dare you to top this

[KASPERtheFAKE]

yeah, my mission is putting competition out of commission
conditioned and in position, my ambition is demolition
you listen in opposition just fishin for definitions
of words that i be spittin - precision is my religion
attrition my ammunition - put transition into ignition
like a lyrical technician - or a miracle magician..
time for this rhyme to reposition
cause i'm genetically poetic - im frenetic when i spit
energetically kinetic - i'm aesthetic on this shit
K tha FAKE is not synthetic, your pathetic next to me
i break it down like its acetic - fuckin alphabetically
Again i Burned your Crippled ass; Don't you Even Follow me?
im the Greatest act since Hattrix, and I Just Kill the Lame M.c's
Now i Own this battle Palace - so i Quit Rhyming on the Streets
cause i'm the Toughest in the Underground - Van damme aint got shit on me
so next time you try to battle me, don't bother Wearing pants
plan a visit to get X-rayed - Yeah i'll carve Zorro on your ass

[Edicius]

nice flow :^)

[Trema]

nice flow :^)

word.


This piece was good you had alot of good vocab in there i can tell you have potential to be a good open mic poster. Keep it up, the structure was ayt could of been upped a lil but apart from that nice going.

[Edicius]

to bad thats all to add.

[KASPERtheFAKE]

thanx....i've been battling at tourneys for a long time now...i've been droppin free's as long as i can remember...im thankful for real cats like you - who see potential, and can respect it - not reject it.... a lot of hatin on this site, its good to see some honesty....i look forward to checkin out your posts
kasper

[Lay Doubt.]

cause i'm genetically poetic - im frenetic when i spit
energetically kinetic - i'm aesthetic on this shit
K tha FAKE is not synthetic, your pathetic next to me
i break it down like its acetic - fuckin alphabetically

dope flow. ^