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Wawe
Renagade911
Wawe V.S. Renagade911
Iight Rules...
10-14 Lines
No Hate,crew,or Unexplained Votes
Blind Spit
45 Min. Deadline After Check In
Check.
Check Checkityyyyyyyyy Check Check................
check the sig nigga i will lyrically knock u out.....in 1 round
my elevation exceeds u so im above u even on level ground
this dudes like a "left" dominant boxer ur main punches dont hit "right"*
im bout to glue an "L" to ur forhead expect ur fitted to fit tight
dog u 22 years old but dont got a nick of a life i see
u rhymin is "pointless" like u wrote ur verse wit a sharpy
get a life,take ur eyes off the moniter even tho it will take all ur might
the only action this dude gets is cyber sex at 8 pm every other night
he prays to god to undo his life like when u press "right click"**
the only time u spit nasty shit is when u suckin a dick
best believe i only rock NY at the end of my necklace
its over anotha fake emcee gettin merked from texas
* a left handed boxers main punches arent right handed
**when u right click ur mouse theres an undo button
Half-assed lines that insult yourself half the time, no wonder they call you a renegade
Good thing your name's calling 911, your rhymes are in need of aid
This kid's a lyrical knockout alright, his lines put me right to sleep
Keep dreaming kid, you're not keeping your wins hid, you're just keeping your losses discreet
Like down on their luck boxers the punches you're throwing are cheap
Like a graverobber you dig up rhymes that were buried by someone last week
The grimmest reaper you've ever seen is the one sitting in your avatar
If a real demon took the time to see you it'd only be to smack you hard
Stack the cards and rack the table, this game's already over
Someone disconnect this kid's internet, let him find somewhere else to be a poser
--Meh, not my best but whatever. Good luck.
uppen this 4 votes........................................
Im gunna break this down good so can u guys both hit this fairly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...32#post2737032
RENEGADE
check the sig nigga i will lyrically knock u out.....in 1 round
my elevation exceeds u so im above u even on level ground
......nah
this dudes like a "left" dominant boxer ur main punches dont hit "right"*
im bout to glue an "L" to ur forhead expect ur fitted to fit tight
......lol
dog u 22 years old but dont got a nick of a life i see
u rhymin is "pointless" like u wrote ur verse wit a sharpy
......lol ok
get a life,take ur eyes off the moniter even tho it will take all ur might
the only action this dude gets is cyber sex at 8 pm every other night
......lol
he prays to god to undo his life like when u press "right click"**
the only time u spit nasty shit is when u suckin a dick
.....no
best believe i only rock NY at the end of my necklace
its over anotha fake emcee gettin merked from texas
.......weak closer
4/10
WAWE
Half-assed lines that insult yourself half the time, no wonder they call you a renegade
Good thing your name's calling 911, your rhymes are in need of aid
.....weak personal
This kid's a lyrical knockout alright, his lines put me right to sleep
Keep dreaming kid, you're not keeping your wins hid, you're just keeping your losses discreet
......nah
Like down on their luck boxers the punches you're throwing are cheap
Like a graverobber you dig up rhymes that were buried by someone last week
.....ok
The grimmest reaper you've ever seen is the one sitting in your avatar
If a real demon took the time to see you it'd only be to smack you hard
......nlo
Stack the cards and rack the table, this game's already over
Someone disconnect this kid's internet, let him find somewhere else to be a poser
.....weak poser
Vote: Renegade just because he made me laught
Elivate both of you and please hit that battle link fairly
Wawe u waz nice wit the flow but Renegade killed it wit his punches and vocab.
v/Renegade
i gotta give it to renagade for way better punches,personals,and structure.
v//r
Uppen#2 Votes Plz Dont Sleep On This................
Uppen #3 Lets Go Wit Sum Votes Yall...............
I likes that battle! Both mc's did their thing
Renegades verse was more exciting and appealing to me
punches-renegade
flow-both
creativeness-renegade
MYVOTE: Renegade911
Ren: pretty decent flow, some dope punches (like the sharpie pen one), alright closer and opener
Wawe: your lines seemed kinda long which threw off your flow, your punches didn't seemed to hit hard enough, same with your personals, but a decent closer, try and work on your punches
my vote: renegade for harder punches and better flow
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