12-14 lines (had to change it)
no crew votes
no hate votes
no dick riding
no recyclingU DROP 1st
Diseptence
cRiMiNaLmInDeD
12-14 lines (had to change it)
no crew votes
no hate votes
no dick riding
no recyclingU DROP 1st
and yo diseptence, drop ur verse 30 minutes after u check in aight..peace
no im not dropping again u just dont want to get ur loss im getting mods to close this one.
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ayo MODS close dis thread cuz "diseptence" dont wanna drop his verse, its been like 3 days already....
oopz i thought that this was a diff verse ill spit man this is my check.
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aight then, i'll spit right after u drop ur verse....
yo......... weres tha battle?
h@ze, diseptence is about to drop his verse, so dont worry
I eat niggas for Lunch and eat the when i wake up for Breakfast.
Cant touch this,Or i'll leave your ass hanging out at the altor for baptist!.
Im On a merking Spree and wath Out Your Next on My list.
Because when i read your verse it was fully off and couldn't even make one diss.!
Listen kid ur seriously "Pathetic" For yourself When it comes To Emcee Battling.
Your on a "Elevation" level just Row,Row,Row you boat and keep on "Paddling"!
Your CriminalMinDeD But the only felony u have done was write pure "Wackness"
Sometimes I get So "Scared" When i read ur "Stupid" Verse it gives me "Scare Tatics!"
Your From New Britain Thats were all The Wannabes Like At.
Your even one of them But ur even whacker u got Tought badder u just Came "Flat!"
Your siggy Says ur in "Da Navy" So Swim in tha water Nigga And Fetch me A "Stone".
Oh No!,Ur too Slow,Go join The "Slow Team" And let "Da Navy" Be "Post Poned!".
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Oopz few mistakes
verse 3 its watch not wath
verse 4 i mean-it was fully off and YOU couldnt even make one diss.
verse 8-Like=Live. i made that mistake..
sorry im tired anyways.
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Owned.
That shit was alright... but i have seen better
wtf when u gonna spit.
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1.u made a few mistakes, and that might of costed u this match/Originally Posted by Diseptence
2.u make yaself sound like a little bitch from tha cabbage patch/
3.u run around thinkin' u hot, well u must be insane/
4.cuz tha only time u hot is if u got a bullet in ya brain/
5.Diseptence u need to retire, ur presence is gettin' old/
6.i'm worse than a common cold, i'm a virus u cant control/
7.so dont think u could handle me, cuz u cant hold me down/
8.Da Navy takin' over bitch, so move outta town/
9.when u spit flows on this site, u got suffocating crowds/
10.so when i rip u, u dead and ya head is in tha clouds/
11.I'm so special, u had to BOLD my user name/
12.u lost this battle, u got ya spelling errors to blame.
UPPIN' FOR VOTES!!!
Haha...Upping.#1
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gotta vote diseptance... came way harder with his verse, and had punchlines and wordplay that were way better than next dude verse, like certain concepts you used, was feeling the flow to it. structure was ok, but i know ya style and ya flow so its good homie, had good consistency in rhyme, get my vote for having the overall better verse hands down........
crim.... wasnt feeln ya verse homie, 1st off i thought you were breakn down diseptance verse, till i saw you attempting at disses, didnt work for you homie, work on more a bettere rhyme scheme... not feeln ya punches, and stop with numbering your lines, looks really wack, just work on it homie......
vote/---------Diseptence
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