my basic rulez
due in 30 min afta check in NO LATER
20 lines max
your call out you spit first
MCrump
~G~
my basic rulez
due in 30 min afta check in NO LATER
20 lines max
your call out you spit first
yo gd battle yestarday.. shame i got dq fuckin tehincatlites n rules lol
kk this is my check in nd ima spit now
New to this site, dont no "shit"//
Dont no the peeps, only no a "bit"//
Battling this guy, cant say shit about "him"//
Dont even no him, jus no he's abit "dim"//
Got punches and multies, got shit on "lock"//
Metas and my flow, rappin through the "block"//
U dunno ure "left-to-right", ill snap u like a "pencil"//
Thas y your "scribbles-aint-tight", u write them wit a "pencil"//
Ill flip u up side down, flipside, "reverse-u"//
"murk-u-hurt-u" do damage when i "stab-u"//
thas shit jus some thin of the top of my head
yo that was weak work on theructure n stuff my friend... ur puches missed none laned.....u need to elevate.. u gunna get murked on this battle... gs to good... g we need to tlk my friend
ayo checkin in....
since you typed so little i will too.....
ayo
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Listen MCrump, I can merk you, crush you throughout many days
You didn't answer last week, cause ya figured i'd beat you anyways
Your words are worthless, kinda like a garbage heap
You can't afford a win, so i know your talk is cheap
Dont get it twisted, cause you had me last week, fag..
Yeah you'll be known, when i stomp your head into the front lines mag
Thats the only way you'll get there dude, cause your games near wack
Queer, I'll leave ya disarranged until your featured in a 'Disturbed' track
You can't beat me, you cant even step to me, dude you aint hood
So I'll leave enough bruises on ya to make Monica Turner look good
I'd say your stupid, idiot you need a reality check
I'm aiming high this week, so like Wu, you better protect your neck
Yeah you said your nice, but guess what fag, I didn't even ask
But Im dope, and y'know what they say, nice guys finish last.
nice G
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uppin votez-1
yo i felt gs more ya heard... this was his battle from teh begging i knwew that.. but her only beat me cause i got dqed for 1 line ova the limit.. lol but he wont this
yo G u know u didnt have to go THAT postal on his ass but... nice battle overall g clearly took it but MCrump will get better through time no doubt...my vote would go to G if i could vote
uppin votez-2
aHY YO, ~g~ ITS YA BOY GOOD SPITTIN MAN KEEP UP THE GOOD WORKIN PIMPIN
do i really need to explain my vote lol... a bit one sided if u ask me... ~G~ you had some good shit in there structure is good... next time u battle try to use more complex vocabulary it will make it sound better..
yo the other guy came as wack as hell u really need to elevate man start battling cats that are on your level keep at it though becuz u will improve...
v/ ~G~
rtf link in the sig.... pz
if i could vote it would b G cuz MC your spit waz just plain out WEAK u really need to ELEVATE u didnt have good punchez and your structure waz terrible
good battle G
v/G
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
pretty one sided.
MCrump- too simple here. good flow. need more length to ur lines. and ur vocab was way to simple. i've heard shit like that alot. get a lil more creative. and work on punches homie. make them hit. not threats. keep elevatin.
G- good job homie. good flow. good structure. vocab was aight. a lil creative. i've seen better but i guess u really didn't need much on this. sum good punches. ur really startin to understand the punches nowadays. i like it. good job. keep it up homie. peace out homie.
v// if i could it'd be G. plain and simple his was more complex and better overall. better punches and more creative. better vocab. u feelin me. now...I'M OUT.
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