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Thread: Interrogation

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    Interrogation

    A mind is a terrible thing to waste on tha real
    I had to learn the hard waz before my appeal
    I waz sentenced to 3 yrs in the pin for robbery
    These fuckin fake cops investagatin botherin me
    The tryin to pump info but I'm not given them shit
    The gotta fuckin kill my ass I'm not goin out like a bitch
    They askin me questions like did I have any affileations
    I said just a couple of ppl I met when I waz RC racin
    I laugh in his face and he punches me directly in the jaw
    There waz blood drippin from my lip and I waz gonna fall
    I waz like Damn cause my jaw waz ringin like a church bell
    If the dude hit me again I'll sent this foney cop to hell
    I waz coughin up blood and the a tooth came out
    Sittin like damn he hit me hard as hell in the mouth
    He waz interrogatin me and up on me hard like white on rice
    Told me if I didn't tell him wut he wanted to hear it's 10 to life
    Sitten like damn that's a long time to be sitten in a cell and rottin
    Not eva gettinm shit good to eat and then my mouth feel like cotten
    He requested that he give me one last option he said
    If u suck my dick I'll make this whole entire case go to bed
    I waz like wut the fuck is wrong wit this dude and my heart waz racin
    Let all u thugs out there know that anything can happen in a interrogation

    To be continued....................................
    Part 2
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    Last edited by Frostbite; September 11th, 2005 at 12:02 PM

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    where ever u go their all the same, verse was aight. gd imagery and that shit bout suckin him off was fucked up! wud've bin better 2 break it up a bit 2 emphasise certain lines cos ppl hear just skim the shit.

    gd work

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    I thought it was real brave of you to put that line about the cop trying to get some head outta ya. That made it real. I agree with the other post though, I think you should have elaborated a bit more on certain points you were making. It may would have required another verse but, it would keep the reader more captivated.

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    i liked the topic not rapped about too often... verse was decent, no good vocab, didnt see much multis, couple of metas thrown in... but i would also agree u should of made it longer n got into much more detail about the cops that would of made it a lot better read... other than that nice drop keep droppin .... ~one~

    return the favor : http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=231230

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    well.....yuo had sum nice multies in here, and nice rhymes too, vocab was pretty good not all good but sum places there was sum good vocab, strucutre an flow was all good too, easy to read, medium range of lines, about perfect enought for me to accually read the whole thing, nice job man, keep it up

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    keep spitting those ausome lyrics cause man ure of the chain

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