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Thread: Down For The Cause

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    Down For The Cause

    "ayo ya'll ready ain't no time to pussy out i gotta get ya'll hype so ya'll can be down for the cause u kno wat i'm sayin"
    (Verse 1)
    ayo there's some nigga's down the street lookin fo some beef
    so they fuckin come down to my hood a start some shit wit me
    they say"u a faggot mothafucka i'll kill you and ya whole family"
    but i keep it cool they done made a mistake to come challeng me
    so i take a scroll down the street to visit my niggas down in MCity
    walk in wit my glock in my hand and say"are ya'll ready to get busy"
    then my nigga DD say yea wats da problem wats bout to be goin down"
    and i say"listen i need ya'll there is some niggas yappin down across town"
    and then my brother jumps in and says "ayo nigga's lets get this shit crackin"
    "because them othat niggas is bitches and ya know bitches r made for smackin"
    then i say"it's on let's go to they hood at about twelve it's time to break da law"
    "yo but first niggas i gotta make sure that ya'll can really be down fo the cause"

    (Chorus)
    yo niggas this shits bout to go down
    we about to break all the laws
    they made it there destiny to die
    and now there destiny calls
    no time to back out no time 4 second thoughts
    cause i gotta make sure ya'll niggas is down for the cause

    (Verse 2)
    aww yea niggas them pussies done fucked up this time
    cause all my niggas gettin in da car holden the big nine's
    we get ready as we put on all are black clothes & attire
    and all my niggas is serious ready for my plan to take fire
    as we cruised down the streets faces grim and lights dim
    we taking a stroll around and da streets are lookin grim
    i really can't believe these nigga's actin like they hard
    but just wait until my glock leave em physically scared
    our little joyride is ova now it's time to get real serious
    and none of my ppl are gettin scared or neither delirious

    (Chorus)
    yo niggas this shits bout to go down
    we about to break all the laws
    they made it there destiny to die
    and now there destiny calls
    no time to back out no time 4 second thoughts
    cause i gotta make sure ya'll niggas is down for the cause

    (Verse 3)
    ayo one more time niggas i gotta make sure ya'll down
    "hell yea we ready to lay this pussies under the ground"
    as we take the turn into the hood we know it's all good
    because them nigga's were hustlin thinkin dat they hood
    we drive down to the end of the road wit da windows up
    we roll back thru and start bustin blowin all da windows up
    my bro shot two nigga's down but his face still had a frown
    so i handed him the AK47 and told him to lay everything down
    as we made our last round trip my nigga DD got out and blasted
    we killed every nigga out there but if u they fam i'll buy the casket

    (Chorus)
    yo niggas this shits bout to go down
    we about to break all the laws
    they made it there destiny to die
    and now there destiny calls
    no time to back out no time 4 second thoughts
    cause i gotta make sure ya'll niggas is down for the cause

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    aye that was pretty good homie i liked your flow and u had a somewhat dope chorus, Id say put some more vocab in it and its hott

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    yea homie that shit was hot.......as usual.keep writin
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    the structure was str8....jus work on ur wordplay a lil basic but its ok its hard.....but um jus work on that and ul get nicer when u keep writing...

    also drop 2 links so it wont close

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    I Put The 2 Links In My Sig

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    ...ite this was coo..u just need some creativity and werdplauy of a verse like this...ur talkin bout klillen and beefin....use some imagry so we can feel like were there in the beef with u get descriptive and ish ya feel me...ur structure was str and ur flow was on point that i can say most def

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    more feed plz

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    this piece was good from yu but I think you should make it an audio track cuz it will sound better as an audio track but keep up the good work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by vafinest
    this piece was good from yu but I think you should make it an audio track cuz it will sound better as an audio track but keep up the good work.
    if i had a damn mic i would but i ain't got a mic

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    Keep shit poppin my nigga, I like it.....YALL CHECK MINE OUT



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    uppin for more feed

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    Before i read...
    holy fuck that is long! i can tell now structure is off...

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    Haha that was str8 gangsta... haha... word. well it was good, but ive seen way better frum u man... it laced imagination... rhyems was ok but try and use some more complex ones... the 1st verse had horrible structure but u pulled it 2gether in the second and third... one thing i didnt like that much was all the dialogue in a piece... i think if u wanna do dialogue, there's a short story forum so do it in there... i liked the whole idea for this and i think it is more of a wax piece... all-in-all i think it wasnt ur best effort but was still pretty good... keep it up nigga
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    good shit.. i liked it.. keep this shit up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Word.Play
    Before i read...
    holy fuck that is long! i can tell now structure is off...

    After i read...
    Haha that was str8 gangsta... haha... word. well it was good, but ive seen way better frum u man... it laced imagination... rhyems was ok but try and use some more complex ones... the 1st verse had horrible structure but u pulled it 2gether in the second and third... one thing i didnt like that much was all the dialogue in a piece... i think if u wanna do dialogue, there's a short story forum so do it in there... i liked the whole idea for this and i think it is more of a wax piece... all-in-all i think it wasnt ur best effort but was still pretty good... keep it up nigga

    i know it could've been betta but it was just a quick song i put together in like 10 minutes

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    conecept is played an work on the vocab

    otherwise it was a good piece
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