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  1. June 9th, 2005, 11:25 PM #1
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    Zealot Army

    The two-step of a cardboard evangelist
    Encapsulated by the pumping of 12 thousand fists
    Amidst the dreary iron curtains draped from the sky
    Releasing droplets of "oh, when God cries"
    Spotlight for a daemon jester, juggling fates and souls
    The glimmer of anti-god meets his corneas,
    Yea..not a fucking one of those peons know.

    A snicker
    A grin
    Malevolant minister, preaching falsified things
    A cackle
    A scream
    Flame flickered sermons, clip away angel wings.

    Wolf teeth are bared, and the myth unfolds
    Absorbed by false pretenses, every single soul grows cold
    Slowly..dripping..out..of..the...physical..realm
    Driven..deeper..into..solitude..with..this..miscre ant..at..the..helm.
    Sent by satan, and humanities fate is locked
    When agony pierces out of his mouth, like a pandora's box
    Zealots created, benevolant dreams creamated
    An army of hell-mongers crusading against what God created.
    Built by false hopes, instilled pandemic of the pandora box
    Stabbing the blood-soaked cross down where people talk
    Until blood and brimstone gurgle up
    And your larynx and voicebox become stuck
    And you're forced to become another zealot
    And every sacred journey you've dreamed will be for naught,
    when you're just another piece of jewelry, in Pandora's box.

    Tick Tock
    Tick Tock
    The clock of fate is winding down
    And you can't do....
    ...nooothing...aboooouuutttt it.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post2538331
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51#post2538351
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  2. June 10th, 2005, 05:55 PM #2
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    cool beans mac. i havent seen you around in a good while, great topic and a very cool way to approach it. very interesting read. written very nicely. pretty crazy stuff here mac i never read anything like this from you. i really feel the ergency in this. nicely done too back kids are sleeping on you.
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  3. June 10th, 2005, 06:42 PM #3
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  4. June 10th, 2005, 09:57 PM #4
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    This was some pretty evil shit man lol. I could feel the horror in it, and the imagery with the jester at the beginning juggling souls and such was perfect. The horror was beyond perfect. Seemed a little poetic, with the rhyme scheme...but overall the flow was top notch and the vocabulary was very extensive. Very descriptive as well...imagery was actually tremendously scary throughout it all...

    Good frightening piece...

    Rate - 9/10

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  5. June 11th, 2005, 04:06 PM #5
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    this is the type of shits im talkin' bout yo.. str8 on point

    lots of hot in here... ha... bring on the war... ARMAGEDON!!!!!!...RAGE RAGE RAGE

    Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  6. June 12th, 2005, 01:43 AM #6
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  7. June 12th, 2005, 04:47 PM #7
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