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    Generic Love Poetry

    I've been a mess
    Idle under the sheets
    counting the grains of love
    beading through my dreams
    and into the tremble of my fingertips
    when you're
    simply near.

    Against the midnight hue
    And velvet thickness of dreams shattered
    My hands reach out to you
    And suddenly, nothing matters.

    Put my dreams of us
    On the highest shelf
    So I can climb for this love
    And prove myself.
    Although many wrongs I've commited
    The only hell that I can see
    is the very thought,
    of you not being with me.


    Sorry for the tears
    Dampening our relationship
    and making it sink
    But i'll glady forget about
    any past vices
    without any recitals of a blink.

    What inspires me? The fact that
    you hardly know me,
    and everytime I see you walking
    its like i'm reading poetry.

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    Damn Mac this was great.. The first stanza was awesomebecause the imagery in it was just so gripping and it pulled you into the story and everything.. I really liked the whole imagery intertwined with emotion it gave the poem some kind of something that just made me want to read more and more..

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