buy her love

You both had some real dope spots and some memorable lines...I'm definetly feeling this..keep dropping guys