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    ..The uknown massacre of Mankind

    .. ` Death for all who interviens and goes against them `
    The breath of genes, Means the smallest life's sentenced
    To be amongst the presence of anticultured sentients..
    My breath stinks saying these words, `I'm a burden to y'all`
    Trying to withstand embarasment at only 3 feet tall..
    ..But it's the call of duty, Even the enemy's admited
    That the crushing of smaller races is most definetly being pittied
    At hard times we try being witty, ` Laugh at the face of it `
    ..How hard it is to try let alone having succes in it!
    Two worlds, one war and lord knows how many lifes!
    ..Times two, add a few if you can count their kids and wifes
    We're only numbers, we have no names in such situations..
    ..Should we be humbled dying by side of one of Mankinds religeons
    We sit and wait, Demize is late and i'm starting to feel anxious
    ` I want to die allready dammit ` Awaiting the calls of our Masters
    The city roads crack, the public crying starts to scream..
    The lack of faith in our society has made us lose our will to dream
    I hear it coming.. We are an Army of Mans finest..
    In a trench i sit not far away from where a land mine is

    They came, I saw, We took our orders marching to our deaths
    This dream i had of dying once was De Ja Vu at its best..

    .. ` Death for all who interviens and goes against them `
    I took a breath of genes, Men sentenced to hells bedlum
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    ..Shit, I'll leave 2 links in the morning when i have time to read other respected heads pieces!
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    i'll take your word for it.

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    i'll take your word for it.


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    i liked this topic.. i could relate to it well... i thought you had nice word choice... and being the first time ive read from yuo it seemed very original.. very nice work here.. you have alight touch on this and i liekd you style... keep it up.

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    i thought this piece was ill.....i liked tha wordplay and tha rhyme scheme....i liked tha multis you used....it was very consistent....you used ill vocab,i liked this alot cause of the originality and creativity of this piece,i thought some of the bars ran on too long but not too many...other than that this piece was ill....keep droppin tha hotness.~1~


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    dawg

    this was short as fuck!

    why didnt you called me in, i should have dropped a line or 12

    but this was sweet..

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