.:~TOPICAL~:. - AbStRaCt vs Rap Legend (Please Vote and Close)

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

AbStRaCt vs ME
Topic - Hurricane Katrina

Good Luck

Unlimited Lines

Due any time but by tommorrow

WELL EXPLAINED VOTES YOU DONT UNDERSTAND SOMETHIN ASK OR DONT VOTE

[AbStRaCt]

checkity check check check...Gl nikka

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

.:~TOPIC - HURRICANE KATRINA~:.

Yo i flip on the televission, shit i seen Satan on a mission
a fatal destructive incision, a decision of a forcible collison
can't be judged only viewed, how the fuck can hell be so rude
destroyin innocent victims dude, livin on the streets without food
Mindz cant function, Hurricane Katrina causin much destruction
buildins fallin conjuction, Burnin deamons surround the abduction
Tears build up in mind, Cant beleive Katrina came at a forcable bind
New Orleans has gone blind, Wish Jesus wuld let all this rewind
Hurricane Katrina So Destructive, Killed Lifes it wuz so Eruptive
Killed tha Public, This shit put America in a state thats Corruptive
Natural Disaster, Served on a plate as buildings fall like Plaster
Hurricane Katrina the Deadly Master, Killin lives each second Faster
Souls gone up to heaven, how could u rate this a 5 it deserves a 7
we had many hurricanes but the hardest one that hit wuz numba 11 (k is the 11th letter in the alphabet)

Swirlin in the water, shit u killed my dads best friends daughter,
Katrina gettin put on charge for slaughter, look i just caught her
Shit floods invadin, sky turns gray trees fall ova Orleans is shading
people get sick and just start fadin, Glad u done wit we been done waitin

good luck man

[AbStRaCt]

News Reporter
"Good morning My name jane yasamotu I am here with new orleans fire department leader as he take's us thru some of the account's he has witnessed in his clean up process here in New Orleans.
Sir can you tell us the most shocking thing you have come across while on clean up in this flood rampant state"

FireFighter
"Well jane,The one thing that stands out in my mind was a diary we found a young girl clutching onto. This girl was one of many victims of the flooding here in new orleans. Strangly enough,thru all the rain and water the diary was still comprehendable.
let me read to you a few pages from this girls tourment"
Dear diary(Confused situation)

My dad wont explain to me about all the news reports,dudes distraught why so much foods been bought
everyone seems to be waiting for something like eternal damnations been thought
I tug on my dads shirt asking him what's going on? what should I prepare for?
I can hear thru his ravished lies and I can tell why his anguished eyes are scared for
he tells me "everything's ok,weather stations get it wrong 90% of the time"
But Im unsure why police are standing with guns tryna prevent Un-happening crime

Dear Diary(first sign of fate)

I awoke this morning to a noise as loud as thunder pounding on my roof
I guess now I see why my dad didnt want to tell me the truth
As I huddle in my blanket to try create a safe enviroment of love
I feel un easy with fare like a chaif inside of my blood
i shudder to think is this the start of the end of my life
I hear my parants call for me i answer with glee and pretend Im alright
I want to stay strong,cause I know the worst is yet to come
I feel like we waiting for it so i expect to run
As I take a glimpse outside I can see the truth in its puriest form
new orleans..the land of love is now a lake just been born

Dear diary(the escape attempt)

As we grab whatever we can in a flurry of fear for the worst
Last thing i recall my dad saying is stick together to stear clear of the hurst
I left the door first tryna grab onto whatever would keep me a float
My last memory of my fathers touch,was him handing me a coat
could feel water down my throat i was being chucked like leafs in a breeze
I couldnt beleive this was happening at my front door what I read about over seas
floating faster than rapid down the nile, I loose site of my dad but can still hear his voice
dont know if hes willing to save me or let me die.. i fear his choice
My visiblity isnt strong, but Im aware other's are near by being tossed and truned
is this death? im unsure if this is worse or being lossed and burned
My mind blanks out for what feels like a enternity of water swallowed
Is this the moment when my fathers daughters hollowed????


Firefighter
"So as you see,death here is as easy as one step out your front door"
New's reporter

*sniffles* "thanks for your time. Im jane yasamotu reporting for Abstract won news"

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

hmmmm. alright man good luck once again

uppin #1 plz vote and drop a link

.;~VOTE FAIRLY~:.

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

uppin #2 plz vote and drop a link

VOTE FAIRLY

[wyte boy$]

this was a dope battle...like the topic legend ur verse was sick u had perfect structure nice wordplay u were veery detailed on this verse very nice.........abstract ur verse was very creative but the structure was off work on that and u couldnt really find the end of the lines.................elevate.....

v/rap legend (beta structure and verse)
no hate

[KaRtOoN]

this 1 of the best topicalz ive seen.........legend u had good structure and multiz........but abs u had good creativity wit tha reporter.........and the diary it waz good............nyce battle but i gotta give it 2 abz nyce creativity
V-Abs

[AbStRaCt]

uppin...........numbah.....................1...... ......

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

uppin #3

plz vote fairly and drop a link

[.:~Rap~Legend~:.]

Uppin #4 comeone vote

[Inquirin Minds]

dis was actually a pretty good topical battle although dat topic was wack yall dropped pretty good but i think rap legend edged dis by a lil bit.....abstract u need 2 work on your creativity and da complexity of your verse


v/rap legend

drop a vote on a battle in ma sig

[hotshh!]

i gotta say this was close as hell
but it was a lot easier to read legends verse cus it was set up
alot more even and the flow was easier to catch
good creativity on abstrakt s part but it kinda took me a sec
to catch ur style
overall dopeness from both
v/ legend
check it a dope battel below

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Damn... I hate voting on battles like this, especially when the subject hits so close to home to me. Fuck! Be'n from New Orleans, this is a touchy one. I appreciate it though...

RL - Wow... Your verse touch'd me man. This was deep. The wordplay to the thoughtness put in it. I appreciate drops like these. It was real good. The rhyme scheme and all was there. I liked it alot.

Ab - I really liked how you caught on from different perspectives and shit. Real creavtive and witty. This was good. The word play and all was there, as well as the rhyme scheme, this one also hit close to home. Man, I hate vote'n on battles like this. Good drop homie...

No hate, but I must say this one goes to...

Vote/ Rap Legend... Good job from both though.

Please hit the links in my sig... Thanx!

[lil_t-loc]

that shit was ill legend, it flowes so clean, but i realyl liek teh creativity of abstract
if i had a damn vote, LEGEND