Meet my Ego

[WordPloy]

WAKE UP!... this is open mic N’ im smoking right
Token spoken hype, batter catz wit a broken pipe
Light the skunk sip cider spit drunk shit off the box
Gansta ish 2 gunz-up screaming “FUCK THE COPS”
We survive scars N cuts, crash’ N dump cars N trucks
Plus, we got mad lusts for devilish sluts up on the nuts

I’m just marching majestically feeling about 8ft high
My chest & biceps flexed so hench I terrify passers-by
I the last Samurai assassinating 50% mc’s coz they ass is dry
Punishing pacified protesters, natural clowns, & court jesters
They sport Kevlar-vests as methods of staying alive
These idiots ain ole-skool they jus’ talkin’ that jive
I thrive in a war-zone stoned on hemp extending all weaponry
An exact abstract for “Alpha”… all rivalry fall secondary
The all-important-figure elevated more than u cud ever believe
The earth stopped spinning for 60-seconds when I was conceived
Words powerful in the scrimmage, pay homage to my rap-works
Reversing adverbs when I “punch” like Clay Cassius backwards
Bruce Lee Game of Death, acclaim The Big Boss of this shit
I burst into flames on the track like Guy Faulkes on the 5th
Star wars darker-force than “The Sith” shifting terrestrial-divisions
Competitions total pittance, I’m a Hawk amongst little-pigeons’


Word to my Ego




links


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=222404

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223023

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=222823

[catastrophic]

It started off good man, but in the middle it seemed that you were searching and words to make some of it rhyme. Don't rush it, just to get it done. Let it come to you instead. It was tight though.

[sILLable]

flowed smoothly for the most part....the middle was a little rocky...but it got better towards the end again...[the earth stopped spinnin for 60 second when i was conceived]..unless your givin your dad a ego boost..this is worded wrong...i thought this line was tight..but would ahve been tighter if you said [the earth stopped spinnin for 60 seconds when i was born]..but what ever..elevate on some aspects and practice..not too bad for a newbie though~1~

[WordPloy]

good looking.. was jus a quick freeflow u kno str6 off da heezy

im not exactly a newbie tho treezy.. haha