5 barz...
Due in 2 days...
House rules...
Thats basically it.
5 barz...
Due in 2 days...
House rules...
Thats basically it.
Oh, 300 post count to vote... Thats cause of you 'lil' noob fuckers!
Kool. Listen, you didnt reply to my pm until after a day, so I wasnt aware this was guna happen. So make this due on monday by midnight.
this kids lines are cheesy, they'd only attract people like urcle
once his verse is finished, flies will have somethin new to circle
nothin special to ur lyrics, they're somethin that would never sell
so when it comes to untold, well there's just nothin to really tell
swingin n' missin, your weak verse will probably feel like a gift
its hard for this kid even punch out at the end of a fuckin shift
if u need advice with battles ill give it, but ill never touch ur flow
cuz your cities scenery can teach you better than ill ever know
your destined to doom yourself, lol I feel so terrible for this cat
disasters always behind em'
.................................so he sports his location with that hat
lol sorry about those personals
Sons got no skillz... Hes like Shaq at the free-throw line
When giv'n the chance to 'disk', he relocates his spine*
If he lost, he'd probably wine... My first line says your own'd
Fuck'n the pic in your avy is the only way you'd get to 'bone'
Having hot lines? Only in tap'd phones... I'm disconect'n you
Can't even pronounce your name, so who could be respect'n you?
Lyrically sex'n you... This is more of verbal rape on my part
Kids so dumb, he actually shops for walls when at 'Wal-Mart'
Nigga, I'm all heart... I came from a city that exists no more
How could he handle a punch.......................................?
.................................This pussy thinks the 'wind is sore'**
* - Thats saying, if he got put on a disk/ or if he diss'd... Your spine is made of disks...
** - Hes from Windsor
Any other personals or punches ya'll don't get, don't vote. G/L!
sorry i cant vote...............
but prop's to both y'all........n' i really mean dat........
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this kids lines are cheesy, they'd onl attract people like urcle
once his verse is finished, flies will have somethin new to circle
Dumb Line Not Cool
nothin special to ur lyrics, they're somethin that would never sell
so when it comes to untold, well there's just nothin to really tell
Second Line Nice
swingin n' missin, your weak verse will probably feel like a gift
its hard for this kid even punch out at the end of a fuckin shift
Didn't Make Sense
if u need advice with battles ill give it, but ill never touch ur flow
cuz your cities scenery can teach you better than ill ever know
Meh Decent
your destined to doom yourself, lol I feel so terrible for this cat
disasters always behind em'
.................................so he sports his location with that hat
Ha Lol
Sons got no skillz... Hes like Shaq at the free-throw line
When giv'n the chance to 'disk', he relocates his spine*
Good One Lol
If he lost, he'd probably wine... My first line says your own'd
Fuck'n the pic in your avy is the only way you'd get to 'bone'
Lol Nice
Having hot lines? Only in tap'd phones... I'm disconect'n you
Can't even pronounce your name, so who could be respect'n you?
Lol Nice One
Lyrically sex'n you... This is more of verbal rape on my part
Kids so dumb, he actually shops for walls when at 'Wal-Mart'
Meh First Line Okay Second Meh
Nigga, I'm all heart... I came from a city that exists no more
How could he handle a punch.......................................?
.................................This pussy thinks the 'wind is sore'**
Good Closer
Vote:Untold
i think dis was a pretty good battle from yall but shizmatic just did'nt seem 2 spit as hard as he usually does i dont know wat happened in dis battle and untold just capitalized on every 1 of your mistakes cuz...yo shit was'nt bad at all but u had some play'd lines thrown in there and untold's verse was juts good cuz he had punches and it flowed well
v/untold
Royal flush, never vote my battles again if you cant understand, probably the easiest line there is to understand.
up1
this kids lines are cheesy, they'd only attract people like urcle
once his verse is finished, flies will have somethin new to circle
nothin special to ur lyrics, they're somethin that would never sell
so when it comes to untold, well there's just nothin to really tell
vs
nothing
that wallmark line was really forced.
anyway, you both need to work on wording.
shiz had some nice concepts, but you still use that fl style.
v/shiz
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ight=Juss+Nyce
link to a very old battle that i would like closed soon.
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Schiz:
this kids lines are cheesy, they'd only attract people like urcle
once his verse is finished, flies will have somethin new to circle
nah fo real. too not funny
nothin special to ur lyrics, they're somethin that would never sell
so when it comes to untold, well there's just nothin to really tell
nyeah...but not really a punch.
swingin n' missin, your weak verse will probably feel like a gift
its hard for this kid even punch out at the end of a fuckin shift
hmm? no
if u need advice with battles ill give it, but ill never touch ur flow
cuz your cities scenery can teach you better than ill ever know
no
your destined to doom yourself, lol I feel so terrible for this cat
disasters always behind em'
.................................so he sports his location with that hat
nyeah ok i guess. your best bar. not saying a lot though
vs.
Untold:
Sons got no skillz... Hes like Shaq at the free-throw line
When giv'n the chance to 'disk', he relocates his spine*
no. disk/dissed is too forced a punch. nice concept though
If he lost, he'd probably wine... My first line says your own'd
Fuck'n the pic in your avy is the only way you'd get to 'bone'
no...should've did better with this personal. wasn't funny/witty enuff
Having hot lines? Only in tap'd phones... I'm disconect'n you
Can't even pronounce your name, so who could be respect'n you?
no statement
Lyrically sex'n you... This is more of verbal rape on my part
Kids so dumb, he actually shops for walls when at 'Wal-Mart'
..........no
Nigga, I'm all heart... I came from a city that exists no more
How could he handle a punch.......................................?
.................................This pussy thinks the 'wind is sore'**
no
Normal FL battle to me. whack fo real. ya'll need to improve your wit...try to be more funny since thats what most voters look for. if ya keep dropping corny punches like wall-mart or something, it puts the voters off. schiz had a couple of ok nyeah lines. Untold just improve wording ya punches. good here.
v/ schiz...though needs serious elevation
lmao at needs serious elivation. That verse needs serious elivation
but thanks for the vote. up3
wow, i have seen both of you do way better tha this. untold had about 1 good punch and it was his opener and then the verse pretty much fell off from there. Shiz had a couple good punches through his verse and the flow was fine so hes gettin my vote for this one.
V/ SCHIZ
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