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Thread: Half Lyricist/Half Genuis

  1. #1
    Vertikle
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    Half Lyricist/Half Genuis

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    Half Lyricist/Half Genuis


    The flowing measures, take me for granted, pain is growing lesser.
    Rising high, above thousands of mountains and showing pressure.
    My loathing pesters, my gun clicks, ready to dump clips.
    I'm hot as fuck and plus I sit higher up then the sun sits.
    Some bitch, others take..life's like protected sex, mothers hate.
    It spreads fast and quick, like sperm when the rubber breaks.
    Mothafucker's fake and doubt me, but I continue to grow.
    If ya think you've seen it all, I've got another venue to show.
    Meant to crush foes, crack heads, leave the stage waxed red.
    Getting on stage to battle me..means your already passed dead.
    Facts fed, it's getting heat heated and making the beat beated.
    Leave the fucking strong hungry and leaving the weak feeded.
    I peak seeded as a tiny sprem, in the womb, climbing ferns.
    I open my eyes, to my suprise it seemed the timing burns.
    I came out to grasp cleaness, wit 2 balls and a fat penis.
    Not my fault, I was born a half lyricist and half genuis.

  2. #2
    Vertikle
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    upping for some feedback.........it's not a freestyle either, it's a verse to my next track.................pz

  3. #3
    The Vendetta
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    Decent Piece Man Kind Of Was Feeling The Flow, But Vocabulary Wasn't To Decent Here Man, And Structure Needs To Be Elevated On, Try Adding Some Wordplay In here It'll Help Out The Flow, And Also, Your Forcing Words Here Try Not To Do That So Much, Just Let It Flow Out And Re Arange The Syllable Count That's Why It's Being Forced, To Much Syllable's Here Man, Over All Decent Piece Man

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    nice flow and rhyme scheme main...pretty good fosho, its a rap packed wit hardcore
    dope internal rhymes,
    could of done with a hook and another verse to make it a dope song.. wordplays on-point... i dont know what else whatever main iz coo
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  5. #5
    Vertikle
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    thanx ya'll uppin

  6. #6
    Vertikle
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    uppin

  7. #7
    Vertikle
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    uppin for the last time today

  8. #8
    Vertikle
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    thanx for 2 of the same replies lol

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