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sorry about last post....i messed up
th-C
SPitSNake
8- 10 lines
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sorry about last post....i messed up
ill spit First CHECk
you just Droped real Wack Shit, you must oF Wrote This on the Toliet//
im scorching while ill put u In my joint torching Cuz i smoked this battle//
This guy was Born White but His ass is Black, couldnt get a Girl even if his Mom was on crack//
Im in fame and Fortune while this Bitch is in SHame in poorness//
im to Hot For Rb, THis Cat is ugly on the SHOw opira winpray(what ever that show is called)//
My punchline are landed giveing you Cuts, someone stop the battle and Rush this Fag To first aid//
if you get any votes then its pure hate just like Brintey spears Chest plates//
Good Luck wit your verse......you prolly merk meh
you gonna Drop yours or whaty?//////////////////////////////////////
I was shaving, check.
by the way, you just couldn't make the thread title correct, couldn't you...?
It'll be up in 20..
yah lol......sorry about the title my bad.....i must oF been Triping....w/e i got Poll Up and ppl well see that where battling when the open Link
GOod luck wit yo drop
yo times up but w/e just finish it soon cuz i wanna read it befor i go to bed
keying...
pay close attention and follow, I'll have a "w" by day-tomorrow..
funny this kid actually think he SPitS.... but he always swallows..
and he always borrows the weakest lyrics to use against foes..
so why try with effort when he got small game like new nintendos..
got the best flow, theres no way he gettin through with no harm..
I do the damage cause a SNake can't throw punches with no arms..
personals or not I don't care what was needed to overcome this..
dumb bitch, you couldn't have wordplay if you made a pun list..
man I'll smash till his bones break because this kid is a known shame..
really, SNake has been played out since .....the Nokia phone game..
20 minutes.
uppin FOr some VOtes I wil RTF like Always
upppppppppppppppppppinnn
okay lets see what we have here.
you just Droped real Wack Shit, you must oF Wrote This on the Toliet//
im scorching while ill put u In my joint torching Cuz i smoked this battle//
weak opener doesnt even make sense
This guy was Born White but His ass is Black, couldnt get a Girl even if his Mom was on crack//
Im in fame and Fortune while this Bitch is in SHame in poorness//
extreamly weak doesnt even rhyme or make sense. Terrable personal
im to Hot For Rb, THis Cat is ugly on the SHOw opira winpray(what ever that show is called)//
My punchline are landed giveing you Cuts, someone stop the battle and Rush this Fag To first aid//
if you get any votes then its pure hate just like Brintey spears Chest plates//
weak closer and too long doesnt flow together. And if u dont know what u talkin about then dont speak
Vs.
pay close attention and follow, I'll have a "w" by day-tomorrow..
funny this kid actually think he SPitS.... but he always swallows..
very nice opener I'm feelin this (especially the spit & swallow thing)
and he always borrows the weakest lyrics to use against foes..
so why try with effort when he got small game like new nintendos..
nice metaphore good word play but not strong hitting
got the best flow, theres no way he gettin through with no harm..
I do the damage cause a SNake can't throw punches with no arms..
again good word play better punch line too
personals or not I don't care what was needed to overcome this..
dumb bitch, you couldn't have wordplay if you made a pun list..
okay but not really feelin it
man I'll smash till his bones break because this kid is a known shame..
really, SNake has been played out since .....the Nokia phone game..
excellent closer it's true too (the nokia thing)
Th-C easilly won this battle. he had better wrod play better punchlines and he added a couple of metephores. U dont see that very often usually just punch lines. Metaphores are hard to do and make sound good.
V/ Th-C
TO ALL VOTERS...... Please fully explain your pulls "I want real feedback".
Thats why I'm here. I wanna know what u LIKE and what u DONT like so I can better addapt to the vibe of the people "U feel me". I'm trying to perfect my lyrics and graduate to higher level "So I would appreaciate a FULLY EXPLAINED VOTE". Explain both opponents not just mine niether it's not just about me.
THANKYOU
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vote = the C, easy, he had punches, spits had nothing..
one sided battle like woah
pretty one sided i think
Th-C got this
hands down
up.....................................................
i like the c punches c had so i think it go's to him
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