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-=Illest Skill=-
chicho
topic will be life after death
unlimited lines
due by tomorrow at 11 pm.
check in
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Viva La Resistance!
this my check i'll drop by tomorrow
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Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
Life After Death
I sit at home and ponder an unaswerable question, is there life after death?
Life after the moment you die? The minutes after you exhale your last breath
An existence that you can only get to through the extinction of your flesh
The extinction of your blood and your breathing, Where your soul becomes fresh
A celestial plain, where the living are dead, and the undead are the sane
Where living is exciting instead of bland, Celestial land, Where it does not rain
Questions with no answers because none who have passed could ever report back
And the intellegence to find the truth our feeble civilization lacks
Wishing I would get stabbed in the back, To the point that my spinal cord gets severed
So I can see the truth behind the theories, To travel where no living has ever endevered
Travel through doors in reality connected to the magistic celestial plain made by the non-living
To witness and experience the mystical gift of non-existance, To be invisncable and unforgiving
Talk and chill with the forgotten whom passed away, See the one they say is our maker
"The one whom loves us all", The overexageratted saying by the followers of the "only" creator
Disrupt past lives that live in this unknown and unexplorabled land, Where the only passageway is dying
The indemnifying place overlying the real world if thats what you call it, The dead defying the living
Life after death is a geuss to everyone, none are smart enough to be alive when they venture there
So is there life after death? Its up to you and if you think there is then ill see you there
We'll chill, kick back relax and listen to some harsh beats, Chill with biggie, Pac and all the others deceased
Have a feast with the spirit of a priest, Watch the heavenly land's population increase
So when i become deceased, A pile of rotten decaying flesh, I'll see the turth and get my answers
But for now ill fuck exotic dancers, Make advances in science, And drive to my death in my Lancer
fuck whatever.... all i could think of lol to many mental blockages......
goodluck
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
i talked yo illest and he said i could post today some ima post today
AIM Bandits!
Viva La Resistance!
[U]LIFE AFTER DEATH
The biggest question in the world right now is if there is life after death
What will happen to someone when they take their last breath
Will they go to hell, heaven, thugz mansion or stay wondering the earth
Who knows what will happen when you get out of the hearse
six feet deep with your tombstone that reads R.I.P.
when you don't know if they do so u stay wondering in your sleep
what happened to that homie that was gangbanging and robbing
wrong person robbed, got shot now theres a mother sobbing
dug this homie in the cementery next to his grandma
now where does he go? does he he burn in hell with satan
or does he go smoke weed with pac, biggie, pun, Big L, and his grandpa
or go to heaven live peacefully with the person that discovered creation
dats the biggest question that will never be answered in this day in age
until u die you will figure it out when you turn to ur lifes next page
AIM Bandits!
Viva La Resistance!
vote/ illest
his sounded like a story form like he already knew what he was gonna type good struc and made since
and chicho yours was good 2 but it didnt make since like illest's did good struc also
yo both had nice verses i was feeling both but i think illes won this battle he had more emotion and he made it clear for me 2 see the picture chicho that was nice for your first time but u have to try and add more emotion cuz it was like you wrrelost in your own vere good battle to both
thanks and chico nice drop.........................
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
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Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
upin.............................................. .......
AIM Bandits!
Viva La Resistance!
ok good topical battle here ya go:
Illest- good structure, good flow, great wordplay, you stuck on point with your topic, you had really good vocab, and great rhymes......it was good shit overall nigga keep it up....
Chicho- good structure, decent flow, yours was sort of simple for this also simple topic, decent vocab, rhymes were good.....I'd say you did alright overall I know your more of a battle rapper......
ima give this one to illest for bette roverall good battle though.....
V/ Illest
nice verses uppin for both............................
uppin............................................. ....................
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
upping whores!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Let The Pen Bleed So My Wrists Don't
Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist
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