Aiight... Basic rules...
No D/R
No hate
No crew
No swaying
No feeding
No biting
No non-explainded votes
10 lines max
Due 1 hr. after check in. If you need more time, let me know...
Aiight... Basic rules...
No D/R
No hate
No crew
No swaying
No feeding
No biting
No non-explainded votes
10 lines max
Due 1 hr. after check in. If you need more time, let me know...
Also, I made it for only people with 200 posts or more can vote. I don't want too many newb's who don't know what there talking about posting votes. Holla!
Aight sounds good...........................
Good Luck Man
Yo, remember to check in... The post you just put, don't make that your check in. I'd like to know when your ready... This is my check in as well... Checkity, check, check, check...
I think the shit I posted above counts as a checkin cause I said it sounded good but whatever
Check it..............
Yea, if it was, my bad... Its just niggas put shit like that and then post and I have no clue it was a check in... Sorry. G/L!
Am I your fucking idol or something the way you rep Truth in your custom title? LOL.......
Fat as fuck n' uglier than mold, no one's ever called you lean
Some things are better left untold... you're better off unseen!
And I'm sorry to be mean, but I'll leave the fag bleedin n shit
In this battle I'm taking the lead.... and stabbing you with it!
Go leave n' just quit, girls run up to you and then just split
His idea of a blind date......... is with an actual blind bitch!
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
Calling out vets n' such, they've all thrown you in the crapper
Since when does lots of LOSING ever make ya a better rapper?
If You Don't Get The Personals, Don't Vote
Yea...
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
After finding out preists abusing children, he quickly converts
Hes Afraid to come out of the closet because "DaTrus hurtz"
This nigga couldn't dick ride votes if he was fucked by a car
And your legs stay opened longer than the pic in your avatar*
This niggas so upset saying my words are evil and malicious
'Da trus' is my rhymes will slaughter you and your military militia*
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
Any lines with "*" means explanation is in his sig/avatar. If you don't get it, don't vote... Good luck...
Fat as fuck n' uglier than mold, no one's ever called you lean
Some things are better left untold... you're better off unseen!
And I'm sorry to be mean, but I'll leave the fag bleedin n shit
In this battle I'm taking the lead.... and stabbing you with it!
Go leave n' just quit, girls run up to you and then just split
His idea of a blind date......... is with an actual blind bitch!
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
Calling out vets n' such, they've all thrown you in the crapper
Since when does lots of LOSING ever make ya a better rapper?
^^Meh, THis verse was decent if anything, I really wasnt feelin it. Coulda been alot better. Keep elevating.
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
After finding out preists abusing children, he quickly converts
Hes Afraid to come out of the closet because "DaTrus hurtz"
This nigga couldn't dick ride votes if he was fucked by a car
And your legs stay opened longer than the pic in your avatar*
This niggas so upset saying my words are evil and malicious
'Da trus' is my rhymes will slaughter you and your military militia*
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
LoL, Pretty good verse son, There were a few lines in here I liked, Just work on multis and better wording and u'll be alot better.
V/Untold
Just for having a better verse. And harder punches
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
vs
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
both those were pretty witty & humorous. since its tied as far as quotables, comparing the overall verses.. i'd have to say that untold barely edged this one out. barely. Trus had too much filler, and it hurt him.. untold had some pretty corny lines, but overall he was more consistent.. therefore..
v/ Untold
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched
^ Dope bar right there.
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
^ Your best bar.
Quotables
Go leave n' just quit, girls run up to you and then just split
His idea of a blind date......... is with an actual blind bitch!
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
Vs
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'
Not a bad battle. Trus edged this though.
V/ Datrushurtz
wow voting is so weird on this site
v/DaTrusHurtz.....because
His punches connected way more, and his shit was witty and consistant, he made me laugh a lil bit.......Untold, your verse made me want to stop reading, you word your punches horrible and you were way off topic frfom him, talking about priests fuckin kids n shit, you on some other shit....
Fat as fuck n' uglier than mold, no one's ever called you lean
Some things are better left untold... you're better off unseen!
N' I have had enough of your shit, your callouts are too much
And when great mindz collide....... your STILL left untouched!
VS
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
Trus came more consistent, could of been closer if untold didn't make his verse so complex/forced. overall decent battle for FL though.
Vote: DaTrus
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=1&pp=15
drop an honest vote to RTF.
I'd rather blow off both of my ears than hear your bickering
Only thing thats 'straiight' about you is your '21 victories'*
After finding out preists abusing children, he quickly converts
Hes Afraid to come out of the closet because "DaTrus hurtz"
This nigga couldn't dick ride votes if he was fucked by a car
And your legs stay opened longer than the pic in your avatar*
This niggas so upset saying my words are evil and malicious
'Da trus' is my rhymes will slaughter you and your military militia*
Your rhymes leave me crying like chopped onions... Their sad
After asked how it was battling untold, he says "It hurts... Bad"*
YO DAMN I DIDNT THINK UNTOLD WAS GOING TO RESPOND THIS NICE ITS OBVIOUS UNTOLD GOT THIS CAUSE THE TRUTH VERSE WAS TOO PLAIN!!!!!!!!
Yo Rtf Against Sonic Some1 Put The Last Nails In His Cuffin!!!!!!!!!!!
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