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Thread: You Dont Really Want It

  1. #1
    G-Money
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    You Dont Really Want It

    better get off my jock, tell em.. nigga get off my jock ( motivation )
    nigga get off my jock, tell em.. nigga get off my jock ( motivation )
    nigga why dont chu get off my nigga, jus stay off my jock ( its motivation )
    pussy nigga get off my jock, nigga stay the fuck off my jock!


    *music stops* lmfao - ".... three- quarter mil you aint heard, i jsu copped that new lex haha "
    get the fuck outtta here, drop that beat!


    verse 1

    pussy the only way u gon clap is if u fuckin a derrty bitch
    u full of shit three quarter mill but cant spell worth the shit
    i never had a dude so much on my dick, u worse then a chick
    merced niggas come to ya block n take over the bricks
    i give it to u, u made me break my character n become a monster
    bout to get rid of this imposter, fuck ya crew i'll rip ya whole roster
    i tried to get ya pussy ass in a battle but u was jus too scared
    im feared, so compared to me ur weak rhymes are impaired
    u on the grind 24/7 eh? so i guess that means u hustle?
    never seen a "gangsta" on another mans love muscle
    imma "hoodie" like "russell" u cant compare to that
    u a pussy so imma call u out to get u bitch slapped
    i aint even hit u with a verbal attack, jus blowed herbals
    purple to be exact, u as much as a gangsta as urkel
    fuck ya new lex, put fear in ya eyes when u see me flex my pecs
    i demand respect thats why its tatted on my neck, mic check
    mic check one two one two fly to pittsburg wats this pussy gon do?
    dont fuck with me nigga thats taboo, go to ur avenue to show u imma guru
    u scared of me but im the least of ur worries cuz im still comin up like ronald curry
    demolish u right now? nah im in no hurry, but u aint a challenge to this wordy derrty.....
    (motivation beat stops)

    i jus wanna take this time out to apologize to all those vets who hate seein
    this shit on open mic but i had to do this shit once cuz theres only so much
    a man can take... u smell me?? i mean no disrespect to u guys but this fucker
    needed to be bitch slapped! LOL new lex that shit is still funny!!


    (G's Up Beat Starts)

    CA up! nigga PA down!
    this bitch cant swim so he gon drown
    we runnin the streets holdin our 4 pound
    u-dont-kno-us-merced-niggas-so-nigga-u-goin-down

    CA up!nigga The Flats Down!!
    these bitches cant swim so they gon drown
    we runnin the streets holdin our 4 pound
    u-dont-kno-us-merced-niggas-so-nigga-u-goin-down


    verse 2

    i got a real bitch on left nut this pussy bitch on my right
    he wonderin if he really gay cuz he thinkin of me all night
    u want me to send u picture with my autograph on it?
    the guy u love to hate u would love to be isnt that ironic
    u can waste all ur rhymes tryin to diss me missy
    too bad all ur punches will miss me, ur sexuality is fishy
    im sendin upper cuts n jabs to this lil gay fag!
    im tryin to cause mayhem, he tryin to play tag
    i aint goin back n forth, u can have support
    either way imma still make u look like a dork
    so dont ever feel the urge to merge into my spotlight
    u better get ya mind right, cuz its simple muthafucka this is my limelight


    CA up! nigga PA down!
    this bitch cant swim so he gon drown
    we runnin the streets holdin our 4 pound
    u-dont-kno-us-merced-niggas-so-nigga-u-goin-down

    CA up!nigga The Flats Down!!
    these bitches cant swim so they gon drown
    we runnin the streets holdin our 4 pound
    u-dont-kno-us-merced-niggas-so-nigga-u-goin-down

    (talkin)
    Ca up! The Flats Down nigga get it right Cali muthafucka!
    there i got my 32 bars in on this punk muthafucka hate it or love it
    dont really matter... i made my point clear on this get off my dick nigga!
    i mean u wanna see me then let me kno so u can get bitch slapped!
    otherwise dont even mention my name cuz u dont want the consequences
    that come with it! nigga i already caught ur bluff u aint no fuckin gangster
    u aint hustlin cuz if u was u wouldnt have time for this bullshit! get at me
    like a man pussy boy! brook mobb! shadowbrook projects fuck boy!
    i got out the hood but imma rep it maybe with that three quarter mill (laughin)
    u should be makin hits in the studio, oh wait u weak nigga!! u weak!! im done
    with this shit! get at me mayne!



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144622
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=142795

  2. #2
    Newbie
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    ayt i wasn't really feeling this but it could of been better. Your vocab was poor for real and your structure was kinda off key. I'm not trying to hate it was an ayt topic just need to elevate a lil. Widen yo vocab try using and exploring with different words ayt!

  3. #3
    The True Psycho of RB
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    This was an ok piece, i doubt you really put a lot of though or effort into this thats how it seemed to me just seems like you was just messing about with a couple of disses at a dude who aint worth it. Your vocab was basic so next time you write a piece try and step it up so you can create some nice imagery to your pieces also mix in some slick metaphors.
    Your flow was also basic but step it up so you can add multies into your verses this will make your verses stand out more.
    The disses in this were weak but like i said i doubt you was trying i liked the line about this guy wanting to plat tag with you that was funny.
    Next time you write just write a concept piece show us what your really all about not dissing a guy whos probably below wack.

    Return the feed on my new om id appreciate it:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235527

  4. #4
    G-Money
    Guest
    yeah fa sho... dude isnt worth all that effort so i jus threw out some garbage 32 bars but i got my point across im pretty sure but thanks for the feed i'll remember to come alot harder next time

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