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[Freaky Zeke]

Dogg listen to the story I'm gonna tell you
I'm been a murda for a while even been in jail too
But even when locked up I waz still on my hustle
I been doin it wit the mind not the muscle
But locked up listen to those niggas in there
Cause some not gettin out and know how to get their's
So I listened to these niggas wit life on they hand
They gave me the plan and in a week I waz the man
I waz untouchable even in the pin
Nigga I waz so connected I could get cases of HEN
I waz the nigga on top and payed my respect
Gave a little bit to the lifer to get shit off they chest
But one day they told me big ship of Coke waz comin in
But this time I made a mistake and listen to another friend
So we took it all real quick and easy
But couldn't stash it at my auntie house like Young Jezzy
Then couple day later cop found out how it went down
Cop went from cell to cell wit blood hound
The lifers told me should put the stash in the E.R
But like a dumb ass I hide it in a police car
Damn I got caught in the middle of the act
Next thing I know got night sticks in my back
Now got 10 more year I thought about it when I waz pissin
I fuck up my damn life fuck I should of listened

[Freaky Zeke]

Uppin for feed

[:.Apollo.:]

decent drop... i liked the topic...
bUT you need to up the vocab and structure...
seemed like it was off in parts

[:.Apollo.:]

stay up and keep elevatin......
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[HUSTLA J]

the rhymes were kool, liked the strucutre , im fewlin the flow and the rhymes reeally
topic was interesting and quite different but thats a good thing
this was very enjoyable to read and i think you got potential to be sumthin really big wioth your rap skills and all...good job here and keep it up, keep droppin
peace

[Freaky Zeke]

Thx ya'll uppin for more feed

[sILLable]

structure was average....wordplay and vocab could use elevation..needs complexity and some good multis...not too bad of a piece but it could have been better...keep elevatin and droppin...check out tha link in my sig titled Concrete Roses...id appreciate it.~1`

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks

[Freaky Zeke]

Kool

[Freaky Zeke]

Uppin for feed

[Murderous Venom]

decent drop... i liked the topic...
bUT you need to up the vocab and structure...
seemed like it was off in parts

thats bout wut i thought
Vocab if u need to
LEARN not just read the words out of a dictionary
cuz if u learn words they stick forever and probably
will make more scence in a battle or OM

so just up in vocab and youll do good

[Freaky Zeke]

Thx uppin

[Vikakid16]

that was tight

[MISTA GRIM]

Hey Yo Zeke This Was A Hot Piece. Unique Topic And Everything. I Liked It. I'll Check Out Your Other Dropz.
-holla-

[Freaky Zeke]

Uppin