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    Fee's of Freedom

    Apparently we’ve won? So why is one free from freedom?
    Pleads run, tons of children dead some leave numb
    These numb now with shiver hate mind model deliberate
    Picture stakes their faith stating fine god’ll deliver fate
    Sinners wake to burned souls to start the ending
    Soon enough it takes it toll as hearts are repenting
    Imagine If I had a quarter, for If ever we’ve starved
    Just sever these memories and let pleasures be carved
    Constant headaches as my words passes through phases
    Now casting new ages like asking for due payments
    Weekly eviction notices exposing self righteousness
    Took misfortune by the hand felt the lifeless kiss
    Nights a bitch with a fire-arm and bulletproof vest
    Always fit the description, do I suit the truth? Yes
    Recruit the youth confess to extend the corpses smell?
    The Battlefields a reflecting mirror of an enormous hell
    What source propelled blood and pain to rewind?
    Had an insane design, shit... wait I changed my mind
    Thieves fight masses of peace summoned light crashes
    the moment of truth we know it’s coming like taxes
    Terrorist sitting Indian style in a candle lit basement
    These Hide outs strikes me as a vandal’s vacation
    No problem ride a camel? Be in bombing these days
    Sounds better then being a victim to common cliché’s
    Always reminded ‘a mind is terrible thing to waste’
    Just horrible how the biography teacher’s define this place

    links:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...55#post2581655

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post2581639
    Last edited by E Tha Real; June 19th, 2005 at 01:12 AM

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    damn that whole verse was straight fire to me, great wordplay used and i understood what you were gettin at

    Nights a bitch with a fire-arm and bulletproof vest
    Always fit the description, do I suit the truth? Yes
    Recruit the youth confess to extend the corpses smell?
    The Battlefields a reflecting mirror of an enormous hell
    ^^very nicely written, my fav lines there, mad props

    What source propelled blood and pain to rewind?
    Had an insane design, shit... wait I changed my mind
    ^^didn't really feel those lines, unless this was a freestyle that line wouldn't work too well

    overall i give this a 8/10, nice work

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    You need to leave better feedback. Closed.
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