[TFC] Kapa vs Rizzo [RF]

[Smack Daddy]

10 lines.

Blind spit.

Due Sunday, October 16th, 11:59 PM EST

[Token Muslim]

check.

[u n r e a L]

This is a joke.

[u n r e a L]

wanna post soon?

[u n r e a L]

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LMFAO. ya verses are dumb shit, and im shittin me
like fucked up sin-tax, as if jesus preffered charged fees
ya priorities are messed up. preferences are in rotation.
true, ya ain't a menace. men-is is just your sexual orientation
your kissin ass, talkin shit loud 'n dirty, 'n ya's looks killin me
i got your whole style labeled an oxymoron
cause you got garbage delivery
I'm comin flat at ya, and boy, ya rhymes are weak 'n don't connect
Makin' ya all tongue-tied,
after it's yanked out and tied around your neck.
woooaa niggaaa, RB ain't for you bro, so hang ya style up
it's not cuz your punches don't lan, man. They are barely dial-up.

[Token Muslim]

10 lines....yup....g/l

everybody has kaps on lock, look at ya keyboard, i'm no liar
This street fighter wouldn't be tighter................................
....................................wit rope walkers on his speed dialer
lol..COWard tried 2 squash BEEF by throwing PATTIES at my CALFS
this dickhead PRESSING his LUCK like the IRISH IRONIN there pants
ALPHA(after) i put a KAPA in dis fagets ass, he'll let out a OMEGA SIGH
I'll bring out the DART games and swing just so i can hit this BULL'S EYE
We FALL asleep on ya DROPS, cuz every line is boring
KEY punches like PIANO'S they rearrange ya ORGANS
Only time u was HOT was getting FIRED from work & dat never pays
In this FINAL CHAPTER, I SCHWARZENEGGER(swore this nigger)......
.................................................w as gonna be his END OF DAYS

[Token Muslim]

Upp #1

[UnMerkable]

LMFAO. ya verses are dumb shit, and im shittin me
like fucked up sin-tax, as if jesus preffered charged fees
nice
ya priorities are messed up. preferences are in rotation.
true, ya ain't a menace. men-is is just your sexual orientation
nice wordplay
your kissin ass, talkin shit loud 'n dirty, 'n ya's looks killin me
i got your whole style labeled an oxymoron
cause you got garbage delivery
nice
I'm comin flat at ya, and boy, ya rhymes are weak 'n don't connect
Makin' ya all tongue-tied,
after it's yanked out and tied around your neck.
lmao....nice
woooaa niggaaa, RB ain't for you bro, so hang ya style up
it's not cuz your punches don't lan, man. They are barely dial-up.
again nice wordplay

Ya verse was tight mayne, overall i saw nothing wrong with it except structure....solid


VS


everybody has kaps on lock, look at ya keyboard, i'm no liar
This street fighter wouldn't be tighter................................
....................................wit rope walkers on his speed dialer
didn't get it at first, but a second read did it,.....nice wordplay/personal
lol..COWard tried 2 squash BEEF by throwing PATTIES at my CALFS
this dickhead PRESSING his LUCK like the IRISH IRONIN there pants
roflmao....nice meta's and wordplay
ALPHA(after) i put a KAPA in dis fagets ass, he'll let out a OMEGA SIGH
I'll bring out the DART games and swing just so i can hit this BULL'S EYE
Sority,nice....woulda been even better if worded better..nice tho
We FALL asleep on ya DROPS, cuz every line is boring
KEY punches like PIANO'S they rearrange ya ORGANS
nice
Only time u was HOT was getting FIRED from work & dat never pays
In this FINAL CHAPTER, I SCHWARZENEGGER(swore this nigger)......
.................................................w as gonna be his END OF DAYS
lmao.....bad movie, nice ender

damn overall same thing i jus told him.....fix structure and ya verse would been perfect

this was the nicest battle i've seen in a while, where u actually have to make a hard choice......it took me some extra reading to decide who would get my vote, but be for i vote, i jus wanna say u to dropped dope ass fuck, both verses was raw except yall structure

So to my vote my, vote came down to this break right here

Punches- both
meta's- both
multies-rizzo
structure- neiter
wordplay- both...(dope as hell)
personals- rizzo

rizzo get's my vote because his verse was more diverse, kapa ya verse was meta's and punches and that's all, rizzo had personal's that he flipped into a meta or punch suck as the ender and the sorority line, and he also had a couple multies that spiced up the read

vote- rizzo ^^^ that's why.........no hate to either one of you

[Smack Daddy]

Wtf @ that whack vote.

Lets get some real people to vote.

[phlymo]

i reckon kapa took it personally. opened and closed a little forced but not too bad, and had a few pretty nice concepts thrown in there. he was a little more consistent for my liking. rizzo's verse wasn't bad but i was really thrown by some wordplay which was waaay too forced. alpha and after sound really disimilar, and schwarzeneggar and swore this nigger doesn't work cos of the austrian pronunciation. that made rizzo's verse inconsistent to me, which is a shame cos elswhere he had some nice concepts.
v/kapa

[u n r e a L]

Your telling me Alpha sounds like After and Schartzenegger sounds like Swore this nigger?

You must have some accent.

Upp'n.

[Tru$t]

ya both did good...but rizzo had nice punches.. and flow.shit was nice
v/rizzo



vote dq'd - K

[Archilleez]

this was close im gona have 2 read it again and break it down 2 vote but

"Your telling me Alpha sounds like After and Schartzenegger sounds like Swore this nigger?

You must have some accent.

Upp'n."


lmfao that wud have been good in your verse

[Quarter]

close battle you both came hard but rizzo just had a little bit better punches, and better personals....


vote dq'd - K

[good.vs.evil]

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