I Doubt you been Laid

[Chrit.]

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Talkin loads of hard shit but really hoe ya garbage
The talented leave the net...
...you stalk me on aim braggin bout stayin on it
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!
Ya last words aint shit, pry sayin ya signed, herb
I no showed on purpose, i aint one t' assault a minor
Dont box with a legend... hot lines? I've written mine
While you just end up bitin.... severely bitten lines
I'll out-box, and while you'll just come and talk soft.... since
u on hens so bad, ya always beatin cocks off
And dog.... ya friends turned, now I'm fixin to pound
a blow hard so hard $pits drippin outta ya mouth

Homo....




Replied to:
something er another.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post2730115
yeah... that kids sucked

[Chrit.]

Key lime pie eatin ass cuntwaffles

[Cels]

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!
Dont box with a legend... hot lines? I've written mine
While you just end up bitin.... severely bitten lines
And dog.... ya friends turned, now I'm fixin to pound
a blow hard so hard $pits drippin outta ya mouth


Seriously though...

Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!


*DEAD*

[$pitacular]

ha ha

some nice stuff in there.. coulda been done a lil better but obviously it was keyed...

rewording woulda helped. lets see if Lay answers..

[aiyo. it's Lay.]

coo.

[Devastator™]

Wow the personals were just oozing out of this.... nice little drop for a keystyle... and $pits sig is pretty sick btw...

[Devastator™]

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Stop freeposting faggot. Don't you think thats one reason you got banned the FIRST time?

[Kaput Mundi]

Nice.Solid verse Chrit.

[Born To Kill]

The whole thing was nice...

I must have missed something...

Guess I'll hear about it later.

Good work, looks quickly typed...but still effective as hell.

Peace

[Sinamatik]

Guess we've got some crew beef, eh?...Dope..Personals were hitting, the 9 weeks line was tight...Decent drop...

[Baron Mynd]

Lol at the IP line, that was dope. Rest was cool. I liked the 'assault a minor' line actually ..

[aemeth]

This was decent at best, but nah..

IP line was ok, not great tho, i mean it just doesnt come off as a punch to me..

hen line is played as fuck, try to avoid that ish..

but, i mean, ive seen a lot worse, so keep droppin, stay up..

6/10

[Crysis Manson]

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!


I second that this was also a decent drop but it could have been reworded to make it some what of a smoother flow. Alright though for a quick drop.

[Chrit.]

^^^

You need to understand flow before you knock it

[gierson]

ok drop strongest line : Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic

weakest:Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....

on my perspective it was good but i dont know about the title