10+ lines
ill go first
due within next 24h hours
no c/v
h/v
d/r
ight g/l
10+ lines
ill go first
due within next 24h hours
no c/v
h/v
d/r
ight g/l
check.............................................
checky checzh check
i guess since LLL wont put up with you, you perade F.L like a bitch
and its not that newb's find you good everyone else just lost interest
i guess Aines finally found his true calling now he's addicted to chrit
in all honesty ur better of banned son so we wont ave to suffer ur shit
like fat fucks at weight watcher's this bitch is yearnin for *lightweight*
its ironic how this bitch rep's Animosity yet he still intends "no hate"
dont even see ur name in Elite not surprisin even in F.l u got no hope
F.L is a battle area not a circus ring but i see y u walk the tight rope
your text careers predictable writen out for u like the back of a leaflet
this aint no pornographic site but still Aines is a bitch it aint no secret
only one good thing came of you cus in fairness you have consistancy
i duno how u do it but ur shit is just as wack now as it was back in '03
its amazin like althletes breakin records how this bitch prey's on a newb
but see's his dreams wither like his punches devourd like B.K's fast food
give it up Aines cus the only thing you've master on this site is freepostin
f'real we wouldnt feel your presence even if your verse was ghost written
get back on Aim bitch gather your congregation show em who's sick
............so called 'vet' the only time he's held his own
..................................was in his left clenchin his dick....bitch
^^weak f'real but whatever
if you dont get the verse then dont vote
Called out Fit Decent(chrit)
Admitted to being -Twizted-'s Slave
His Alias is street play
He lost to lil solja in topical, and is now losing to her in text
This kids nuffin but washed up talent,his flows dried out
A name full of numbers, even he's beginning to doubt
Owned by my fellow crew member, your already beat
droppin 2 bars agaisnt ur verse,has u admittin defeat
Victorys sweet,you got beat by a girl,damn yo jus quit
*peeps ur verses*you got more chance beatin her sayin
called out chrit,haha who do you think you are? a vet?
Chrit > lil solja, and you told her to give up text
Your lines suck dont even start this kid ive diminished
Cause how you gone be called 321...
..........................................but never get to finish
meh didnt no i cud do more than 10 but this wot i drew up
u cum beta dan expected even tho some of ya shit aint true
n e ways
uppin
32123 - Your opener was aight, but I've seen it before in a very similar form. The animosity line was a good concept, but worded very poorly that it wasn't effective. Rewording could have made it much harsher. Then you had a lot filler like that tight rope shit, I don't know what that was. Finally, I can't prove it cause the lines are a little different, but I think you bit that closer... FROM ME! I just posted that same concept in my battle against Rule yesterday except mine was worded better, lol. I should hope you aren't stupid enough to bite someone that you know would likely read this battle, so I'll assume the best. You tried, but too much filler.
Aines - You really should have matched him. No reason not to, you had more time to write. Your closer was decent I guess. Most of your shit wasn't that direct like street's. I liked your concepts better and though most of them just needed rewording to be more effective. Don't worry about personals so much man, you forced a lotta shit. Personals are great only if they're easy to get without explanation and you had to explain yours so nah.
Close one, but I think Aines said more in 10 lines than street said in more
Vote - Aines
Please return the favor, thanks
aines- punches hit hard,personals were decent structure was good and overall flow wuz str8.
32123- punches weren't as hard,personals were better structure was a lil off overall flow wuz decent.
v/aines last punch wuz nice...............Cause how you gone be called 321...
..........................................but never get to finish
uppin
meh bumpty 1
i guess since LLL wont put up with you, you perade F.L like a bitch
and its not that newb's find you good everyone else just lost interest
nice
i guess Aines finally found his true calling now he's addicted to chrit
in all honesty ur better of banned son so we wont ave to suffer ur shit
decent
like fat fucks at weight watcher's this bitch is yearnin for *lightweight*
its ironic how this bitch rep's Animosity yet he still intends "no hate"
decent
dont even see ur name in Elite not surprisin even in F.l u got no hope
F.L is a battle area not a circus ring but i see y u walk the tight rope
ok
your text careers predictable writen out for u like the back of a leaflet
this aint no pornographic site but still Aines is a bitch it aint no secret
basic
only one good thing came of you cus in fairness you have consistancy
i duno how u do it but ur shit is just as wack now as it was back in '03
good personal
its amazin like althletes breakin records how this bitch prey's on a newb
but see's his dreams wither like his punches devourd like B.K's fast food
basic
give it up Aines cus the only thing you've master on this site is freepostin
f'real we wouldnt feel your presence even if your verse was ghost written
basic
get back on Aim bitch gather your congregation show em who's sick
............so called 'vet' the only time he's held his own
..................................was in his left clenchin his dick....bitch
Basic ender
6/10
This kids nuffin but washed up talent,his flows dried out
A name full of numbers, even he's beginning to doubt
Miss.didnt even ryme.bad opener
Owned by my fellow crew member, your already beat
droppin 2 bars agaisnt ur verse,has u admittin defeat
basic
Victorys sweet,you got beat by a girl,damn yo jus quit
*peeps ur verses*you got more chance beatin her sayin
called out chrit,
okhaha who do you think you are? a vet?
Chrit > lil solja, and you told her to give up text
nice personal
Your lines suck dont even start this kid ive diminished
Cause how you gone be called 321...
..........................................but never get to finish
decent closer
5/10
close battle. 321 took this one tho, with harder punches & better wordplay
v/ 321
will drop a poll vote when you return the favor.thx
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Originally Posted by Vaskez
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bumpty
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aines nuff said
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