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  1. September 1st, 2005, 05:37 AM #1
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    A4E - Action For Employment

    yO.

    A4E ... action for employment,
    drains you of all energy and enjoyment.
    your either scowering the net, or reading newspapers,
    waiting for the blond bird to find you a placement.
    this place bores me to fuck, and thats the truth,
    cos they only find you jobs that noone else wants to do.
    im here all day, looking like some fucking garden gnome,
    when i could be sat watching Bargain Hunt at home.
    & when my advisor sent me here, she musta been bluffing,
    Whys it called action for employment - when they find ya nothing?!

    It sucks, i hate this place.
    I am the rap king, that wears lots of bling,
    Im from the ghettos, of Netto.
    Its the place to be. Come down and you'll see. - Phillip Round


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  2. September 1st, 2005, 06:08 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...97#post3076997
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=228229
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    not bad but you aint got alotta rhymes, and multi rhymes shud be used. altho even if the rhymes werent great, it flowed well: always nice to have a piece that sounds good.

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  4. September 1st, 2005, 09:36 AM #4
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    Lol. Despite lacking complexity or vocab, that was a funny piece. The bargain hunt line made me laugh. If work on using more multies and maybe a wider range of vocab, as long as you keep the humour, you'll go far. Good luck with the job too.
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  5. September 1st, 2005, 10:40 AM #5
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    Thanks. Upping over all the closed threads..
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